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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry guys, I know I am super late with the update but I was so busy but I will compensate with this... I know you will be little surprised cause there is two song sequence in this part but it is amazing... I know you guys were waiting but I really was busy first health and then function... Starsfireflies babes this one is for u and m sorry I made you wait for this but I know you will have smile in entire update

Chotusa recap:

Manik and Nandini- MaNan two body and a soul... The inseparable... Their sweet morning and lazy complaining nights... They unconditional love which is growing day by day..

Movie plan but Fab 5 busy nandini sad

Manik made her day..

Pool romance

And MaNan bedroom...

Back to story...

Chapter 3:

Nandini was happy seeing all of them together.. and she was surprised as she knew they were busy then how come they made it...

Surprised!! Fab 5- The fabulous 5 who never ever tolerated a single interference in their life, not a single entry in their life has Navya and Nandini now. Navini- an inseparable part of Fab 5... How? Nandini the cute little doll who always managed to amaze people by her innocence... Fab 5- they didn't knew when this cute little angel paved her way in their heart... Each one had their own reason or should I say own experience with this doll... Now they can't imagine their life without her...

Be it the incident when she courageously managed to talk to Cabir about R when no one had that courage to speak to him not his best friend Manik.

Or be it the night when she changed herself for gaining back Mukti's self respect, Mukti never expected she would wear such clothes just to support her cause she always bullied her but Nandini showered her with love.

Or be it the one when she always stood next to Dhruv to guide him as a loyal friend in spite of him being a jerk at once when he fought with his best friend only Nandini had hope he would return and he did.

Or be it the one whose efforts made DhruLya possible for Alya... When their love was lost somewhere she made them realized what they were missing in their life and now they are together.

They now consider her as a guiding book... she is so small yet she has seen a lot in life... She is so mature in front of all but, when it comes to her Monster she preferred being Babyish...

Manik- oh in his life how she made entry is still a puzzle cause, there was no single day in which she failed to make him fall for her more...

Nandini: guys.. tum sab toh busy the naa..

Cabir: han they toh sahi par jab tumhara monster hume bulata hai toh hum dar jaate hai usse avoid karnese..

Nandini: Cabir, kuch bhi han..

Manik: han Cabir tune kuch kaha?

Mukti: Manik tu iski jaan lega chod na isse..

Nandini made a fake pout showing them she was angry...

Cabir eyed Manik and asked him now?

Manik in gesture said let's do it in ManBir style

Everyone eyed ManBir and they pacified them saying they will handle... everyone became calm...

Everyone knew when Nandini was upset be it her acting or real thing only two men can please her... Manik and Cabir and the rest enjoyed the Trio... That was the world's best Trio...

Seeing them like this make them feel heavenly... They feel an angel is pleased two demons that turn kind only for her... When she is sad Fab world's seem to be sad and they can't afford it...

Nandini was making cute angry pouts like angry birds when suddenly she heard guitar playing...

Cabir started singing...

Cabir came to her and patted his head with her making dance same as the lyrics

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein, ulti pulti baatein seedhi lagti hai

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein, dushman ke iraade sacche lagtein hain

Manik started singing coming near her and making her watch to the sky...

He danced showing him crying act and suddenly then he smiled..

Jo dil mein taare vaare de jaga, woh tu hi hai, tu hi hai

Jo roote roote de hasa tu hi hai wohi

Manik signaled Cabir and they both danced gesturing to her making heart with hand and showing they will be alright..

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Cabir came near her and showed him with hand that whole world is on one side nad we two are on other..

Saari duniya ek taraf hai, ek taraf hai hum

Manik danced showing happy smile converted into sad face..

Har khushi to door bhage, mil rahein hai gum

Suddenly she smiled and ManBir together smiled and show that they are fine now and danced as they danced earlier making heart with hands and assuring now they are okay...

But when u smile for me, world seems all right

Yeh meri zindagi pal mein khil jaaye, jaane kyun

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Mukti Alya Dhruv Navya sang...

Yeah yeah yeah i' ll be all right, i' ll be all right...

Manik sings making small gestures with hand and showing his both hands entwined showing dostana...

Chhote chhote kuch palon ka dostana yeah

Cabir followed him showing gestures that hmmm aisa kuch hua tha...

Jaane kyun abb lag raha hai jaana maana yeah

She was smiling and she jumped on them and they held her both in their arms and danced making her swing...

Cos when smile for me, world seems all right

Yeah saare pal yehi yuhi tham se jaaye, jaane kyun

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai tu hai to i' ll be all right

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Everyone was mesmerizing the moment of Trio when Nandini dragged them

She gets down and everyone joins and they danced on the lyrics...

Tu hai to tedhi medhi rahein, ulti pulti baatein seedhi lagti hai

Tu hai to jhoothe muthe vaadein, dushman ke iraade sacche lagtein hain

Jo dil mein taare vaare de jaga woh tu hi hai, tu hi hai

Jo rote rote de hasa tu hi hai wohi

Jaane kyun dil jaanta hai, tu hai to i' ll be all right

Cabir: god that was some music... what say?

Mukti: yaa seriously man like after ages we made a song and all thanks to our pyari Nandini. Agar tum roothti nahi yeh log manate nahi and itna acha song nahi banate...

Dhruv: ssly buddy, what a song... we should use it for the next concert wat say?

Manik: guys, idea bura nahi hai... kya bolti ho madhubala?

Navya: han par yeh sirf Fab 5 ko suit karega...

Alya: Navya shayad tum bhul rahi ho ab yeh sirf Fab 5 nahi hai right?

Nandini: Guys come on... Fab 5 humesha Fab 5 hi rahega... Fab 7 sirf ek din ke liye tha...

Dhruv: guys I think inko batana padega ke one day ke liye nahi hum

Manik: ahh... buddy abhi nahi wait kar they both are tough nut to crack I will find a solution...

Ohh confused again... hmm my fault acha lemme tell you...

After fusion concert there was a classical musical concert and Nandini was very happy to take part in it but when she came to know that solo's are not registered she got sad. But Fab 5 noticed it and Mukti remembered something...

****

Flash back:

Mukti: guys let's help her..

Manik: are you crazy? Mukti it's classical how can we help her? I will talk to Nyonika

Cabir: he is right Mukti classical and us uff no match..

Alya: ya Mukti like look at her she is so sad

Dhruv: buddy you should talk to Nyonika but agar Nandini ko pata chala you gave her something toh she will get upset na ab?

Mukti: Guys kya hogaya hai tumhe, didn't you remembered? Classical workshop.. Mangalore..

Manik: oh yes... shit han na

Mukti: tum log na..

Cabir: oh yes we can help her now.. phew I was so scared..

Alya: yess and Alya hugs Dhruv... baby we can help her now..

Dhruv kisses her temple: yess baby b ut right now we are with everyone so control..

Everyone chuckled on Dhruv's response..

Manik: Nandini tum upset q ho?

Nandini: Manik mujhe participate karna hai b ut the rules y such rule?

Manik: arre you will participate..

Nandini: no Manik no give and take..

Navya: arre nandu kisne bola hum Manik ko aisa karne denge

Nandini confused: toh?

Mukti: we will participate..

Nandini was drinking coffee hearing Mukti she spitted it on ground...

Nandini: what?

Cabir: oh madam don't show such reaction shayad tum bhul gayi ho

Nandini: what bhul gayi?

Dhruv: Nandini classical workshop Mangalore..

Nandini: han but guys classical instruments kaise? You all don't know

Alya: Nandini shayad tum bhul rahi ho.. guru Maa ne kaha tha classical music hum apne instrument se bhi baja sakte hai

Nandini: oh yes.. and she hugs Manik tightly saying thank you...

Everyone was shocked with her gesture but they knew it's something she do more often..

Nandini is so shy kind of person but when it comes to show love and thanks to Manik she dint mind it showing openly because he deserves all that as she knew he can get stars for her if she ask it for... they love was seen by everyone and they feel lucky witnessing such pure passionate luv... sometimes they feel that this love should be protected as they knew that each of them is nothing without other and they can die if one is taken apart from other...

Finally they sang on classical concert as Fab 7 and they Fab 5 discussed within them of changing it to Fab 7...

Flashback ends..

*****

Cabir: uff guys let's do something...

Manik: kya kare?

Dhruv: let's play never had I ever...

Alya: Baby but we already have played it na

Nandini: yaa Alya is right..

Mukti: yaa but an innovation... let's play it like that...

Manik: like wat Mukti?

Mukti: acha hum yeh karte hai... will play never had I ever and say that but after wards we will do it it's like never had I ever dare...

Nandini: matlab?

Cabir: I got you Mukti.. and gives a devilish smile.. han toh nandini tumhe example deke samjhana padega..

Nadini: hmmm

Cabir: acha suppose karo maine bola never had I ever kissed someone to jisne kiss kia hai usko toh drink lena hai but jisne kiss nahi kia and jisne use kiss karna padega like maine bola.. baki sabne kia and Navya ne nahi kia to use kiss karna padega.. samjhi..

Nandini: hmmm but it seems scary...

Cabir: it seems wild hahahah

Manik: let's play but this time spin the bottle and the one who is caught will say never had I ever...

Alya: yo... Dhruv pointed to Alya n rest except MaNan let's have fun...

They mixed alcohol in Nandini's drink...

Spin the bottle... it stopped to Alya..

Alya: haha nice one Manik... okay so never had I ever sat in an autoriksha..

Everyone took a sip and eyed Alya for her stupid task

The game progressed and everyone was having fun... and the drink was getting on Nandini and she was really high... Manik was confused but thought maybe she had wrong drink then the bottle stopped on Mukti...

Manik: Mukti now don't say never had I ever done it okay cause it would be difficult...

Mukti: q Manik tujhe dar lag ra hai?

Manik: nahi main aur Nandini to pilenge sip haina Nandini?

Nandini in drowsy state: of course cause humne toh..

Manik puts his hand on her lips: Nandini... god u r high let's go in our room..

Nandini: nahi mujhe yahin rehna hai yahi...

Mukti: Manik chod na.. acha never had I ever... did a seductive dance... or be a part of it...

Everyone took a sip except MaNan..

Cbair: wohooo... so Nandini it's your turn to show some dance...

Manik: shut up Cabir..

Nandini: why shut up... it' okay I will take the punishment...you shut up and sit straight n be ready for my dance...

Mukti: arre Nandini is main dance karogi kurti main

Nandini: yess ab kya karu

Mukti: acha chalo lets change...

They disappeared to change and everyone settled on chairs and when she came down everyone had a jaw dropped but Manik had a tough time..

Nandini's attire: http://img.india-forums.com/images/600x0/365809-niti-taylor-at-kaisi-yeh-yaariyan-celebration.jpg

Nandini shouted: Mukti... music...

(just for setting the mood watch this video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qVByALF56_c)

Nandini seductively walks to him... Moves around him and go at his back and seductively moves her hand on his chest as his top three buttons was open her hands touched the exposing bare chest and it was getting tough for him to control but he had to their friends were around.. his thought was disturbed with her jerk that made him arched his back... everyone was looking at her with popping eyes...

Kuch khaas hai, kuch paas hai
Kuch ajn
abi ehsaas hai

she came in front and sat on his lap... took the hand in her hand and arched herself back showing the distance and came with a force bang with his chest anad wrapped her arms and legs over him... and parted and smiled naughtily... everyone was so shocked they thought of leaving but she stopped them gesturing with eyes giving a don't-you-dare-look...


Kuch dooriyan, nazdikiyaan
Kuch hans padi
tanhaiyaan

She got down held his hand and twirled herself making a hop turn sitting turn.. she turned and turned...
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya ait
baar hai

She made him get up from the seat and rubbed their cheeks and kissed his cheeks and saying pyar hai shayad...

Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Pyaar hai shayad
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya in
tezaar hai
Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Pyaar hai shayad

She came near Mukti and Cabir and said, "tumhe kya laga I am drunk... I exchanged the glasses... m the best actor what say"

She was disturbed by his jerk on her waist..

Manik held her waist and bought her so close that even air can't pass through them..

Kuch saaz hai, jaage se jo the soye
Alfaaz hai, chup se nashe mein khoye

Nandini looked straight in his eyes and moved her arms on his shoulder

Nazrein hi samjhe, yeh guftagu saari
Koi
arzoo ne hai angdayi li pyaari

Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai
Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Haan hai shayad

Nandini moved her arms and reached on his hand which were on her waist and made him tighten the grip and arched backward... Fab 5 thought of leaving them and come after the session is over and they left in lawn..

Naa inkaar hai, naa iqraar hai
Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Pyaar hai shayad

Nandini removed his shirt and kissed his chest and ran away feeling shy.. but Manik held his hand and pulled her and she banged with his chest..

He removed the hair strand from her face...

Kehna hi kya, mera dhakhal naa koi
Dil ko dikha, dil ki sha
kal ka koi

Nandini made him sit on chair she sat on him and moved with the rhythm that was enough to turn him on... and he attacked her neck and gave a love bite that she was carving for..

Dil se thi meri ek shart yeh aisi
Lage jeet si mujhko, yeh haar hai kaisi

Bukhaar hai, kyu beqraar hai

Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Pyaar hai shayad,

She parted away and twirl her head round showing him how wild he made her... both unable to control their needs...

Jadoo sawar hai, naa ifteaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai
Pyaar hai shayad,
Pyaar hai shayad

Ooo..
Kuch khaas hai, kuch paas hai
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai

Pyaar hai shayad
Pyaar hai shayad
Yahi..


She fixed her lips on his... they kissed wildly.. Passionately like there was no tomorrow... They broke the kiss realizing they were not alone... she felt suddenly so shy and realizing that Manik knew she was not drunk and acting make her more shy... Manik wore his shirt and picked her up and she hide her face in the crook of his neck...

Cabir was the first to speak after they returned: Uff garmi kuch badh nahi gayi?

Mutki: oh god I am still sweating

Nandini was just blushing..

Manik: okay guys no teasing...

Alya saw the mark: guys lagta hai we missed something hot...

Mukti: what?

Alya signaled the mark

Mukti: Manik you are really wild besahram

Nandini: bas bas... Guys bht hua... and tm logo ko main chodungi nai agar main nahi dekhti to u wud have made me drunk...

Manik giving puzzle look: what?

Nandini says all and they all burst in laughing and leave for their house...

Nandini ask Cabir to drop her as she knew that Nyonika Mam is returning and she dint wanted it to be difficult for Manik... she changed and Cabir took her and took Manik's leave.. Manik kissed her forehead and said, "laters baby"

On the way home, Cabir abruptly stop the car...

Nandini on getting a jerk : kya hua Cabir?

Cabir: Nandini wo... who samne

Nandini was shocked to see Raghav and then she saw Cabir who was highly disturbed..

Nandini moves her arm at Cabir's back: calm down Cabir.. lets talk..

Cabir moves out of car...

Cabir: R forget R... Raghav tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Raghav hugs Cabir

Cabir was taken aback he was hurt but he was not able to control his feelings...

Nandini stepped out and parted them: Raghav sir not again..

Raghav: I can explain

Nandini: fine... get in the car.. Cabir mere ghar... Chacha chachi is out..

Cabir: hmm still shocked..

Nandini knew that Raghav is not the one for Cabir but then she even knew Cabir's feeling for him and she wanted the thing which was left half should be completed this chapter should be finished for one and ol... she knew the pain.. she went thru it Manik chose that Mukti went thru it... Navya, Dhruv, Alya everyone even Cabir but our pain was cleared but Cabir he took the pain daily and she wanted to end that...

She quickly messaged Manik, "come to my home fast need you"

Manik got tensed and within no time he was there after they reached he was there... he was shocked to see Raghav he wanted to smash his face but he was stopped by Nandini...

Nandini: Manik please calm down..

Manik: tum mujhe q rok rahi hun.. main uska muh tod deta.. why humari life simple sorted nahi hoti.. hare ek din ek nahi chiz..

Nandini: Manik, life simple hoti toh hum ek nahi hote.. haina?

Manik: tum humesha har chiz main positivity kaise dhund leti ho

Nandini: jab hum kisi chiz main negarive dekhte haina tab kya hota hai Manik?

Manik: kya hota hai nandini..

Nandini: tab Manik, hum us chiz main kabhi positivity nai dekh sakte.. toh q na pehle se acha dekhe toh shayad life thodi sorted hojaye

Manik: jaise hum?

Nandini: hum kaha aaye?

Manik: arre see humare main.. humare main negativity hogi shayad but kitna positivity hai.. mere good looks.. meri intelligence.. mera love.. mera care see..

And with this he smirks n winks

Nandini makes a cute pout

Manik: acha acha baba okay... you win...

Nandini and Manik were doing masti wali fighting when suddenly due to Manik she got a cut on her finger n it started to bleed and he got so tensed that it bought first aid and did the bandage..

He hugged her tightly...

Nandini parted and said: Manik it's a small cut relax..

Manik: m sorry m so dumb

Nandini: Manik shh...

Manik: nahi Nandini dint you remembered because of me you were in hospital...

***

Flash back...

It was a night when Dhruv and Alya had a fight and Dhruv almost raised his hand on Alya and Manik came in between and they had a fought... Manik left from their and Nandini followed him as she knew he would need her... but Manik was so angry that when she held his hand he dint knew it was her he jerked and she fell on ground where there was glass piece that entered her back and she cried in pain... Manik was shocked he ran her to hospital.. and informed everyone.. and they reached in no time and consoled Manik that she would be fine..

Life without nandini was also going good but life with nandini is something Manik never imagined can be so bful. He knew leaving in darkness is so painful but now he is more scared to go back there and that fear is always there in his heart in the form of losing nandini..

It was always difficult for him to see her in pain but this time it was hurting him more cause the reason why she was on that hospital bed was he himself.. nandini was always right his anger will one day make him loose his most precious thing and she is the most precious lying on bed with her eyes closed.. it ached him a lot..

Nandini gained consciousness and the first word she uttered was : Manik..

Manik came and hugged her and said he was sorry..

She took time to recover.. but she was soon okay..

Flashback

*****

Nandini shakes Manik: Manik Manik..

Manik coming out of trance again hugged her tightly...

Nandini calmed him down and made her sleep on her lap...

Nandini knew that incident had shaken Manik a lot that a simple slit on her makes him go mad... he is so vulnerable in front of her and even Fab 5 knew that... she was always careful about herself... she too slept by resting her head on head board...

Phew... finally... completed..

Precap:...

Cabir and Raghav...

Note:

Help... Fab 7 is ok with u ol?

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Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Okay, firstly hello everyone!! Yeah I know you all are really pissed off on me.. Like seriously how can I? How can you do this Kiara? 15 long days and no updates...

Uff... m so bad! So daggers, guns, bombs everything I mean every damn thing you can throw on me for being so late. Okay no excuses this time but kya karu..

Acha leave all this and let us all see what I have written to compensate your wait..

Hmmm...

Chapter 11:

Part A:

"Maaannikkk, did you hear it? Oh man! Like seriously vegas? Ahhh I feel like screaming...", said an overjoyed Mukti after jumping on Manik hugging him. "Oh meri gadhadhari Bhim, you are already screaming now what tumhe yahan ke glasses todne hai", said an irritated Cabir. "Oh joker, tu to chup hi reh and tu khus nahi hai kya?", asked Mukti breaking her friendly hug. "han Cabir, tu khus nahi hai kya?", questioned Manik. "Arre guys, take a break. Of course main khus hun but zaruri nahi hai na ke main meri khusi Mukti ke jaise define karu", said Cabir in teasing way enough to irritate Mukti.

"Okay guys, enough of all this let's celebrate what say?", asked Alya. Listening to party everyone started hooting and praising Alya for a wonderful idea but, the two souls looked at each other cause they were in dilemma. Nandini has already invited Manik and Saturday is the only day they can be together so she was confused as to what does she do now? She can't say no to her friends nor can she ruin their Saturday and her train of thoughts was interrupted by a call and the caller id showed CHACHI. "Guys, excuse me it's chachi", saying this she excused herself.

On call,

Nandini: Han Chachi bolo..

Chachi: Nandu, Manik ne bataya ke kya khayega wo?

Nandini: Chachi wo..

Chachi sensed a tensed Nandini and asked: Kya hua Nandu?

Nandini described the whole incident and Chachi felt bad for MaNan but she immediately came up with an idea.

Chachi: Nandu, let us do this... bring everyone to our house for party and then they will leave early as they know Chacha Chachi needs to sleep early and you both can have your lone time.

Nandini was overjoyed with the idea and she thanked Chachi zillionth times.

Shanno ji- Nandini Chachi, you all might be thinking how come she is so open about MaNan's relation, right? It's because she understands them, she knows that Manik will never leave her side and moreover she understands the generation they are leaving in. obviously she is not aware of the hot romance they are involve in but she knows that Manik will never leave her side. He will be there for her to protect her when she falls, to guide her when she is lost and to be with her always. And the incident of the past she can trust Manik blindly..

FLASHBACK **

"Nandini tum niche jao I want to talk to Manik akele main", said an angry Chachi when she found Manik in Nandini room. Even though Manik was sleeping on couch Chachi was upset because it was all hidden from her and moreover they just started dating. "Chachi but WO let me explain ", said a scared Nandini. "Nandini maine kaha na niche jao", this time her voice was much firm that she had to leave and as soon as she left Manik said, "Chachi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa aap samajh rahe hai, han main yahan aata hun roz just to see Nandini and I always sleep on this couch. Chachi aap please galat mat samjho Chachi wo I like watching her sleep she looks like a baby. Usne mujhe bht bar mana kia but main hi stubborn tha. Chachi please" he spoke all of this in a breath. For the first time in life, Manik Malhotra was scared not because he was caught but because he was afraid to lose her but what Chachi said did froze him on his place, "Manik beta, main isliye gussa nahi hunk e tum yahan ho... gussa toh main hun hi nahi but I am hurt cause tum logo ne mujhse chupaya. Manik beta tum pe main bht trust karti hun and main yeh bhi jaanti hunk e tum kya kehna chahte ho, I trust you both isliye main waise kuch samjhi nahi thi na aisa samjhi hun but main hurt hun cause tum logo ne mujhe nahi bataya. Manik beta maine kabhi bhi tumhe ghar aane se nahi rook to tum mujhe bolte to main isliye bhi shayad nahi rokti cause I trust you both. But agar tumhe kisine dekh liye hota bahar se toh? Kya tumhe lagta hai wo believe kart eke aisa kuch nahi hai? Manik hum kitna bhi bol de ke society doesn't matters to us but somewhere it does. They are always waiting for a topic to gossip and when they get it they will speak shit about it and no one is interested in listening the truth or justification cause all of us want drama in our life. Think wisely before you act", said Chachi in a most understandable tone. "and darwaze pe mat khadi re hander aaja and dono taiyar hoke niche aajana", said Chachi to Nandini when she was peeping from the door. Chachi was leaving when she turned and said again, "and yeh nahi tha ki mujhe pata nahi tha but I was waiting for you to tell. I am not only a mother to you both but I am a friend too. Aur han yeh jo kuch nahi hua humare bich wali line hain na yehi bhi mujhe pata hai kitne din rahegi. I understand we all grow up and we do need an "ACT" to show our love and I even trust you both but there is an appropriate time for all this. Have that complete trust on each other and let ur relation progress and always remember the good and bad consequences. Coz jitna mere hath main hoga utna hi main rok paungi, pyaar baya karne se nahi rok sakti par use nibhana bhi tumhe hi hoga and now stop blushing ke Chachi ne green zandi de di. Get ready and come downstairs and Han aur ek bat, Manik next time permission leke darwaze se aana ", said Chachi leaving the duo in the room all embarrassed and shy.

Six months passed away of this incident and after this incident Manik use to visit murthy's place only on Saturday asking an official permission to stay with Nandini. But things evolve and so did their relation and this naughty secret is safe only till MaNan. And moreover Saturdays and Sundays Chacha Chachi doesn't stay at Murthy's Place they stay at their new house in colaba.

FLASHBACK ENDS **

"Nandini kaha khoyi ho?", asked Manik after he saw her smiling alone holding her phone and breaking her trance she said, "kahi nahi let's go". "Okay, so guys Chachi gave this rocking idea of us celebrating with her at my place what say?", everyone started jumping with joy but a pair of hands dragged her to a corner and she knew these was coming.

"Are you insane? First of all its Saturday so Chacha Chachi Risabh they would be at colaba and its our night Nandini", cribbed Manik like a 2 year old kid complaining to his mom. Nandini snaked his arms over his neck which was a complete shock to Manik. "Stop cribbing like a baby Manik, baby karne ki age hai and tum khud baby ho rahe ho hawww very bad!", answered a bold Nandini and Manik was taken aback by her answer. "Ehem ehem, am I dreaming or are you saying all this in real?", this were the only words Manik managed to speak. Nandini pinched him hard to make him realize he is not dreaming "ouch, are you made?", was an agitated response of Manik to the sudden pinch. "I am just making you realize you are not dreaming Mr. Malhotra", said Nandini teasing him by caressing the back of his ear which she knew ignites sparks in his body. "Acting smart Miss Murthy?", asked Manik holding her deadly close to him by her waist to which Nandini replied, "Am born smart, Mr. Malhotra" and her answer made her even more closer to him. "then where did you smartness go when you were inviting our friends at your house when you know it's our night" said irritated Manik and she replied "I have made plans Mr. Malhotra and it won't fail... Chachi and I are smart don't worry and Chachi will leave after our friends leave and Chachi said she will make bahana that Chachi Chacha are at home they might sleep early and when our friends leave she will leave too and then we can be alone". "Oh, smart han chalo to let's go", Manik was leaving when she held his hand pulled him close to her and again Manik mouth turned an O' to her response which says, "and yes Manik Malhotra you are calling your dead today wait and watch", she said so seductively licking his ears in between and when she saw his mouth turned into an O' she went to his lips and sucked his lower lip seductively and kissed him and left the place. Manik was standing there trying to get a grip on what happened a minute earlier. He had never seen her so bold and he was thinking and talking to himself, "Manik I seriously feel you are calling your dead today cause she seemed to be spelled by some romantic fairy".

"Manik chale ab", asked Mukti breaking his trance and they all departed for their home and Manik went to drop Nandini.

In car,

"Nandini wo, umm I mean", Manik was actually stammering while talking to her and she was actually enjoying it. It seemed liked a role reversal for her and she moved towards Manik and Manik trying hard to concentrate while driving. She came more close near his eyes and her breath was making Manik lose his control and she said, "Abhi toh Maine sirf bola hai toh tumhari halat hai, m afraid what you will be when the night comes" and after finishing the statement she kissed Manik's neck almost giving him a love bite and Manik applied a sudden break. "What is wrong with you Nandini I would have lost the balance" said Manik a little agitated now so Nandini stopped her tantrums and sat quietly and thought of switching on the radio but to her luck and Manik's dismay the radio supported her completely.

Khwaab hoon

Main toh makhmali..

Palkon mein le ja mujhe

Maine diya mauka tujhe ajanabi

Hosh mein

Aaye naa abhi

Ik duje mein hi kahin

Khoyi rahe teri meri zindagi..

Khamoshiyan dhadkanon ki

Suna.. jaa

Jane kya hona hai kal

Aa zara

Kareeb se jo pal mile

Naseeb se

Aa jaa..

Manik changed the song but it actually seemed today was the death of Manik

Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re

Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re



Manik was trying hard to cope up and once again he changed the song and all the while Nandini was just laughing..

Meri jazbon ki jo bhi halat hai
Wo samjh lo na bin kahe

In labon se kahon
Jo armaan hai
Barso yeh honth chup rahe

Thandi thandi agan hain
Meethi meethi chubhan hai
Jhudti jhudti hai tujhse aas

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag na na jaa

Manik was regretting his luck and now when he changed it was an big O' to both of them but Nandini was just loving it...

Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja
Phool bicha perfume laga ke
Mood banao taaja taaja
Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja..


Manik decided it was better to off the radio as he has had enough of this control. If he would have been alone right now he would have eaten her lips but for a change he was feeling shy and this was hard for him to digest. He dropped Nandini and while he was leaving he heard a tap on his window, "tonight you will b surprised and it would be the most memorable day I promise", she said it so seductively and kissed his cheeks and went it.

It was hard for Manik to control all the emotions and at the end waiting for her and meeting her.


Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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This is my gift to all the beautiful readers of my FF as I am damn happy even this has two reasons:
1) KYY played "I'll be alright a song I wrote in my ff
2) Secondly cause my bae my hottie ParthSamthaan performed like a hero.
Ya I am obviously sad as he is suffering from viral fever and even m suffering from same but his smile oh god just one line, "coz when he smiles for me world seems alright".
So lovelies, if you are mad like me crazy like me and insane like me (as I lose my sanity when I get a glimpse of Parth) then enjoy this update. It might be short but it has all my love and m happy...

Chapter 6:
Manali trip starts...

All of them reach Manali and finally they are like on the top of the world.
"Manik, this is all i ever wanted to be on a trip to Manali with the.." She stopped realising what she was saying and Manik continued, "with the one you love." Manik held her hand and sneaked her somewhere. "Manik, tum yeh kya kar rahe ho? We are at some other place we should be safe na?" Manik just kept his finger on her lips and said his favourite dialogue "shh, don't spoil it". They were about to kiss but Their precious moment was interrupted by none other than Mr. Abhimanyu Thakkar.
Abhi: hey Nandu tum yahan ho and i was like finding you everywhere.
Manik: ohh Nandini suna he was like finding you everywhere. He said in angry bird mode.
Nandini pressed Manik's hand asking him to calm down: han Abhi, you are knew you can ask fab 5 and Navya that if wanna find me than you have to find Manik coz jahan woh hota hai wahin main hoti hun and vice verse, right guys?

Everyone was shocked not at the answer cause that was the fact but in how boldly she said that but they knew she said that to calm the volcano in her coconut faced Bf.

Cabir: welcome to the world of MaNan, abhimanyu.
Nandini: okay lets go to our hotel, get freshen up and then we will talk.
Manik: han jaldi.

They reach the hotel and Mukti signalled rest of the girls including Nandini.
Mukti: han manager two big rooms, one for boys and other for girls ya
Manik: what what two rooms? I mean ke
Cabir: what manik?
Manik: nahi matlab you know two rooms main you know
Navya: han we are listening continue
Manik: kuch nahi, aap teen room karna mera akela ka samjhe. He shouted on manager and seeing his anger manager gave up.
Manager: arre arre sir 4 room book kie hai..
Names:
1) Manik Malhotra and Nandini
2) Dhruv vedant and Alya
3) cabir dhawan
4) Mukti vardhan and navya naveli

Everyone was shocked and girls laughed their heart out.
Abhi: please check abhimanya thakkar?
Manager: sorry sir but we informed you via a message no rooms available
Abhi: what?
Manik: ah abhimanyu right, you can stay with Cabir if you want.
Abhi hugged manik and that pissed Manik: ty dude.
Manik: Abhimanyu its ok.

Manik and Nandini along with others went to their room...
Manik lifted her as soon as they went in the room.
Manik: welcome Miss Murthy.
Nandini: thank you Mr. Malhotra
But Manik being Manik he started to tease her by kissing her neck and cheeks and here and there but Nandini new how to make him calm..
She kissed him... And their lips met and they kissed till they were short of breath.
They then got fresh and met everyone outside...


Sorry for a promo type chapter but my eyes are hurting like hell but i had to write and i am having high fever hope you understand

Precap:
Keep thinking

Note:
Cabir is not gay
Navya is not pregnant
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Apologies guys, I know you all are much upset with for not updating for so long but I was either ill or messed up with my life. But I will make sure that now you all don't have to wait too long. I know all of you were waiting for my update to this story so I am again sorry for updating late. This update is dedicated to my sweeties Aayu and Tosh. Girls I hope now you guys will stop teasing me.

Chapter 7:

It was evening by the time everyone got freshen up they all were a bit tired and thought of starting the trip tomorrow and just roaming the city today. Cabir gave Manik a weird look indicating something that did in past or ever thought of doing.

Cabir: Guys tapri ki chai?

Mukti: are you made Cabir like who has tapri ki chai?

Nandini: Mukti trust me its worth having tapri ki chai.

Alya: guys but look around it's so tacky.

Dhruv: Alya chill it would be amazing trust me.

It was cold and Manik saw Nandini shivering a bit as she was in white hot shorts and a lemon yellow loose crop top. Manik took her in a side hug and she snuggled closer. Manik then whispered in her ears, "itni thand thi toh tumne shorts q pehne madam?" to which she replied, "because I knew you were there to take me in your embrace", saying this she winked. They reached at the stall and got seated but on the very next moment Nandini and Navya looked at each other and almost shouted at the top of their voice, "ahhh kullad ki chai this is awesome", Navya and Nandini hugged each other and others just looked at them. "They are crazy now what this kullad is?", the chai wale bhaiya replied, "bibiji yeh hai kullad". He showed them the kullad and seeing that all of their eyes came out of their sockets and NavNi just laughed looking at them. "haha you might be joking right this is not the cup we gonna have tea in right?" the bhaiya looked puzzle so Nandini replied, "Manik, hum issi main chai piyenge", "Are you nuts yeh toh mitti se bana hai hum mitti piyenge", asked Mukti. NavNi laughed and assured them they would love it. They had their kullad and NavNi had their first sip "surp surp" they were making the noise sipping it and everyone was staring at them Cabir was the first to take the sip but was stopped by Navya asking him to drink like them making noise Cabir hesitated but knowing the girls won't let her drink as such he accepted his defeat and drank the way they did. "bhai log this might seem crazy but it's yum like what a chai I never ever can forget this taste its superb", said Cabir and everyone had their tea and enjoyed it. Manik was surprised how his doll has invaded his friend's life so much. They feel so privileged having her and he thanked her for wonderful chai experienced but he wanted to gift her something for all she does to them. And he exactly knew what he can. So when they were all walking down the lane he left her hand and came in front of them and sang.

(A little modification in the lyrics and aayu this is for u baby)

Manik starts singing

She's been my queen since I was nineteen
We want the same things, we dream the same dreams, alright, alright
I got it all cause she is the one
Her aunt calls me love, her uncle calls me son, alright, alright
I know, I know, I know for sure

he comes near her and takes her hand twirls her..
he takes out a heart balloon suddenly from the back of her shocking everyone indicating it's her heart and everyone wanna take it away but it is always with me.
Showing eye to everyone he pulls her close to him in a side hug holding her tight by waist saying she belongs to him.


Everybody wanna steal my girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to me


Everyone sings in chorus.. Encircling the duo in the centre..


Everybody wanna steal his girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to him

Na na na na na na (oh yeah)
Na na na na na na (alright)
Na na na na na na

She belongs to him


Manik then comes near her traces her creamy lips and makes her walk near him staring the way she walk showing the rest that it's killer the way she walks showing her see everyone's jaw is dropped when u walk in such clothes and she blushed
Kisses like cream, her walk is so mean
And every jaw drops when she's in those jeans, alright, alright

He holds her hand and looks deep in her eyes saying he means the lyrics that he exists only cause of her.. telling her that the sun doesn't shine if you don't get uo and the world doesn't turn if u don't smile.

I don't exist if I don't have her
The sun doesn't shine, the world doesn't turn, alright, alright
But I know, I know, I know for sure

he again takes her and makes a cute pout saying everyone was steal u away and she shows him the balloon saying but my heart is with you and he smiles holds her by her waist and she snakes her arms over his head and they look in each other's eyes

Everybody wanna steal my girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to me

Everyone sings together mesmerized by the love between the duo..
Everybody wanna steal his girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to his

Na na na na na na (oh yeah)
Na na na na na na (alright)

Manik pulled her close when she was going and she saw him almost teary and so she cupped his face and kissed his cheeks while he was singing and a tear rolled down his cheeks and everyone were moved by the scenes


She knows, she knows
That I never let her down before
She knows she knows
That I'm never gonna let another take her love from me now


Everybody wanna steal my girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to me

Everyone sings Abhi lifted Nandini and Cabir and Dhruv lifted Manik and they sang

Everybody wanna steal his girl
Everybody wanna take her heart away
Couple billion in the whole wide world
Find another one cause she belongs to him

Na na na na na na (oh yeah)
Na na na na na na (alright)
Na na na na na na


Manik came to her and repeated..
She belongs to me

Na na na na na na (oh yeah)
Na na na na na na (alright)
Na na na na na na

She belongs to me

He kissed her forehead and took her in a hug and everyone watched them. DhruLya hugged and Navya side hugged Cabir and Mukti accidently hugged Abhi and on realizing left his side.

They all had dinner and sat in a lawn for a chit chatting session. Nandini made an introductory session for Abhi and when she introduced him to Mukti they blushed a bit remembering the hug thing. They were talking about all their lives when Abhi said an incident on which Mukti said, "oh god so filmy" and Abhi gave a famous dialogue, "yeh sab ab tumhe filmy lag raha hai baby-doll ek zamane main inhi lino pe marakarti thi tum", Mukti was like what are saying look to which Abhi said, "arre yar iske bad ke line aisi nahi hai it's like, main tumpe marti thi please", Mukti was puzzled when Nandini cleared the air saying, "Mukti chill Abhi ko YEH JAWAANI HAI DEEWANI fever hai so chill and he is no one nautanki baaz", "bas han Nandu don't open my secrets", they were talking when Manik saw Nandini snuggling close to her and her breathing getting heavy he understood she was fast asleep he signaled everyone of retiring in the rooms. He lifted Nandini in his arms and took her to the room and made her rest on the bed. He went to the cupboard and took out her night clothes and called someone and there was slight knock on the door. "please yeh kapde badlado main bahar rukta hoon", Manik said Navya.

It's not that Manik has never seen her without clothes obviously they had made love he had seen her but then we can't understand Manik Malhotra na right? He was a pure soul and he knew she was the purest he wanted to do everything to her with her permission and when she conscious. He knew he has entire life to change her clothes when they are married so why to haste. And other hand he wanted her permission for everything. He knew they were too fast but he also knew she was with her. Navya came out and saw Manik sitting near the door she was amazed how a monster turned so sweet and caring. She said to herself if someone would have asked her on the initial days of SPACE that Manik called her for help then she would have died but today she knew he is changed. All of them knew the extent their relationship has reaches but still he doesn't do anything without her permission. She patted his back and said it's done.

Manik went inside the room and saw her princess sleeping like a baby he changed and slept next to her. She came over him and softly spoke, "tumne khud q nahi kia?", "tum uth gayi" he replied. "yeh mere question ka answer nahi hai Manik", said Nandini to which Manik took her completely over him and she laid on him and he held her tied and replied, "wo isliye because tum sori thi thi and mujhe kuch bhi tumhare permission ke bina nahi karna tha". She kissed his lips so softly yet filled with love and tears rolled down her cheeks realizing how lucky she was having him in her life. He knew she was overwhelmed he kissed away the tears and said, "actually that was not the sole reason you know if I would have changed then I would have seen you naked and you know na how breathless you make me when I see your flawless skin and then I would have started", he was interrupted by a punch on his stomach by Nandini who was blushing hard. Manik saw that and smirked while Nandini exactly knew what to do, she started tickling him and he was laughing and asking her to stop but she dint but to her dismay he turned her and pinned her to bed and whispered, "now I have you Nandini murthy ab kaha jaogi", he said it so huskily that sent shivers down er spine and melted her insides and she was only able to say this between her breathes, "ma.. aaanik... leave-me - you - are - just - making - me", before she could complete his lips were in her kissing passionately, lovingly. They both parted away cause they were gasping but Manik didn't leave her body he kissed her necked and entwined their fingers but what happened the next moment was shocking. He got off her and took her over him and made her rest her head on his chest and hugged her asking her to sleep as it was late and they had to start the camp tomorrow. "Manik stop!! You know she is very delicate and fragile you can't. A kiss makes her breath so heavily control Manik!!", said Manik's inner soul and so he jerked himself off her and she understood him so well that she knew the reason for his behavior but she felt blessed as she knew there are very less boys left on earth who can stop themselves at that moment controlling their urge and she was lucky to have him and she even know he is a single piece created by God a real gem. She snuggled him more close and soon they both drifted in sleep.

Morning at Manali...

MaNan were sleeping cozily in each other's arms and suddenly there was a loud noise of a song playing on television suraj dooba hai yaaron was playing at loud noise and they saw their friends standing in front of them. They were shocked to see them and they sat on the bed. "What the f**k guys, tum log andar kaise aaye?, asked Manik. "Agar tu aisehi darwaza kholke soyega toh hum kya koi bhi aajayega", replied Mukti. And then he realized he was so busy looking at her that he forgot close the door and Nandini eyed him to which he said sorry in gesture by holding his ears. "yaar tum dono bht kho jaate ho apne main agar yeh look look khatan hogaya ho totum dono fresh hoke aajao tumhara breakfast yeh raha track will start in an hour jaldi", teased Cabir. They had breakfast when all of them left and go fresh and met everyone one at their starting point where they were given some instruction and they reached the last point where fab5 NavNi and Abhi asked for the point which was located at the top to which the guide said no one goes there as they think it is haunted and had a temple and it was believed a wish made over there is always fulfilled. They came down it was almost 6pm. They made tent and thought of a camp fire.

"Nice idea and then we all will play Antakshari it would be fun", said Cabir and for a change everyone thought it might be a nice idea. Navya was the one to initiate, "kuch toh hua hai kuch hogaya hai do char din se lagta hai aisa ab kuch alag sab naya hai kuch toh kuch hogaya hai", she sang looking in Cabir's eyes and he was the next to sing, "hai agar dushman dushman zamana gam nahi gam nahi koi aaye koi hum kisi se kam nahi", he sand irritating Navya. "Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte, tera bina kya wajood mera. Tujhse juda agar hojayenge to khudse hojayenga", Dhruv sang the entire song kneeling in front of Alya looking in her eyes holding her hand and everyone enjoyed the song. "hum dil dechuke sanam tere hogaye hai hum teri kasam", sang Alya holding dhruv's hand. "main tenu samjhawa ki na tera bina jee tu ki jane pyar mera main kara intezar tera tu dil jaan meri" sang Mukti with all the emotion waiting for her boy to come. "janam dekhlo mit gayi dooriya main yahan hun yahan hun yaha", Abhi sang dancing with Nandu but he was singing for Mukti. Everyone enjoyed but someone was boiling and it was his chance.

Manik sang pulling Nandini from Abhi and it was not a shock to anyone except Abhi cause they knew how possessive Manik was..

"tumhe koi aur dekhe to jalta hai dil,
badi mushkilo se phir ssambhal ta hai dil
ooo tumhe koi aur dekhe to jalta hai dil
badi mushkilo se phir sambhalta hai
kya kya jatan karte hai tumhe kya pata...

Yeh dil bekarar kitna yeh hum nahi jaante..
magar jee nahi sakte tumhare bina..
humein tumse pyaar kitna yeh hum nahi jante
magar jee nahi sakte tumhare bina"

He sang entire song looking deep in her eyes and holding her tight digging nails on her waist she was in pain but she knew he was just imprinting him on her. It was her chance to make him calm and sing for him. She sang,

"Tum ko paa hi liya
Maine yun
Jaise main hoon
Ehsaas tera
Paas main tere hoon
Tumko paa hi liya
Paa hi liya Maine yun...

Tum ko
Jahaan main
Jahaan pe apne
Seene se laga le
Main toh hui ab tere hawaale
Aaa...
Bandishe naa rahi
Koi baatein Tum ko

Tum ko paa hi liya
Paa hi liya
Maine yun
Jaise main hoon ehsaas tera
Paas main tere hoon"

She sang assuring him she is all his...

They ended the session and retire there tents..

Precap:

Bhuta parvat hehehehehehehehe...

Note:

Okay guys I know I know I am late but you have to bear
love,
Kiara.







Edited by kiaraMaNanholic - 10 years ago
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Promo:

Scene 1:

Nandini: guys.. tum sab toh busy the naa..

Cabir: han they toh sahi par jab tumhara monster hume bulata hai toh hum dar jaate hai usse avoid karnese..

Nandini: Cabir, kuch bhi han..

Manik: han Cabir tune kuch kaha?

Mukti: Manik tu iski jaan lega chod na isse..

Scene 2:

Nandini's attire: http://img.india-forums.com/images/600x0/365809-niti-taylor-at-kaisi-yeh-yaariyan-celebration.jpg

Music: kuch khas hai kuch paas hai kuch ajnabi ehsas hai..

(imagine the scene)

Scene 3:

Nandini: Manik, life simple hoti toh hum ek nahi hote.. haina?

Manik: tum humesha har chiz main positivity kaise dhund leti ho

Nandini: jab hum kisi chiz main negarive dekhte haina tab kya hota hai Manik?

Manik: kya hota hai nandini..

Nandini: tab Manik, hum us chiz main kabhi positivity nai dekh sakte.. toh q na pehle se acha dekhe toh shayad life thodi sorted hojaye

Manik: jaise hum?

Nandini: hum kaha aaye?

Manik: arre see humare main.. humare main negativity hogi shayad but kitna positivity hai.. mere good looks.. meri intelligence.. mera love.. mera care see..

And with this he smirks n winks

Nandini makes a cute pout

Scene 4:

Life without nandini was also going good but life with nandini is something Manik never imagined can be so bful. He knew leaving in darkness is so painful but now he is more scared to go back there and that fear is always there in his heart in the form of losing nandini..

It was always difficult for him to see her in pain but this time it was hurting him more cause the reason why she was on that hospital bed was he himself.. nandini was always right his anger will one day make him loose his most precious thing and she is the most precious lying on bed with her eyes closed.. it ached him a lot..

So guys this is all I can do for today I am so tired and yet not completely fre so bear with it.. I promise kal se chapter starts.. I will give and compensate promise...

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Promo:

Scene 1:

Manik sweetly opens his eyes and gets super happy seeing the love of his life in front of him...

Nandini: good morning, rockstar..

Manik: good morning, princess!!

Nandini: so ab tum thik ho?

Manik: yess... tum sath ho toh kya bat hai...

Nandini: ohh, subah subah bht zyada pyar aara hai bat kya hai?

Manik: bat yeh hai Miss. Murthy...

Scene 2:

Cabir: tumhe aisa lagta hai?

R: Cabir tum samjh nahi rahe... Manik is manipulating you..

Cabir: not a word against him... tum jaante kitna ho Manik ko?

R: see he became a reason for our distance..

Cabir: firstly, he is not a reason you are... he supported me when you left me alone to get tortured and secondly, it's over between us.. U and Me we are over..

Scene 3:

Girl's room...

Mutki: guys tension bht badh gayi hai kya kare?

Alya: yaa pehle Raghav then harshad aur ab Nyonika...

Navya: mujhe samjh nahi aata puri duniya ko chod ke logo ko sirf hum milte hain and specially yeh do angels q padte rehte hai MaNan ke piche sab..

Mukti: Nandini tum thik ho?

Nandini thinking: hmmm

Navya: kya hmm?

Alya: han Nandini kuch toh bolo

Nandini: guys vacationd kya bolte ho?

Mukti: oh god you are our guiding star...

Scene 4:

Manik: will go ladakh road trip...

Nandini: plan maine banaya so jahan man bolungi wahi jayenge..

Manik: jee nahin boys are always right..

Nandini: oh really, in ur dreams..

Manik held her from waist.. and whispers in her ear.. "Don't force me to do anything"

Nandini goes near his ears and say, "Manik... and she bite his ear and he leaves her

Nandini: In your dreams...

Trip to Manali starts...

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Promo

Scene 1:

Manik: so here you go... in this packet there is that thing I want you to wear but Nandini... he said so huskily that it sent shivers down her spine...

Nandini: Manik...

They way she say Manik, makes him crazy

Manik: shh.. don't repeat or else it would be difficult... as I was saying you don't have to if you are not comfortable...

Scene 2:

Manik was dumbfound, love struck... he just can't take off his eyes from her..

Her body was glowing as if she just came out bathing from some melted gold pool... (shit I literally said that hehe)

Nandini: Manik where are you lost?

Manik: in u,,,

Nandini blushed...

Scene 3:

Steamy pool dance...

Scene 4:

MaNan in Manik's bedroom...

Comment to get update by night...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Guys look m extremely sorry but I won't be able to update except Saturdays and Sundays as i have a bery busy schedule..
I have training to do at forensic sciences laboratory and the time is the 10am-6pm and i have to travel for that as it is away from college 45 mins and it's exhausting cause we have to stand all the time we work and deal with the organs and then writing is very difficult for me...
I hope you guys understand and don't get detached from my story..
Cause my story is going on full fledged and i get so drained off..
I really want to write but my body doesn't help me..
Please m sorry m holding my ears..
Please don't get detached from my bany update i love it so much..
I love you all...

M sorry my tosh baby and aayu baby please guys bear with this..
Love,
Kiara!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
Res
unres...
...heartbeats increasing its pace evry second...uneven breathing...goosebumps...shivering...that feeling...still breathing heavily...what is happening??!!! All the blood settled in my cheeks...yuvi...gosh! Am still not out of shock!! Hottest sexiest most sizzling shock of my life!!! Oh kiara!! What did u write?? My vocabulary is ditching me...YUVRAJ THAKUR..MY YUVI...my heart..my soul..my life..my everything...i am at fenil's place now...meri halat pata nhi kya ho gya hai...!! My god!! I am blushing..smiling lyk a love addicted person!! Okay that was damn hott!! Too much!! Just speechless!! I am tryin to recover...but no..am still in the shock!! Kiara!! This was seriously my death!! I am literally clean-bowled!!! But im worried for my yuvi...what is bothering him?? Why was he so rough??!!! I just nothin happens to my love...!!
Okay comin to MaNan...the start itself made me blush!! Gosh! So bold!!! Loved them!! Towel thingy was hilarious!! LMAO!!
MukBhi...mukti shud've trusted abhi...but she's forced not to trust him...she had enough betrayal in her life...abhi's love for her is true...its heartbreaking wenevr i hear mukti's past...cabir is truly a great friend to everyone!! Mukti's song..modified one...the lyrics are freaking awesome!!! Loved hw she glared harshad wid all the hatred she had fr him!! Loved the MukBhi confession too!! Love u so much kiara fr making MukBhi happen so fast!! Love u for much more reasons too;):D...
I had guessed it..i understood that nandu is gonna meet an accident wen u said "and was crossing.." b4 mukti's song!! Gosh! Next is another heartbreaking chappy!! Hope nothin much happens to nandu n i trust u..u wont let anythin happen to nandu...!!
Love u so much for this chappy!! Thoda sa recovered now...abb feeling lyk heartbeat stopped!! But still breathin heavily!!
Me..yuvi...my god!!
Thnx..for..d..pm..kiara...
Ll..oo..vee..ll..yyy up..da..tt..ee...!! Yy..uuvv..raa..jjj...th..aak..ku..rr...la..nnd..land...
Love u loads!! Keep giving me these shocks:D 🤗
Edited by Toshna_1522 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Omg! Omg!
You are actually gonna write it!! It makes both Nqndini and me feel so special!! Our happiness knows no bounds right now :* :*

Totally looking forward to it.

Nandini has added: we will try to give long comments. We try always... But now for this we will try harder.

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