MaNan FF || Hamari Adhuri Kahani || Chapter 30A|B Updated On Pg 146 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

dear its getting awesome day by day its too cute n penned frndshp beautifully plz tell me end game is manan na or u will separate thm thnx for the pm update soon

End is MaNan
U will get to know why i kept that name
I am manan shipper so i will not sepeate them so Chilax ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you
u r such A gem...u always pm me for the update
nd nice going in story
all d best fr studies
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Posted: 10 years ago
I love the way Nandini always understands Manik!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Guys!!!I am back with an update...Hope u guys like it...
Chapter 12


Nandini's POV(in mind)

Kab tak bacha paoge mujhe Manik ek din toh meri shaadi ho jaegi usse tab kya karogre tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe nahi pta ki yeh sab yaha kese aa gaye itna toh samajthi hun tumhe mein lekin yeh bhi jaanti hun ki tum mujhe jyada der tak bacha nahi paoge...


Maniks POV (in mind)

Jab Tak mein yaha hun tumhe bach ke rahunga aur yeh shadi toh mein hone hi nahi dunga...us Harshad ko tumhare ass pass bhi nah dekh sakta mein ...I dont know why but i hate him not because of the past but because of him marrying you...

Nandini's POV

Our thoughts were broken by Cabir..

"Kaha kho gaye tum dono pta nahi kis duniya mein gum rahe ho ohh bhailog wapis aa jao apni duniya mein..."He said with a smirk on his face which was so unusual but i ignored it ..

"Guys bahut late ho gaya hai so lets sleep and u all must be tired so chalo go and sleep"i ordered them but they were in no mood to go so mukti explained thier plan..

"Nandini hum aaj yahi soenge like old times aur ab yeh mat kehna ki hum yaha kaise soenge humne pura plan kar liya hai u and navya sleep on the bed aur baki sab neeche so jaenge thikh hai "i explained me and i just nodded like a baby

"Oye yeh kya baat hui Navya nandini ke saath kyu soegi had hai bhai 1 hafta 2 din ho gaye mein uske sath nahi soya aadat ho gayi hai sone ki uskesaath mere ko nahi pta navya mere sath neeche soegi "Cabir commanded us

"Acha baba navya tumhare saath so jaegi aur mein aur manik upar bed pe ok "

"Ok...chal manik uth navya ko aane de"he said while showing him his tongue and manik was showing him a punch and Cabir acted as he was scared we all were watching this duo and we all bursted out in laughter

All the couples laid down and were cuddling each other ,mukti was hugging abhi as she was hugging a teddy,alia and dhruv were hugging each other alia's back was facing druv's ,cavya were hugging each other and no air could pass through them in short they all were looking so cute ...me and manik were watching them in aww

We both too lay down but were poles apart ...i was tossing on the bed and was not ablee to sleep ..

"Manik"i whispered

He just "Hmm"ed just to make me know that he was awake..."Mujhe neend nahi aarahi"i said in a low tone so that no one wake up

He turned towards me and said "Mujhe bhi nahi...Kya karien"

"Emmm lets me think...Lets eat icecream"i said in an excited tone

Maniks POV

She was so excited like a 5 year old baby so we sneaked out of the room and went towards the fridge and found tubs of ice cream and any one can guess that she loved ice cream ...She took out the tub og Black Current ...she opened the tub and satrted eating it with her fingers

I was just admiring her..she was looking so cute while eating it she seriously looked like a 5 year old baby ...i tucked her hair behind her ears as it was disturbing her and more over it was disturbing my view ...

she looked at me and offered me ice cream so i took her fingers and licked the ice cream ...and she was looking at me as i have done a crime..

"What"

"Nothing...Emm Manik Thank You "

"Thank You For what"i asked her giving her a questioning look

"Woh for making my day special ...First u consoled me then sang for me then u saved me from harshad i just loved this day and thanks for making it special"she said and hugged me so tightly that air could also not pass through us ...I too hugged her back as i was carving for this and rubbed her back politely...

That hug was like never ending one but we broke the hug and i saw that she was crying which i couldnt handle..

"Nandini why are you crying baba...shh ...i am her na"so i hugged her again but this time i side hugged her

"woh aise hi sorry mujhe pta hai ki tum mujhe rote hue nahi dekh sakte ...sorry...kaan pakadke sorry..."she was looking so cute and adorable a that i couldnt resist and kissed her cheek ...

"chalo lets go agar kisi ne dekh liya na to problem ho jaegii"

We both went towards her room and entered it slowly and lay down on the bed but this time we were close to each othr and suddenly i found her coming close to me and kept her head on my elbow and hugged me , i too held her from her waist and we both slept peacefully ...

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Hi Guys !!! here go with an update ...i hope u like it ...do comment and hit like

criticism and suggestions are most welcome.

Dhariya...



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ershilpavyas

Thank you
u r such A gem...u always pm me for the update
nd nice going in story
all d best fr studies

aww thank you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing one...
Thank god is update mein vo harshad nhi tha...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
loving the progress of the story...
hope harshad go out of their lives soon
do continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
sweet and beautiful part
manan ice cream scene and last bed scene was so cute...
slowly they r coming closer...loving this a lot
waiting to read more
thanks a lot for the pm
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awsome!! 👏
seriously yur story is amazing ya...
I love it...
Jus Get tat jerk out of their life jaldii n MaNan Together...
their ladt ka cuddling was tooo cute... :* Plss give thoda long updates. ...
Eagerly waiting fr d nxt part!!
Update soon... 😃
n tysm fr d pm!! ⭐️
Edited by crazzy_girl1999 - 10 years ago

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