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Thoshna

@21July2014

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#481

Res
unres...
...heartbeats increasing its pace evry second...uneven breathing...goosebumps...shivering...that feeling...still breathing heavily...what is happening??!!! All the blood settled in my cheeks...yuvi...gosh! Am still not out of shock!! Hottest sexiest most sizzling shock of my life!!! Oh kiara!! What did u write?? My vocabulary is ditching me...YUVRAJ THAKUR..MY YUVI...my heart..my soul..my life..my everything...i am at fenil's place now...meri halat pata nhi kya ho gya hai...!! My god!! I am blushing..smiling lyk a love addicted person!! Okay that was damn hott!! Too much!! Just speechless!! I am tryin to recover...but no..am still in the shock!! Kiara!! This was seriously my death!! I am literally clean-bowled!!! But im worried for my yuvi...what is bothering him?? Why was he so rough??!!! I just nothin happens to my love...!!
Okay comin to MaNan...the start itself made me blush!! Gosh! So bold!!! Loved them!! Towel thingy was hilarious!! LMAO!!
MukBhi...mukti shud've trusted abhi...but she's forced not to trust him...she had enough betrayal in her life...abhi's love for her is true...its heartbreaking wenevr i hear mukti's past...cabir is truly a great friend to everyone!! Mukti's song..modified one...the lyrics are freaking awesome!!! Loved hw she glared harshad wid all the hatred she had fr him!! Loved the MukBhi confession too!! Love u so much kiara fr making MukBhi happen so fast!! Love u for much more reasons too;):D...
I had guessed it..i understood that nandu is gonna meet an accident wen u said "and was crossing.." b4 mukti's song!! Gosh! Next is another heartbreaking chappy!! Hope nothin much happens to nandu n i trust u..u wont let anythin happen to nandu...!!
Love u so much for this chappy!! Thoda sa recovered now...abb feeling lyk heartbeat stopped!! But still breathin heavily!!
Me..yuvi...my god!!
Thnx..for..d..pm..kiara...
Ll..oo..vee..ll..yyy up..da..tt..ee...!! Yy..uuvv..raa..jjj...th..aak..ku..rr...la..nnd..land...
Love u loads!! Keep giving me these shocks:D 🤗

Edited by Toshna_1522 - 10 years ago

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Ayesha Nazrat

@musicialtie

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#482

accident? ?? like ssly? ??

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kiaraMaNanholic

@kiaraMaNanholic

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#483

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522
Res

Love u so much

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#484

Accident

Nandu will get hurt that too right in front of manik

I'm not liking it...

But I'm super happy for Mukti!

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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Kavyashree pradhan

@Kavyashree22

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#485

You gave shock at the end of chapter so i forgot everything what happened in the beginning...

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#486

Awesome fantastic update

Why the accident now manik will be devastated if anything happens to Nandu as when everything is going well for all soon something bad has to happen

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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kiaraMaNanholic

@kiaraMaNanholic

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#487

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522
Res
unres...
...heartbeats increasing its pace evry second...uneven breathing...goosebumps...shivering...that feeling...still breathing heavily...what is happening??!!! All the blood settled in my cheeks...yuvi...gosh! Am still not out of shock!! Hottest sexiest most sizzling shock of my life!!! Oh kiara!! What did u write?? My vocabulary is ditching me...YUVRAJ THAKUR..MY YUVI...my heart..my soul..my life..my everything...i am at fenil's place now...meri halat pata nhi kya ho gya hai...!! My god!! I am blushing..smiling lyk a love addicted person!! Okay that was damn hott!! Too much!! Just speechless!! I am tryin to recover...but no..am still in the shock!! Kiara!! This was seriously my death!! I am literally clean-bowled!!! But im worried for my yuvi...what is bothering him?? Why was he so rough??!!! I just nothin happens to my love...!!
Okay comin to MaNan...the start itself made me blush!! Gosh! So bold!!! Loved them!! Towel thingy was hilarious!! LMAO!!
MukBhi...mukti shud've trusted abhi...but she's forced not to trust him...she had enough betrayal in her life...abhi's love for her is true...its heartbreaking wenevr i hear mukti's past...cabir is truly a great friend to everyone!! Mukti's song..modified one...the lyrics are freaking awesome!!! Loved hw she glared harshad wid all the hatred she had fr him!! Loved the MukBhi confession too!! Love u so much kiara fr making MukBhi happen so fast!! Love u for much more reasons too;):D...
I had guessed it..i understood that nandu is gonna meet an accident wen u said "and was crossing.." b4 mukti's song!! Gosh! Next is another heartbreaking chappy!! Hope nothin much happens to nandu n i trust u..u wont let anythin happen to nandu...!!
Love u so much for this chappy!! Thoda sa recovered now...abb feeling lyk heartbeat stopped!! But still breathin heavily!!
Me..yuvi...my god!!
Thnx..for..d..pm..kiara...
Ll..oo..vee..ll..yyy up..da..tt..ee...!! Yy..uuvv..raa..jjj...th..aak..ku..rr...la..nnd..land...
Love u loads!! Keep giving me these shocks:D 🤗

You are maaaddd tosh..
I am blushing seeing the effects on you..
Whatever yuvi does to you parth does to mee the same thing..
Okay no Parth Parth or else my heart rate will increase to an extend I will be dead..
Ty for the comment..
This is when u never fail me.. This time you understood I can never do anything to manan...
I love you for this... You understood me...
Both my ff's next chappy is a real life incident...
Nandini ke jagah main thi...
And coz all wala udhar bataungi..
Chalo bht baat ho gayi..
Grab ur heartbeats back..

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#488

Res

Unres

Finally updated and now I know why I was excused even after being late coz tosh is first hehe😆

So coming to update the proposal of Abhi was undoubtedly the best scene of the update for me ,the words he said man how can mukti reject him after hearing that but as you said in some update of yours that her belief on love is fragile so that was justified..I loved how cabir made her understand ,his words were beautiful and how Alya made abhi understand aww how cute friends ,everyone dies for friends like these

Then MaNan romantic mode on lol ,towel that too pink towel!!🤣 lol and he was gonna go out in it and nandu said she doesn't have a problem!!😳

Their scenes are always wonderfully written by you..

Then the song mukti performed on it was so heart-touching and perfectly described..👏

Ohh and not to forget the hug of MukBhi I miss them..😭

Finally tosh toh is dead seriously ,yuvi N fenil romance omg words are less to describe!☺️

It was awesome continue very soon waiting eagerly!!

Oh I forgot accident?? Oh you will never separate so I am chilling out..😎

Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago

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Chocolava14

@Chocolava14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#489

Unres

A very good one...kya beginning thi...haaayeee...couple in luvv😳😉

Fenil nd yuvi romancr was also great...rough nf out of fear...

i dont think k fenil ko kuch hoga...but haa nandu ko zaroor hojayega,...i mean not literallly...but ya kind offf...

Mukti...poor soul...i m so able to understand her situation...she's scared to lose again...😭...the song is beautifullyy used i so luuvv ittt...i fell in luv wid it all over again❤️

Mukti is scared to fall in love again bcos...''the pain of losing people close to u is much more than the happiness of having them''💔

A cliiffhanger ending...but koi ni nandu ko kuch nhi huya i knw...its just a twist ...heheee⭐️

I so luv d precap song tooo😳😳

Lovely update:)😳

Always keep writing😊

Edited by Chocolava14 - 10 years ago