MaNan SS : The Incomplete Song (Part 10 - Pg 62 - 13th April) - Page 30

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

you are too good

I loved your update
So manik has never given up from thier relationship that's so good he is hoping for their togetherness I loved it
Ohh so cabirs plan backfired but for good and I looking forward to see what will happen and what will manik do
And I loved the last scene mnaik saved her ...
awsm update
Cont soon


Thank you so much dear...😊😊😊

Yeah, Manik never gave up on them... Cabir's plan backfired but they always bring out the results that he wanted...


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing one of the finest part...beautifully penned
Cabira was awesome... finally Manik accepted his true feelings in front of him..
Nandini ' realisation also penned beautifully... .
Last part was the most awaited. . truly magical .. i read the part two three times
...so magical can't explain
desperately waiting for the next part Hope they will express their feelings suppressed
for six long years .
...finally MaNan having their Hope back :
you are such a wonderful writer thank you so much for the wonderful writing... great work.⭐️

egarly waiting for next part... pls update soon

Thank you so much for PM 😊


Thank you so much hun...😊😊😊

You can't imagine how happy I'm to read all this wonderful comments... I was worried that I didn't justify Nandini's realization well but I'm glad you liked it...
Your much awaited update is also up, so you can read them too...

Finally MaNan are back together...❤️..❤️..❤️..❤️.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Roshni8

Amazing update dear

It was simply awesome
Nandini's realisation
ManBir talk
Nandini-Virat talk
And finally the last part
You've nailed it

Looking forward to read the next part
Pls update soon


Thank you so much dear...😊😊😊
I think the last part was the much awaited one😉😉😉
Next part is up... Hope you like it too
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kiaraMaNanholic

you again left me thinking that whether I should reread the story or I should just wait for you to write the next chapter..
I am actually glad that you dint started MaNan conversation coz they seriously don't need any interruption this time.

I wanted MaNan to be uninterrupted... It's their moment, I wouldn't want to be left in cliff hanging on the most awaited moment...

coming to your update, it left me baffled again thinking how can someone write the emotions like really deep cause I know going to depth takes loads of concentration and hard work so I think you are putting loads of hard work writing this beautiful piece of story.

It's the love that MaNan spread that makes me write... Those two just rule my thoughts these days... Well I guess you can totally understand why I can't give freq updates, coz I usually need time actually imagine the scene in my head before I write. I need to be sure I have done justice to it before posting 😊😊😊 Reading your comments makes it worthwhile to spend that time

outrage of emotions is very necessary in any relation cause it's really hard to carry the burden on chest and it only leads to piercing yourself daily from inside. so manik's outrage was the best part and for me it high lighted your update.
I'm not a sadist like Nyonika but I enjoy seeing angry Manik along with his other shades..😳😳😳


Nandini's dilemma is quite justified Virat has always received her love as a whole now she is confused whether she can divide her love and whether they both can accept each other wholeheartedly.
Very true... Over the years, maturity and responsibilities are there with them along with their undying love

I thought this in your previous update that did Manik change that he left her alone crying cause he can't do it and i was right you made my belief on Manik more now yes he was standing there just to check that she doesn't fall down he was in pain cause he was the reason she was shedding those precious pearls that pierced his heart thousand time..
Manik is a character with so many shades, he portrays to be a monster but actually he is angel deep inside... No matter what, his feelings for Nandini precedes everything else in him.. I clearly recall the vinegar scene, when he tells her that it hurts him to hurt her

you showed it very clearly and it is the fact that after Cabir if anyone could understand them than it was Navya and she cleared the air that was revolving around Cabir in taking the next step
Cavya are jaan... They understand MaNan the best... They are also share a deep connection and understanding just like MaNan

so now if manik is taking it further from here then he would make sure when she returns its eternal...

i am in love with your story cause it depicts each and every emotion deeply..
let it be the love, the wait, the pain, responsibility, friendship, care, trust, protective, and need!!
The show itself has shown us so much of beautiful emotions, I'm just re-writing them😊😊😊


wrapping my comment by saying you that you are one awesome writer and i would love to read more works from you..
Thank you so much dearie... You are nothing less compare to me... I need to check out all your works soon...🤗
Love,

Kiara..


Kiara... You are such a sweetheart❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Reading your comments have always been a pleasure for me, it is my boost to write more😊😊

Thank you so much for taking your time to share your thoughts with me...🤗🤗🤗

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

wow awsm update

loved it
very nicely written
cont soon


Thank you dearie😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Nikki_Titli

Omg omg another rocking update..loved realizations of both n timely cupidgiri of cabir..

Nywz continue soon revs..me loving ur as more n more as every update pass by


Aww Nikki... Hearing this from you means a lot to me... 😳😳😳
Glad you loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angelsunshine07

Wow wow simply wow just loved it this update 😊 so much love &pain for seperation yaar I literally crying 😭 when reading it soo emotional & painful but in comming updates we find manan reunion hope so 😊 ...
You are fabulous writer ⭐️ ..
Your story put so much impact on me I just feel d pain how Manik & Nandini hurts but Nandini's decision of sepreation is not acceptable 😭 😭 ...

But d result is too awesome aftr 6 yrs their love Is not faded & it's growing day by day 😊 awesome yaar u put so much breath-taking emotions in it totally mad abt ur ff 😉 so wonderful...


I don't have wrds yaar to explain that how much I loved it 👏 gr8 job...

Desperately waiting for nxt update cont soon super excited 😆 😉 ..

Don't late ⭐️

Lots of love
Pankhuri


Thank you so much Pankhuri... 😊😊😊
Sorry to make you cry dearie but happy that my words touched your heart that you could feel the pain

Awesome words dearie... The next update on their reunion is up... I hope that will be able to justify Nandini's move to leave him
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update a much needed convo between them and now they are back finally
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: shantellbrown

Brilliant. Just really brilliantly written.


Thanks dearie😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sizzysehrish

read all ur updates
it was good
loved it
cont soon


Thanks dear😊😊😊

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