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Posted: 10 years ago
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PLS...update soon...😊😊
u write really well!!👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: LoveAngelsimmy


aww thnx for such a gr8 compliment bt I dnt think I wud evr be able ro to do tht coz my imagination is limited to manan only so I dnt think il be able to write for soemone or something else except it..
bt still thnx for ur appreciation...



ur most welcome but yeah it's true i also write for manan without them i don't think to write ff but still its ok.. u can continue soon waiting for nxt tc keep smiling hamesha 😊 😉
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yyaaarrr ppllzzz uppddaatee soon naaa,,,,,,,,,,,, pplllzzz😲
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Hi evryone..m back again with my nxt part..so without further ado lets get started..

Chapter 45

Everyone broke the hug happily bt Manik ws still holding Nandini very close to him as both were still lost in eachother's eyes and they were jst abt to kisss wen everyone then seeing them this way started teasing them which brought them back to senses.

Mukti:Vaise Manik we knw aaj day of love hai isliye tumdono ko bohot sara lovey-dovey chize karne ka mann kar raha hoga bt still guys dnt forget tht we are still in college so pls have lil control on ur hormones..

Listening to this both straightened up themselves and started blushing.Cabir then to tease them more then said

Cabir:Arey Mukti..tu ye kya bol rahi hai..indono ke liye kya college aur kya ghar..both are jst one and the same for them yaar..infact dekha jaye to ghar se jyada romance to inlogo ne college mai hi kiya hai..so it really doesn't matter to them..hai na guys..

Evryone started laughing at this while MaNan were blushing hard bt still while blushing Manik managed to give his forever reserved deathly looks to Cabir to shut him up bt this time it didn't worked as Cabir ws in no mood to stop so he retorting back with full on attitude said

Cabir:Oye ab ye looks kya de raha hai..sach hi to bola maine afterall tumdono ki ye ajab prem ki gazab kahani ki shuruat hamare iss college se hi hui hai na..

Both MaNan glares to him angrily for calling their lovestory in this way while others jst laugh listening to it.Manik angrly glaring him says

Manik:Seriously Cabir..

Cabir jst smirks to him while Dhruv then being the forever best frnd then suppoting to MaNan then say

Dhruv:Chill buddy dnt go on the title..avtually cabir to tujhe compliment kar raha hai by making u both feel as ranbir and katrina with his dialogues aftrall tumhari lovestory unki tarah itni weird kaha hai..

Cabir then laughingly:Seriously dhruv..tu sachme bada innocent hai yaar isliye tujhe pata nahi chala ke inki story itni nahi infact bohot jyada weird hai..

Evryone including MaNan gives him a weird look while Dhruv then innocently asks

Dhruv:Accha vo kaise..

Cabir teasingly:Vo aise Dhruv ke normal lovestories mai hero ko heroine se ya to uski smile dekhke ya uski nature or behaviour ke vajase pyar hota hai bt ye hamare MaNan vo unique couple hai jaha hamare hero ko hamari heroine se punch khakar pyar hua hai..aur sirf itna hi weird nahi hai inki story me coz usually jab couples ko romance karna hota hai to vo log kisi romantic place ko apna meeting spot banate hai bt indono ka to kuch ajib hi logic hai isliye jab inhe romance karna hota hai to ya to storeroom me ghuste hai ya fir staircase pe chale jate hai..so ab tu bata hui na inki lovestory ajab prem ki gazab kahani..

Nandini ws looking down to hide her blushes while Manik ws almost ready to pounce on Cabir to kill him for embarassing them so openly bt fortunately Cabir quickly went and hid behind Nandini and started pleading to her to save him frm his angry hulk of a bf by saying

Cabir:Arey baba sry na yaar..and Nandini bhabhi pls save me frm ur bf na..varna aaj tumhare officially bhabhi bannewale day par hi tumhara ek devar kam ho jayega..pls rok lo usse..

Nandini glared him and said:Seriously Cabir..tum kabhi sudhroge nahi na..aisi situation mai bhi tease karna band nahi karoge na..and wat did u calld us ya weird couple na thn fine mai bhi ab Manik ko rokne nahi wali aftrall u deserve it..so Manik pls go ahead he is all urs..

Saying this she moved aside bringing him infront of Manik and seeing this evn Manik started grinning evilly while Cabir got shocked listening to her.Evryone were laughing badly seeing Cabir's face while Cabir then again started pleading Nandini before Manik could kill him.

Cabir:Accha baba sry..chalo ab devar na sahi atleast bhai ke taur par hi bachalo..akhir tum kaisi behan ho Nandini jo apne khudke bhai ko apne bf ke hatho marne ke liye chod rahi ho..

Evryone including Nandini chuckled listenigng his such filmy dialogues and evn Manik's anger too got melted by seeing his funny antics and he then smirking him says

Manik:Saale kitna bada nutanki hai tu..har jagah drama karta rehta hai..

Nandini too smilingly says:Ya seriously Cabir..tum kaise manage kar lete ho to make evryone laugh evn in worst situations...

Cabir then proudly pulling his collars says:Vo kya hai na sis har kisi me kuch na kuch talent hota hai aur ye mera special talent hai..u knw m jst born talented..

Evryone nods in agreeement and then they all start walking around the corridor while still teasing and tlking abt MaNan and their memories linked with SPACE so then Alya teasingly says

Alya:Well guys I think ke since SPACE ke har ek SPACE se tumdono ki kitni memories related hai so in future y dnt u guys arrange ur marriage ceremony here in SPACE only..

For the first time evryone actually prasied to Alya's idea and started teasing MaNan abt it and as usual both were turning tomato red while listening to it.Nandini then still blushingly says

Nandini:Thnx for the idea Alya..bt there's still time for it so we'll think abt it later okk..

Dhruv then in a concern tone says:Ya we agree with u Nandini..bt still abhi se thoda prepared to hona padega na I mean to say ke as we all have already saw ke Chachi to already Manik ko apna son-in-law maan chuki hai bt wat abt ur rest of the family..i mean ya we knw ke Chacha is also impressed by buddy bt still do u think will they be okk aftr knwing abt ur this relationshp..

Aftr listening to this both MaNan starts blushingly looking at eachother by recollecting abt their officialt tlk with Chacha-Chachi regarding it.They saw evryone looking at them with curious eyes bt they were feeling too shy to answer them abt it so seeeing them getting so flushed Cabir thought to help them out in his own teasing way.

Cabir:Yaar Dhruv..tujhe kya lagta hai hamara Manik kya itna slow hoga in sab chizo mai...and guys tumlog jis chiz ki itni tension le rahe ho uss chiz se to ye fully tensionfree hai..

Evryone looks at him confusingly while MaNan jst looks away.Cabir then winking to thm then says

Cabir:Arey guys..i mean to say ki tumlog kaha sirf impress karne ki baat kar rahe ho yaha hamre Manik baba ne to already officially Nandini ki family se uski puri future planning discuss karli hai so agar abhi ye dono jake akele shadi karke bhi unke samne chale gaye na so vo log to tabhi bhi khushi-khushi inhe accept karlenge aur Manik ko to ghar-jamai banake rakh denge..

Evryone got amazed aftr listenign to this info from Cabir and started looking at MaNan with wide-eyes.Alya then teasignly said

Alya:Seriously Manik..tum to bade fast nikle ...i mean guys kaha ham step1 ke bare me sochke worried ho rahe the bt yaha to Manik ne puri procedure hi khatm kar di..i mean gal ki family ko impress karna sabse important aur difficult part hota ek relationshp ki success ke liye and Manik ne to ye bohot hi smoothly kar diya..

Dhruv:Obviously Alya vo to hona hi tha aftrall mera buddy hai hi aisa ke noone can resist his charms and vaise bhi vo hamare ex-teachers jo inke bare me kuch jante bhi nahi the jab unhe inke bich me pyar dikh sakta hai to Chacha-Chachi to Nandini ki family hai to unhe to inka pyar bohot easily samaj aagaya hoga na..

Listening to this praises were making MaNan feel both embarassed and proud at the same time bt then listening their ex-teacher's name made MaNan remember abt their lie regarding them so they immediately looked at eachother and then both decided to disclose abt it too so they then guiltily looked at others and said

Nandini:Vo guys..actually hame tumlogo ko ek-aur baat batani thi..

Evryone looked at them curiously and asked what to which Manik then hesitantly replied

Manik:Vo ye ki tht day we both lied to u all tht abt our first meet with them..well actually the truth is ke hamlog unse newyear eve ko nahi infact usse kuch din pehle hi ek-bar beach pe mile the wen I and Nandini went there to spend some time together alone..and vo log jo bhi ussdin bol rahe the vo sab sach tha..so sry for tht..

MaNan looked at them with eyes full of guilt whereas the rest of gang were staring them with wide-eyes.Finally Mukti with full rage speaks

Mukti:What the hell guys..matlab puri duniya ko tumdono ke bare me pata tha bas hamlog hi dumbos ki tarah baithe the..

Nandini ws gona apologise for it bt then suddenly she saw Mukti laughingly continuing

Mukti:Seriously guys..muje to abhi bhi believe nahi ho raha hai ke hamlog har bar inse kaise itni easily bewakoof ban jate the..

Alya laughingly:Ya really..agar kisi ko pata chala ke the great fab5 jo dusro ko trick karte the vo khud itni buri tarh trick hogaye to hamari reputation ki kya halat hogi...seriously hatsoff to u both for being such a big tricksters..

Seeing them laughing and smiling made MaNan take a sigh of relief and then evn they too joined thm happily.cabir then to tease them more than jokingly spoke

Cabir:So guys...I ws thinking ke since Nandini ki family bhi ready hai aur Manik ki family to hamlog hi hai and evn we are also more than ready so kyu na indono ki abhise hi inki shadi ki tayyari shuru kar de...so bol Manik suit silau ya sherwani..

Evryone chuckled listening to it while Nandini hid behind Manik in embarassment while Manik too strtd blushing bt then seeing Nandini's state he glared him to shut up.While everyone were laughing and enjoying this moment,Dhruv then in a serious tone..

Dhruv:Vo to thik hai guys...bt dnt u think ke we are forgetting abt someone who is still unaware abt Manik&Nandini..

Fab4 and MaNan looked at him questningly while Mukti then playfully asked

Mukti:Ab aur bhi koi bacha hai kya Dhruv..i thought hamare alawa puri duniya ko pata hai inke bare mai so ab tu kiske bare mai bol raha hai..

MaNan too looked at him curiously while Dhruv then said

Dhruv:Guys m tlking abt Nyonika..wat do u all think will she be fine with this..

Hearing Nyonika's name evryone's face turned pale while Manik ws jst emotionless.Nandini observed this and got lost in her thoughts whether she shd tell abt Nyonika to them bt her trance ws broken by Manik's voice.

Manik rudely:Guys..i dnt care vo Nyonika kya sochegi hamare bare me and I dnt need her approval jst like I dnt need her..

Manik ws gona say more bt ws interrupted by Nandini who nt being able to listen all this negatives abt Nyonika anymore then cutting him then says

Nandini:Listen Manik..jst stop okk..before u say anything jst hear me out first..

Evryone looked at her with a puzzled look while Nandini then taking all the courage then hesitantly continued.

Nandini:Vo actually guys I need to tell u something..and Manik m sry maine abtak tumhe ye baat batayi nahi..bt nw I cnt hide it anymore..so ya the thing is tht ke Nyonika mam ko hamare bare mai already sabkuch pehle se pata hai..

Evryone looked at her shockingly and in unison screamed,"What".Nandini looked at them guiltitly and then in a low tone started saying

Nandini:Well actually do u remember tht washroom scene...well ya usdin vo mujse issi bare me baat kar rahi thi..

Manik angrily:I jst knew it..muje ussi din lag raha tha ke tum mujse kuch chupa rahi ho..and tht Nyonika I ws right abt her usne definitely tumhe kuch bola hoga and thtsy tum itni lost lag rahi thi ussdin hai na..

Nandini calming down:No Manik its nothing like tht..tum sab jaisa soch rahe ho unhone aisa kuch nahi kaha infact u wont believe bt she really dnt have any issues with neither me nor with our relationshp infact unhone khud muje apni approval di hai..

Listening to this everyone made faces as if they have saw some ghost infront of them.They all actually couldn't believe to wat they had jst heard right nw.Manik finally coming out of the shock loudly asks

Manik:Are u serious Nandini..its jst nxt to impossible for me to believe watevr u said nw..

Nandini:I knw tht and thtsy maine tumhe ye us din nai bataya bcz tum already usdin bure mood me the and I knew ke tum ye easily believe nahi karoge bt Manik trust me this is only the truth and u have to believe it..

Manik ws so confused with his feelings as somewhere deep down he ws feeling happy tht evn Nyonika too had accepted her love bt then his mind ws still nt ready to believe it.Bt then Alya asked

Alya:Bt Nandini..hw did she came to knw abt u both..i mean jab hame ye sab pata lagne me itna time lag gaya evn wen we all were with u both all the time then hw did she found out all this before us wen she ws nt evn around..

Evryone else were too having same doubts and so Nandini then facing to Manik then looking straight in his eyes then said

Nandini:Vo isliye bcz she is ur mother Manik..she have given birth to u so she dnt need to have some solid proofs to find out wats going inside u..all she did ws jst looking into ur eyes and she got her answers..

Manik looked at her disbelievingly as all this things ws jst too much for him to digest right nw.He ws feeling so lost in her words and sensing his confuson Nandini then softly said

Nandini:I knw Manik its quite hard for u to believe bt u trust me na tht I wont say something without any reason so pls believe me this time too and dnt be harsh to her..and nw will u pls smile..

Manik jst looked down and jst gave a hmmm as a reply as he ws jst nt in a right frame of mind nw and then gave her a weak smile as per her wish while Nandini felt a bit relieved seeing him giving a positive response.Seeing evryone gettign so worked up Cabir then to put a break to this conversation then said

Cabir:Okk fine guys..lets jst drop this thing here..aaj ke liye kafi revealations hogayi nd rest we will do it later..

Mukti too understnding his plan then playfully says:Bt Cabir abhi abse important revalation to bacha hai na..

Evryone incuding MaNan too looks at her confusingly and then seeing their faces Mukti then smirking says

Mukti:Arey aise sab muje kya dekh rahe ho..bhul gaye kya hame Manik&Nandini ki ye ajab prem ki gazab kahani sry I mean unki lovestory sunni hai..i mean dnt u guys wna knw ke hw did two people who were always on eachothr's neck suddenly fell in love..so ye to reh gaya na..

Evryone chuckled listening to this while MaNan who had their mind till nw occupied on the previous topic finally aftr listening to this forgot abt it and started smiling.Bt Cabir had some different plans so he then went near Dhruv and Manik and putting his each arm around their shoulder then teasingly said

Cabir:No Mukti..vo story na ham kal popcorns khate-khate aaram se sunge..coz aaj inke paas utna time nahi hoga aftall aaj valentines day hai so obviously mere ye dono romeos ko apni-apni juliets ko date par le jana hoga na..so isliya ham iss plan ko kal ke liye postpone kar dete hai. so mydear loverboys ab kiska wait kar rahe ho..jao aur apni dreamgals ka hath pakadkar niklo yaha se varna ye kaam karne ke liye yaha dusre ladke mare ja rahe hai...

Cabir being the forever cupid finally brought some senses to this amnesia-affected couples by his words and hearing to him both started blushing by remembering abt their 2night's date plans.Bt Mukti then to have some more fun with them then said.

Mukti:Ya right Cabir..bt I dnt think yaar ke inlogo ko apni-apni dates ki kuch khas padi hai aftrall tabhi to dekhna kaise abtak hamre sath hi yaha chipke hue hai so I think inlogo ko na hamre sath hi apna valentines celebrate karna hai.. hai na guys..

Mukti smirked at both dhrulya and MaNan while Nandini being the most nave one then sweetly says.

Nandini:Ya ofcours guys we really wna celebrate this day with u all only..hai na guys..

She looked at others while saying this while both dhrulya and Manik looked at her shockingly while Cabir and Mukti jst started lauging listening to her.Mukti then grinningly says

Mukti:Aww thts so sweet of u Nandini..bt seriously Nandini u dnt need to do this coz mera aur Cabir ka already clubbing karne ka plan hai and agar nahi bhi hota na to bhi tumhara bf hame kahina kahi zarur bhej deta aftrall usne aaj ki special date ke liye bohot mehnat aur wait kiya hai so bichare ko aur mat tarsao..and I thought evn tum bhi to iske liye desperate hogi na aftrall itne dino se u were missing him so much na..

Nandni then realised her stupidity aftr listening this from Mukti and then looked at Manik with srprisingly aftr listening tht he had planned a special date for them while Manik too smilingly looked at her.Evn dhrulya too were having their own cute eyelocck while thinking abt their date.So Cabir then to break their eyelocks starts coughing and says

Cabir:Guys pls ab niklo yahase coz hame aur ye romantic movie nahi dekhna..so pls jakar akele me ye sab continue karna okk..

Hearing this evryone got straigtened up and then both couples blushingly looked away bt then suddenly Manik spoke.

Manik:Well actually guys..muje abhi ek important kaam yaad aaya hai so il take ur leave nw ..tumlog Nandini ko pls ghar drop kar dena okk..

Saying this he quickly left from there bt nt before giving a soft peck on Nandini's cheek and whispered in her ears,"Stay ready till 8.."and then winking to her he left from there by leaving behind a blushing Nandini.As soon as he left evryone started teasing Nandini as evryone knewed wat his important work is so Cabir then teasingly says.

Cabir:Guys looks like aaj kisiki date to kuch jyada hi special honewali hai..wat say Nandini..

Nandini jst blushed and then playfully punched Cabir and looked away.With such more teases they left from there and then soon dropped Nandini at her home.

So guys this time m stopping here only..and I knw this is very small update as compared to my previous parts bt its jst guys tht nxt part is gona be very special and I wntd it to be long so I dnt wntd to break the chapter in pieces as it ws making this part too lengthy and then this wud nt so fun to read so sry for giving u this boring chapter bt will promise to make u all go aww by the next part and ya I'll post the nxt part very soon so u wont have to wait more..till thn give me ur views abt this one..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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First to comment 😃
Lovely update
Fab4 teasing session was so cute
Continue soon
Edited by rithanya - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres
wow
most of the truth ae revealed
loved the part
teasing is my one of me fav
loved it
awsm update
cont soon
Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
AWW!!!JUST AMAZING!!👏👏😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved d update
will be waiting fo ua nxt chp
specially d manan date...
update soon..!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was amazing
fab 4 and their teasing sessionss👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsumm update
Manan truth revelation ... 😉 liked it
Fab 4 teasing thm for their date n their Convo...superb as Alwys...too good
Thank uh for pm...update soon
Eagerly waiting for nxt

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