MaNan OS : Our Journey Of Love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people.Am back with an OS.One shot !! I want to dedicated this One shot to everyone who wished me on my birthday and made my birthday special by your wishes.Thank you so much guys.Thanks a ton !! It is different from the story plot.You'll understand as the story goes.Happy reading.Ignore the mistakes.

MaNan OS : Our Journey Of Love

I never knew that I'll meet you one day.
I never knew that I'll talk to you one day.
I never knew that our paths will meet one day.
I never knew that I'll miss you so much one day.
I never knew that I'll blush while talking to you one day.
I never knew that I'll dream about you and me one day.
I never knew that you'll become an important person in my life one day.
I never knew that I'll smile like an idiot while reading our texts one day.
I never knew that I'll be possessive about you one day.
I never knew that I'll be jealous of someone one day.
I never knew that I'll be addicted to you one day.
I never knew that you'll become my breath one day.
I never knew that I'll fell in LOVE with you one day.
I just never knew,I just never knew until I met you Manik Malhotra


He finished the song on a soft note.Those lines were written by love of his life.His love,his life,his breathe.His first and last love.He was smiling all the way when he was singing them.Obviously he would be smiling as they were written by her.She expressed her feelings for him finally. He is waiting for it from long time.Their time came finally.

His friends know who wrote those lines . He is reading again and again to see if it is true or not. He saw them and a smile is playing on their lips.He just caressed the paer,those lines.The lines are for him written by her.The lines which completely depict their journey,his journey,her journey.Cabir came and placed his hand on his shoulder .

"She finally confessed her feelings.!! She finally did !!"Cabir said while hugging him but he is still reading those lines.He is smiling as well as tears are there in his eyes.They say tears and smile doesn't meet very often but when they meet it is the best feeling and best moment .Mukti comes forward .

"Say something ."Mukti said.He saw her and just smiled.She smiled back knowing the reason behind his smile.

"She is back na."He asked .Everyone nodded their heads in Yes !!

"Go and get her.She is waiting for you ."Aliya said while winking at him. He ran out and got into his car.He just smiled while igniting the engine and he uttered am coming !! While driving he remembered their journey,their journey of love.

He remembered every moment he spent with her.He remembered every damn thing about her.He remembered how he met her.He remembered how desperate he was to talk to her.He remembered how they fought and how they hurted themselves as they couldn't hurt each other.He remembered how they spent nights talking to each other for hours.He remembered how they care for each other.He remembered her laugh,her cry,her cute angry pouts,her childish yet mature behaviour.He remembered their silly fights .He remembered their beautiful journey.

I was never desperate to talk with anyone except her . Girls are always behind me.They are crazy about me.But I was crazy about her.When I saw her for the first time my breath hitched,my heart skipped a beat.For me the world stopped.I never knew that I'll meet some girl who will steal my heart from me and make me go crazy for her.She is a shy kinda girl.For me she's like an angel.I met her in my friend's engagemnt.She is bride's friend.She was so excited about her friend's engagement .She is more excited than the bride.She was no less than bride in the blue and white lehenga she wore on that day.

She didn't even see me properly that day.Next day we all went out and she too came.It was for bowling.She was so shy.I know she saw me but she just didn't talk.I spproached her and she just answered my questions .It was like an interview at first but then it was ok situation between us.Before I can ask her number or her ID she left with her friends.She has a brother who is very jovial.I and her bro are pretty cool.We both talk now and then.She left after the engagement as marriage is after two months.I don't know that I'll meet her again.

After a week I got FB request from her.I was shocked literally shocked and happy too.I just accepted it without thinking.From there it all started.Our conversations have no end.I don't know that she talks this well.She is so open hearted,innocent.The feeling I experience with her is the most wonderful feeling.Finally the day of our friend's marriage came.I guess we were more excited than our friends.We will be meeting again.We live in two different states.She is from Delhi and am from Mumbai.She is going to come again.

She is three years younger than me and she was doing her medical course.I saw her again and again my breath hitched,my heart skipped a beat.But what's the worst part is we couldn't talk to each other due to our friends.After marriage again she went as she's busy with her studies and I respect that a lot.I know she's a studious person.After marriage we continued our chatting.Then one day we exchanged our numbers and nights were spent with our endless talks.Then video chats.Those video chats make us feel like we are beside each other.

I don't have any girlfriends.My friends always tease me a lot whenever I talk with her.I don't know what feeling it was then.I don't know what to name it then.I don't know anything about this new feeling which was experienced by me then.But when I got to know I couldn't tell her because am oblivious about her feelings.I couldn't spoil the atmosphere between us,the friendship between us.I waited for her to express her feelings first,In between I gave her hints about my feelings too but she couldn't understand any time.Dumb girl !! I used to face palm myself those times.

But it was wonderful time when am giving hints and she's acting like she's oblivious to them.But I know she knows it and she's just blushing on the other side of phone.We never met after the marriage.Her parents are strict .Well my parents don't know about her .I gave her time.I gave us time.They were days too when we both fought and didn't talk to each other for some days.She never cares for her health and one day she was having fever and she didn't say to anyone.She got fever because of eating ice creams.I told her not to eat ice creams and chocolates but she irritated me she will eat.I was so angry that I punched the wall.I de-activated my account.That time we were not having phone numbers too.

When I activated it back again she said sorry.She said she cried because I went like that.I don't know but I felt bad.I just wished she was beside me so that I can five her a bone crush hug and say sorry fro making her cry.Then again we were back to square one.These fights everything strengthened our friendship.We care for each other like boyfriend-girlfriend.Maybe we were like best friends.Time flew fastly.She went to hostel later..I missed her so badly.Whenever she comes home for holidays,our talks have no endings.Her sister know about our talks.

I used to tell her about the girls and she acts like she doesn't care but her voice doesn't lie and her eyes too.They show jealousy.I end up laughing whenever I remember about her face.My sister knows about all this.Her sister and my sister planned our marriage secretly.After five years our marriage topic came but we weren't aware of it.I met her again after five years.She's settled and I was also settled in my life.But who knows that meeting is planned to take our relationship to some other level.Yes ! It was planned by our sisters.I saw her and everytime I see her I feel like am seeing her for the first time.

We spent some time together.But an incident took place which made my life take a 360 degree spin.I was talking on phone and she was on the other side of the road for Pani Puri.Before she can come here aa car hit her.She was badly injured.The phone dropped from my hands.I ran and took her in my arms.She was admitted in the hospital and the doctors said she went to coma.I didn't confess my feelings yet.I want her to confess.I waited.I waited for her to come back !! I'll wait my whole life for that !! My parents atood by me with my decision.They are prod of me for that.I loved her very much,I love her and I will love her for the rest of my life too.

Today she confessed.Those lyrics were written by her.I can know that.Those lyrics were brought by my friends saying sing them.When I sang I saw my whole journey with her.I saw my journey of love,OUR Journey of Love.I reached my destination i.e. hospital.

He ran inside and everyone who is present over there smiled as they know why he is running like that.He opened the door and she is there!! She is standing and admiring the beauty of the nature.


I never knew that my heart will skip a beat one day
I never knew that I will go crazy for someone one day
I never knew that I will be desperate to talk to someone one day
I never knew that I'll miss someone one day.
I never knew that I'll experience new feelings one day.
I never knew that this new feelings will make me crazy one day.
I never knew that my heart will be stolen by someone one day.
I never knew that I'll talk with someone for hours one day.
I never knew that someone will become this special to me one day.
I never knew that I'll fell in love with someone one day.
I just never knew,I just never knew until I met you Nandini Murthy.

He said those lines seeing her when she turned while he started saying them.She just ran and hug him and said I waited ! I waited.He hugged her back and said More than you I waited.I waited for six years.He kissed her hair !!She saw him and their eyes met and eventually their lips met.It is filled with love,friendship,care,every feeling which is there inside them.Finally they both are together,They got married after a month and lived happily ever after.

That's their journey of love.What's youar journey of love ? ;) :)

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So ? How is it ? I don't have any idea how it is ? I don't know how it turned out.Please do share your views through comments.Do hit like if you like it.

Love,
Harika..Keep smiling ..It looks good on you...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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yayiii I'm first again ...
marvellous os hari ...👏
just loved the plot of the story...
it was so different n realistic...
saw each other in a friends wedding n
Facebook love...
it was beautiful...
u wrote it flawlessly ...
I told u ur os will be awesome...
see its really wonderful n superb...
do write more... ..
Edited by nimarious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was awesome
It seemed so real..u also made Manik wait to hear Nandinis confession..very bad..bechara Manik..pure 11 sal..
Yeah banda bohot dhiraz rakhta hai..
Loved it d way u penned..
Edited by adita - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful os
loved it
very nicely written

Posted: 10 years ago
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res
unres..finallyy !!
thais was something new...loved the journey..
it was a really cute journey..
manik crazy abt nandini..😃
then Facebook pe baatein.. !!!!
uff.. !! Loved it.. !awesome.. !! 😃
Keep writing didu
Edited by ndcdance - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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are my sweetie is back
awesome os baby
manan's love r so genuine n pure six years tak wait kiya manik ne oh god how madly he loved her n nandini's lines its just fav
tu thi kaha itni din chal koi nai ab to tu wapas aagayi r8
lots of love to u mmmuuuaaahhh :-))))
Edited by mehjaben_nahin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is such a sweet os... loved it ...u r an amazng writer. .. Thnkz 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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bit emotional haru its awesome my cutie pie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kudos gal.awesome os loved it so much with heart rhat can feel goosebumps omg loved it so much could feel as if somthing is happening in front of my eyes yooohhhooo🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was too cute
i loved both d lyrics part ❤️👍🏼
d story was really too good😳😆
n do i need 2 tell uh dat uh r such an amazing writer...!!!🤗
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