Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic
you again left me thinking that whether I should reread the story or I should just wait for you to write the next chapter..
I am actually glad that you dint started MaNan conversation coz they seriously don't need any interruption this time.
I wanted MaNan to be uninterrupted... It's their moment, I wouldn't want to be left in cliff hanging on the most awaited moment...
coming to your update, it left me baffled again thinking how can someone write the emotions like really deep cause I know going to depth takes loads of concentration and hard work so I think you are putting loads of hard work writing this beautiful piece of story.
It's the love that MaNan spread that makes me write... Those two just rule my thoughts these days... Well I guess you can totally understand why I can't give freq updates, coz I usually need time actually imagine the scene in my head before I write. I need to be sure I have done justice to it before posting 😊😊😊 Reading your comments makes it worthwhile to spend that time
outrage of emotions is very necessary in any relation cause it's really hard to carry the burden on chest and it only leads to piercing yourself daily from inside. so manik's outrage was the best part and for me it high lighted your update.
I'm not a sadist like Nyonika but I enjoy seeing angry Manik along with his other shades..😳😳😳
Nandini's dilemma is quite justified Virat has always received her love as a whole now she is confused whether she can divide her love and whether they both can accept each other wholeheartedly.
Very true... Over the years, maturity and responsibilities are there with them along with their undying love
I thought this in your previous update that did Manik change that he left her alone crying cause he can't do it and i was right you made my belief on Manik more now yes he was standing there just to check that she doesn't fall down he was in pain cause he was the reason she was shedding those precious pearls that pierced his heart thousand time..
Manik is a character with so many shades, he portrays to be a monster but actually he is angel deep inside... No matter what, his feelings for Nandini precedes everything else in him.. I clearly recall the vinegar scene, when he tells her that it hurts him to hurt her
you showed it very clearly and it is the fact that after Cabir if anyone could understand them than it was Navya and she cleared the air that was revolving around Cabir in taking the next step
Cavya are jaan... They understand MaNan the best... They are also share a deep connection and understanding just like MaNan
so now if manik is taking it further from here then he would make sure when she returns its eternal...
i am in love with your story cause it depicts each and every emotion deeply..
let it be the love, the wait, the pain, responsibility, friendship, care, trust, protective, and need!!
The show itself has shown us so much of beautiful emotions, I'm just re-writing them😊😊😊
wrapping my comment by saying you that you are one awesome writer and i would love to read more works from you..
Thank you so much dearie... You are nothing less compare to me... I need to check out all your works soon...🤗
Love,
Kiara..