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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Chapter:3
it was a Last Day of a very special bunch of Friends at the Place where their Friendship officially Got a Name , They were going to be graduated from space today, everyone Normally came to college at their Normal Timing , Nandini also arrived , she was looking very pretty and cute in her White Crop top and blue denim shorts , she was wearing a pair of high wedges and her sunglasses were on , her hair were Opened up casually.
She saw alia also parking her car , they both hugged each other and The 2 hotties went inside together , Every guy was being crazy over them and just Staring at them like Idiots. They both went inside and went towards their friends who were in the jam Room ..
Nandini saw manik was also there
, She Got Sad that why he is Ignoring her , yet she smiled when Cabir called her..
cabir: honeyPot tum itne sanaate main kyun ho ? wese tou apne Loud speakers se mere kaanon k parday pharti ho aaj kiya hua ?
Nandini hit him playfully and Smiled
Nandini looking at manik who was still busy in his Phone said.
Nandini: Nothing ..
Manik slightly looked at her without
Manik's POV
Bas Kuch hours yeh ignorance tolerate karlo Sweety pie because , tomorrow is Gonna be the Best day of your Life i Promise.. he smiled
They were having so much of fun joking , sharing laughs hitting each other when a peon came and Called manik
Peon:Manik , tumse milna koi aaya hai , bahar wait karrhe hain.
Manik: ok..
Manik went outside..
Navya: nans Tum apna Phone kyun Off karke Bethi ho ? i Called you almost 100 Times since yesterday night..
Nandini: mera phone , Oh Thanks for reminding , Mera phone is in my car , you guys carry on i will just be back..
All in union: okay..
She went Towards the Parking Area..
Nandini Thinking: So Monster Manik is ignoring me .. Great ..
She was Going towards her car when she saw Some Girl with Manik talking
, Manik was talking to her very Annoyingly , She saw the Girl was Soha Khurana ,She was Crazy for Manik , and Always Tried to get Cozy with him even She knew that Nandini is his Girlfriend and he loves her very much , still she didn't stopped making efforts to get close to Manik , But Manik always Ignored her and Nandini also didn't paid any kinda Attention to her Stupid Intentions.
Nandini went near them and was listening to them talking , Nandu saw Soha had a Baby Bump almost of 7 months. she was Confused that why she came to manik if she is Settled in her life and also Pregnant
.
Soha:Manik this is your child i am telling you.
Manik: oh enough soha just shut the f**k up and get lost.
Soha: No matter how much you deny this manik , ucan't chang the truth behind that Night , when u came to me , my hotel room.
Manik: i said Enough.
Soha saw nandini
Soha: look na nandini he is denying to accept his own CHild , his own Blood ,. Don't worry manik you don't have to wait to find out who this baby actually belongs to just 2 more months .. then DNA test.
Nandini didn't replied her , She was Standing Silently and Tears were Rolling down from her Face ..
Manik went to her.
Manik:Don't listen to her Bullshit nandini , You know na i was Drunk that Night , i Know she is Taking Advantage from that.
Nandini Pushed him away and went towards her Car manik followed her ..
He holds her hand. but she jerks his Hand
Nandini Shouted: Stay away Manik
.
She started her Car and went.
Manik's POV
Nandini why can't you understand that it's just a tr
ap that we are falling into. I am sure kch nae hua tha us raat , I will kill this Jerk If my love will go away from me because of this Bitch.
He Looked at Soha this was a Evil Look. Soha was on the ninth cloud. manik drove his car and followed nandini's car.
Nandini was driving her car and crying Bitterly.
Nandini's POV
so this was the reason Manik was Ignoring me since last Night , The truth of that evil night is finally out na. Manik slept with her that night , and now she is Pregnant... I hate you Manik.. I hate you...
She increased the speed of the car.

Third Person's POV
Nandini was just broken at that Moment , She didn't knew how to react.. It was not like she didn't believed manik , it was because Manik already told her about that night when There was a fight going on between them and Manik went for a concert to Goa , he was Drunk and was Dragged into a room , He didn't remebered anything about that night.. Nandini was confused what to do at that situation. Even manik told her that Nothing happened like that , And After that Soha too Disappeared for 7 damn Months and now Suddenly she is Back, Nandini was totally in a disturbing state.
Nandini went to her Home and Rushed to her Room ,Manik followed her but she Locked the door.

Manik: Nandini , open the door.
nandini i said Open the f**king door damn it.

Manik was very tensed as he knew she is totally Mad that she can do anything when she is Angry.
He called the rest of his friends at nandini's home
all of them reached and saw manik and rushed to him
Cabir:Kiya hua manik , tune itna jaldi main kyun bulaya ?
Dhruv: han buddy , where is Nandini ?

Manik narrated them the whole Story, they were Shocked.
Mukti: I'll kill that Bitch😡
Alia: She went away na tou why she is back now.? bloody jerk 😡
Navya: guys yeh sab choro , Do something nandini is not opening the door.
Everyone Tried their best but All went in vain and Nandu didn't opened the door
Manik was tensed , cabir looked at him and said
Cabir: Don't worry manik , main jaarha hun , i hope hmaisha ki tarah it works.
They were hopeful that only Cabir can do something as he was the only one who knew how to deal with That Crazy girl nandini that too when she is Completely broken and angry , he handled her Like a little Sister..

Cabir knocked: Honeypot
-no Responce
Cabir: Nandu dekho i am here , your big brother is here na , mujhe bhi wapis bhejogi baki sab ki tarah, acha Atleast mere shoulder ko tou use karo apne crocodile tears bahanay k lye.

Listen to his Words nandu Broke down even more and Opened the door and hugged him Tightly , Cabir caressed her hair softly.
Cabir: stop crying honey pot , look i am here na Your Protector..

All of them were waiting Navya went and saw cabir and nandini and she smiled.
Navya: God only cabir can Handle this Girl.. navya went and hugged manik and said She is fine Bro..
All of them were Relieved now..
Mukti: manik
Manik: han ?
mukti: manik are you sure na k us night kch nhn hua tha ?
Manik looked at mukti
Dhruv: buddy she is Right. i mean you were drunk and u hardly remember something so it might be possible that us soha ne kch kia ho..
Alia:manik tum jante ho na she always finds random chances to get closer to you , So...
manik was Confused listening to them , he mind was blank ,
Manik's POV
God , Agar yeh sach hua tou how will i face nandini ? her heart will be broken completely. nae this can't be true , but Agar aisa hua tou..
Manik was compeletely lost in his thoughts.. his thoughts were disturbing him..

Nandini's Room
cabir:nandini how can you believe soha so easily ?you know na how evil her mind is.. ?
nandini: Cabir i am not believing her , i know manik slept with her that night. he told me by himself and he was drunk ? kiya gurentee hai k soha is not pregnant with his child ?
Cabir: aur kiya guarentee hai k yeh manik ka hi bacha hai ?
Nandini was silent..
cabir: acha forget about it for now..
Go get freshen up and take some sleep. okay ?
Nandini : okay.
Cabir kissed her forehead and went..

Precap: Soha tries to manipulate nandini with her Emotional Drama.
Manan Fight..

So here i am with the chapter 3.. I hope you guys like it.
Any criticism is more than Welcome. Do Share your Views... 😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Nice one dear .
Can you please enlight more about that night you mentioned as even Manik is not able to give any surety about the events happened that night ,toh Nandini ko bhi blame nahin karan sakte for her breakdown . Update the next part asap .
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
ssly???soha???ye hai dkhna baki reh gaya
god mujhe new stories read nahi krni chahiye pura mood hi khrp kr diya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Chapter:4
a new Morning , Nandini was Still in her Bed, Thinking about all the Drama happened Yesterday , she saw her Phone There were 100 missed calls from Manik, She switched off her Phone. went to Washroom. Got Freshen up and Wore a Simple and Casual Peach Colored Knee Length Dress. She was Feeling Bit Better after having a Warm Shower.
She went outside and was Walking in the Beautiful Backyard Garden of her House. when a Servant came and Said That Someone is waiting for her in the living room.
Nandini: Maine Aap se kaha tha na mujhe kisi se nai milna ?
servant: Woh Mam , Maine bola unko but Unhon ne request kiya ke buht Zaroori hai tou..
Nandini: Okay ,Fine. bhejo Unhen.
The servant went to call the Person , Nandini was Shocked to see Soha.Soha just said hi to nandini And started he Melo-Drama. Nandini asked her to sit.
Soha:Nandini I know i have Made a lot of Mistakes in Past. for Which i have Regretted so much. i tried a lot to create so much of mess between you and Manik .for which i am really sorry.
Nandini was silently listening to her without saying any thing.after a while she talked
Nandini:So yeh Sab Ab Mujhe kyun bolrhi ho ? Listen i am not Gonna Fall in your Evil Traps i am telling you so you better stop this Drama.
Soha was Acting very Smart. She was Emotionally Blackmailing Nandini.
Soha:Look Nandini , i know i am not Forgiveable for the Mistakes i made in past but at least For My Baby , For Manik's Baby you can help me na.
Nandini: soha For your Kind Information its still not proved that this is manik's child ,so you better not expect anything from me.
Soha: Nandini i know you can't understand me right now. You will only Understand when this situation will come up to you. Nandini i don't want my Child to be Raised Without his dad. This is Manik's child aur yahi sach hai , nobody can deny that. i hope tumhen pata hai us raat kiya hua tha.
Third Person's POV
Fab 5 had a Concert in Goa which Resulted to be Very Successful. so the Authorities of the Resort gave them a Success Party . at that time There was a fight going on between nandini and manik , they were not talking to each other. Manik was missing her very much and he was continuesly drinking. at a point he got Completely drunk and was going towards his Room when he got dragged into a Room by Soha. And the Rest of the Story behind that night is This. nobody knows what happened that night between Soha and Manik. When Manik came back from Goa and After his and Nandini's Patch-up he told her about that.
Nandini:Hmm
Soha Crying: Nandini only you can make Manik to understand the Love for his Child. That is growing in my heart. You can make him realise That his child needs him , i am begging you nandini please help me. for the sake of Manik.As you know this is his Blood ,please nandini.
Soha Said that and Left.
Nandini was Completely Confused at that Situation. She thought to give herself a little break from everything. She messaged everyone in the whatsapp Group and Told them to come at her place Tonight there is a party.
Cabir and Manik were Together in Cabir's Home.
Cabir read the Message and showed it to Manik.
Cabir:I am Happy that she is Moving on from this drama.
Manik: hmm
Cabir: Manik ek baat puchun ?
Manik: saalay tu kabse itna formal hogaya hai ? puch
Cabir: Manik agar yeh bacha tera hua tou ?
Manik: tou?
Cabir: tou bol na ? array i mean in case agar yeh bacha tera nae hai tou kis ka hai hmen us Mahaan insaan ko dhoondna parega na jinhon ne itna shub kaam karke hamain phassadiya.
Manik: You think it's easy to find someone? woh mumbai ka hai ya nhn ? whether he is in india or not kaise dhoonden ge use ? it's better to wait for the DNA test.
Cabir:hmm , as you say boss.

it was almost night everyone headed towards nandu's Home as per Her instruction to come.
nandu was wearing a black knee length beautiful Dress with her hair tied up into a pony tail.
Mukti went and Hugged her , Navya and Alia too joined them.
cabir and dhruv also went towards the girls, they were having fun. this Sight was being noticed by a pair of eyes manik who was standing away from them was watching them. a smile Crept on Manik's face after seeing nandu laughing.
after a while all of them sat on couches in Living room and were drinking while cabir said 'nandu aur drinks la na'
nandu went to bring more drinks and manik followed her.
manik held her hand
nandini: Manik choro mujhe.
Manik:what is the reason of partying ? i mean i am sure you don't even remember what is the day today.
Nandini: i hope that u know k i don't need reasons to party. and i am sorry manik but right now i am really not interested to to remember anything.
Manik: 4 years hogye but still you are the same , the stuborn one.
he hold her by her waist
nandini: manik leave me.
Manik: i won't
Nandini: leave me and Go to soha na , your child needs you.
At this answer manik got angry and held her tightly and clinch her to the wall.
Manik shouted: why don't understand that nothing happened between me and soha.agar itna bhi trust nai hai na tou?
Nandini shouted: tou what manik?
she pushed him away
nandini: don't you dare to touch me manik , don't.
and she bought the drinks and went. Manik also left her place angrily.
she was drinking continuesly. Navya , cabir and Mukti bid a good Bye to them and went.
dhruliya Also left. now nandini was all alone sitting and drinking. she was completely Drunk. she Took her car keys and Drove her car , she was driving at the Highway. she was in full speed when a truck was coming and her car got out of control and it went and hit a Tree she was lying down Unconciously with a lot of Wounds and Blood.

Manik was Very angry and Lost in his thoughts he was sitting in the poolside of his Home when his Phone rang.
he felt like his World Stopped for a Second.
he rushed to hospital , he called cabir and told him to come to hospital and inform others all of them rushed to hospital. manik was crying he was cursing himself for nandini's state. everyone consoled him.
after a few minutes doctors came and said That there isn't a major injury. he lost blood so she will be unconcious. you can go to see her.
everyone Thanked God
Manik went inside and was crying. Cabir came.
Cabir: manik , don't blame yourself for her state. meri baaat maan tou usko yahan se duur leke jaa kuch time k lye. isse tum donon ki misunderstandings bhi duur hongi and she will definately feel better.
Manik: tu theek kehrha hai cabir. i should take her away from this Drama..
Manbir Hugged.

Precap:Manan Moments.

Edited by leocious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
U penned it so beautifully zat I have no words to describe it...<3
Edited by lilmissshazia - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
U penned it so beautifully zat I have no words to describe it...
<3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Awesome update
waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Interesting story..read all the chapters..waiting for the next one please continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Its awesome!! Hoping the baby isn't Manik's!!!! Wonder if Soha's baby is Harshad's child? Very stupid guess but whatever!! Thanks for the PM!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Wooowww... AMAZING!! 👏 👏 👏
Jus dying to read d next part... 😃
Tooo excited... plss update soon...
n plss give long updates...
I love yur story ya... ❤️ ❤️
Seriously... Story line is Amazing... jus like d story...
n ya tyssm fr d pm! [:*]

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