MaNan FF || Hamari Adhuri Kahani || Chapter 30A|B Updated On Pg 146 - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi dhariya..
sorry for not commenting in the previous chapters
very hectic schedule is going in my job
coming to the update
it was superb as always
finally the suspense is out
but harshad for nandini omg can't even imagine
but still u r maintaining suspense in the story
I mean manan are only friends as manik said
sounds interesting
loved the update
and thanks for pm me

Suji :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow..!! Loving it alot..!!
Now i want to see what will Manik do..!!
Continue soon..!!
Waiting :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey dhariya!...yep am a new reader of ur ff...loved ur old ff too...evn dis one...
Jerk!!! Harshad harshad harshad!!! U HAV to die one day!!! Felt really vry bad fr nandu...she didnt hav any1 to share her sorrows...jst loved d manan hug!!! It ws beautiful yet full of sadness n guilt...wt r fab5 navya n abhi upto?? Wats their plan??? Does nandu's family kno abt harshad's truth..n he tried to kill nandu n all(hw dare he!!!!!)...??????
Update long update sooonnn n thnxxx fr d pm:-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing one..loved the Manan emotional scence..He is perfect for her..waiting to see what happens in Nandu's mariage
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally twist revealed.. Wow.. Awesome update..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Superb fantastic update can't believe it's harshad oh god how they gonna save her

Continue soon and thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey dear since i m a silent reader till chapter 10 apologies dear for not commenting😭
its super awesome ff many many congratulations for this ff...

its mind blowing amazing writing skill u have man hats off gr8 job👏

this ff smething different i liked it alot ..
i just randomly got this ff hyperlink & i m glad that i find this ff else i miss one of d gr8 ff dear ... 😊

A big hug to u for this awesome ff🤗

ITS FANTASTIC CONT SOON😉

LOTS OF LOVE

PANKHURI
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Posted: 10 years ago
I had a FEELING it was going to be 😈 HARSHAD 😈!!! And great update!!! 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Guys!! Here u all go with an update...
Chapter 11

"I am glad that u all didnt left"i said in a low voice

"Oye hum tere friends aur tujhe kya lagta hai hum tujhe us jerk ke saath akela chod denge ..kabhi nahi "mukti said to me

"aur tujhe pta nahi hai kya ki friends aise nahi karte ek galti toh hum kar chuke hai dusri todhi na karenge "abhi said

"Guys lets do something Fab 5 style"manik announced

i hears someone was playing guitar and that was non other than Manik

Ho hai zara si meethi-meethi halki si khaari
Yari yari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari..

Ho.. yaar woh jo samjhe baat bin bole saari
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari..

(Manik was singing and nodding his head and FAb 5 too joined him)

Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi
Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Teri-meri, meri-teri yaari-yaari
Hoo.. hoo...

(Manik and abhi came towards me and brought me in the center)

Ho kachchi pakki gullakon to tod-taad kar
Chillaron ko apney saare jod-jaad kar
Tere hisse ki main smile ko khareed lun
Meri smile ka kahin na kahin se tu jugad kar
Chai wale adde ki bhi chai se hai pyari
You know..
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari..
Wo.. jiski chal rahi hai abhi tak udhaari
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari..


(Manik showed me his walet and came towards me said me to smile in gestures and i did that ,Mukti was dancing with me )

Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi
Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Teri-meri, meri-teri yaari yaari
hoo hoo.. hoo hoo..
Beer ke nashe mein talli hoke jhoom lein
Mastiyon ke raaste mein jhande gaad dein
Hosh humse apna ghar ke le agar pata
Arey hosh se kahein ki hum hai aish mein pale


(Cabir came with beer bottles and was acting like he is drunk and mukti was acting like she was supporting her to sit on a couch )


Class bunk maar ke pahaadon pe jaari (What?)
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yari yari..

Wo ho.. ghar pe goli deke bhaagne ki bimari (wassup?)
Yaari yaari, yaari yaari, yaari yaari.


(Navya and Alia brushed their shoulder with mine and were dancing with me )

Go!
Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Zinda yaaron se hui zindagi
Wo o o ho.. wo ho.. wo ho...
Teri-meri..
Meri-teri yaari yaari
oo.. hoo.. hoo..


(All of them sang together)

"Friends Forever"Manik yelled and we shared a group hug and i thaught that old days are back ...all the masti..

We broke the hud and i was in tears that to of happiness

"Thank you guys ""Sorry NAndini"we all said in unisone

and we all laughed and then we went toward our room because it 11 pm and we all were tired

My Room

i was going to sleep when someone knocked the door so i went towards the door and opened it

"Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho"i said

"Apni To-Be -wife se milne aaya hun"harshad said with a smirk and then he jerked me and came inside the my room

"Harshad i am in no mood to talk to you so leave"

"Who said i am here to talk i am here to sleep "

"But i amd Navya are sharing room"

"Koi baat nahi i will tell navya she will leave"he completed the sentence and suddenly all my friends came in my room giving me a surprise ...

"Shit"Harshad said in a low voice so that no one can hear it but Manik heard it and he started teasing hi

'Oh sorry Harshad but we are here for our friend"he said in Harshad's ear and harshad knew that if he will stay here for a longer time he wwill have to face more insult so he decide to leave

"Nandini hum kisi aur din time spend karlenge u all enjoy"Harshad said in a defeated tone and by grbbing the chance Cabir too spoke

"Harshad ruk jaa na hum sab apne purane din yaad karte hain"H said with a smirk and we all knew that in our old day Harshad had only gone through insult so there was no point of him being here so he just excused him and went towards his room and i took a breath of relief and all thanks to my friends

Manik's POV(in mind)

Thank God i saw Harshad entering Nandini's room and informed all of them and said them to come at NAndini's room as soon as possible because i have a doubt on Harshad intentions so we all need to protect her from that jerk...

Nandini's POV(in mind)

Kab tak bacha paoge mujhe Manik ek din toh meri shaadi ho jaegi usse tab kya karogre tumhe kya lagta hai mujhe nahi pta ki yeh sab yaha kese aa gaye itna toh samajthi hun tumhe mein lekin yeh bhi jaanti hun ki tum mujhe jyada der tak bacha nahi paoge...


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so here u all go with an update ..i know its small but i am busy with studies so i am not able to give long updates...i hope u all understand...

And Happy Birthday Natasha ...teri wish jaldi hi puri kar dungi😉



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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon

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