MaNan FF || Hamari Adhuri Kahani || Chapter 30A|B Updated On Pg 146 - Page 59

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...mehedi ceremony was too good... I loved the song one of my favorite songs from ddlj ...no complains it's totally ok cause xams are also important ...dont feel guilty ..we can wait until ur xams are finished ..all the best for the exam..May Allah bless u with success ...tc...with lots of love and hugs
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dear
Awsm update
Thanks for updating being so busy with ur studies and exam and still h hve update for us
Thank u so much
I will definitely be egar to knw who is d new entry bt ya I can wait till ur exams get over...
Bt ya egarly waiting...
Miss you take care
All d very best for ur exams :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow dat was an awesome update...
loved it...
loved manan moments...
Awesome song sequence...
Ab kon aaya h...

Dnt wry take ur tym...
all d best for ur exams...

Continue soon...
'll b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

for exam
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 23A

I knew who it was and was shocked and happy at the same time within no time a just hugged him and said "I missed you " and he too replied "i missed you too" ...while we were hugging someone was fuming in anger and that was no other than Manik malhotra.

I broke the hug and saw maniks face he was fuming in jealousy so i thaught of introducing him . "Manik meet bhai ,bhai meet Manik" and after hearing bhai from my mouth manik's expressions were worth seeing Anger from relief and relief to happiness .. Manik shacked hand with bhai and they both were busy in chit chatting and i didn't liked it so i intruppted them "Bhai app manic se kya mile app toh mujhe hi bhul gaye "

Bhai-Look someone is getting jealous from us haina manic

Nandini- Main jealous nahi ho rahi thi jealous toh todhi der pehle koi aur ho raha tha ..with that i showed tongue to manik and he was just adoring me and suddenly a blush crept on my cheeks and he smirked which has a really bad effect on my

Suddenly bhai clicked his fingers in fron of me and asked me where was i lost and said nothing and took him with me so that i can introduce him with my other friends , after all the introduction we got some alone time.

Nandini- Bhai app toh aane nahi wale the toh ab kaise aa gaye

Bhai-Aree mein teri atmahtya kase miss karta ,

Nandini-bhai atmahtya hi toh kar rahi hun mein yeh shadi kar ke i said with a low tone but my dismay bhai heard it and he got worried,bhai knows everything about me he knows all my secrets but i didn't told him about this marriage and i was not feeling good about it so i told him about my marriage and he freaked out

Bhai-Nandini tujhe yeh shaadi karnbe ki koi jarurat nahi hai mein na apne boss se baat karunga woh apna business expand karne keliye ek company ko overtake karna chahte hai toh mein papa ki company recommend kar dunga don't worry aur mujhe toh yeh samaj nahi aaraha ki papa ne mujhe yeh sab kyu nahi bataya

Nandini-Aree bhai break lagao apni baton par aur meri baat suno papa ki company ko malhotra industries in overtake kar liya hai ,aur yeh shadi nahi hogi kyuki manik yeh shadi hone nahi dega

Bhai-ohh manic yeh shaadi hone nahi dega yeh wohi manik hai na jisne meri bhena ka dil churaya hai (after listening this I just cant stop blushing) look look you are blushing ...hehe

Nandini-Bhai

Bhai-kya bhai ab toh mujhe manik se akele me baat karni padhegi chal ja use bula kar la uski todhi class luun

Nandini-Bhai apko kya baat karni hai mujhe bhi btao

Bhai-tu bula kart oh la ...so i nodded and went to call him

I was walking towards the lawn area when suddenly someone dragged me to a room and that touch was familiar to me ...

Nandini-Manik kya kar rahe ho

Manik-Yaar nandini jab se tumhara bhai aaya hai tum toh mujhe bhul hi gayi ho aur yeh tumhara konsa bhai hao jisse mein nahi mili

Nandini- Oh toh Manik manlhota is getting jealous from bhai aww , and for your kind information yeh mere wohi bhai hai jo +2 ke baad Canada chale gaye the isliye tum inse jyada baar mile nahi ho

Manik-Pehli baat i am not jealous aur dusri baat mujhe jealous hone ki koi jarurat hi nahi hai kyuki i trust you

His small small confessions make me fall for him again and again and i love to fall for him again and again...

While I was adoring him i didn't knew when i came so close to him that we were going to kiss ..i came back from my senses when i felt his hand on my bare waist and his touch was giving shivers and my knees were betraying me and thank god he was holding me or else i would have collapsed any moment.

But our bad luck we heard someone coughing so we saw towards the area and found Bhai smilling we both immediately straighten up and looking here and there

Bhai -sorry sorry meine kuch nahi dekha don't worry...manik was clueless that bhai knew about him so he was eyeing me to ask me did he knew about us

Bhai-aise kya dekh raha hai nandini mujse kuch nahi chupati

Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 23B

While we all were chatting when our friends entered the room as they were searching for us

Cabir-dekha meine kaha that na nandini jaha hogi wahi manic hoga chal mukti merei chocolate nikal mein bet jeet gaya..While he was blabbering these things our friends were gesturing him to stop as bhai was also present over here but he was not stopping

Cabir-arre kuch bol kyu nahi rahe samp sung gaya hai kya kuch toh bolo..while he was saying this he tilted his head and saw bhai and then he was silent and gulped his saliva in fear and here me , manik and bhai were having a tough time in controlling our laughter and when we couldn't we burst out in laughter and everyone were seeing our faces

Bhai -arre tum logon ko bhi nahi pta kya arre nandu tumne inn logon ko seriously kuch nahi bataya kya , aree nandini mujse kuch nahi chupati hai so don't worry and i am with you all aur cabir don't worry tumhe ek companion mil gaya inhe tease karne mein and they both hified

Mukti-chalo chalien everyone one is waiting for us

Bhai-ha chalo

We all were going outside when manic againg held me and didn't let me go now just we both were here

Nandini-aree manic kya kar rahe ho chodo an jana hai

Manik - mera mood nahi hai and he came close to me and said "chalo lets start where we left"

Nandini-Manik pagal ho gaye ho kya sab wait kar rahe hai

Manik- shh don't spoil it and he came close to me and i closed my eyes and he smiled and kept his cold lips on my hot ones , the kiss was full of love no urgency no lust just love , he was sucking my upper lips and suddenly he bit my lips as i was not parting my lips and when he bit my lips i winced and his tongue entered my mouth he was exploring my mooth and we broke the kiss when we were out of breath

Hehe surprise !!!! i updated and that too a big wala update so i want big big comments too...Oh my god 7 pages of comments thank you so much for supourting my story even i didn't updated for a long time . Guys can i ask you for a favour i want to update my next chapter on 100th page ...Dont worry i wont mind if we cant reach their i will update the chapter and taht too on 17th...Guys i don't know how but my buddy list got filtered and some of my friends got unbuddy so if you don't get the pm plz buddy me once again sorry for teh inconvinence...

Edited by Dhariya_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
unres
Yyyiiipppiiieee...
I'm the first one to comment..
Ur update was awesome..
Loved the update..
Hehe..He was her bhai..
Cute jealous manik..
And when she called him bhai..
His expressions changes from jealousy to relief to happiness..
Aweee...
I so feel like pulling his cheeks for such cute expressions...:D:D
And thank god her bhai is cool..
And he knows about nandu's feelings for manik..
And supports her too..
But why god to be thanked haan..
Thanks to u for making that character cool and not rude and over protected and over possessive who is all against manik..hehehe..

Thanku so much for the pm..
ALL THE VERY BEST for ur exams..
Hope ur exams are going good..

Keep writing..
Stay blessed..
Take care..

And once again thanku for giving such an amzing update between ur exams..:):)
Edited by yashu_varshney - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Manik is jealous hmmm
Nandu bhai is so frndly to alll arey wat is bhais name
Cabir is always right wer nandu is there manik is present
Watng to know wat they wil do to stop the wedding
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update😊
update soonnn
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome chapters...loved it
so nandu 's brother...and that too so cute and loving...
so all r there to support manan
manan romance as usual magical...
u penned beautifully
continue soon dear
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
stay blessed...

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