Manik & Nandini-Stars & Fireflies Part 56 on Page 145 - Page 83

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Posted: 10 years ago
Love her plan... so glad bout her thoughts on Aalia...lets see how Mr.Malhotra handles being invisible... 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nandu i back with a BANG!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awww😳😳 seruxly falling for ds story again n again😎 loved d way manik reminises his true love along with reconization of nandini at once on breaakfast table😃😃 he cant take her ignorance which proves dt he loves her deeply🥳awww loving ds tom n jerry game😳😳😳😆😆 as now its manik time to suffer🥱😕 plzz update itx nxt chp soon untill dn tc love ya😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 49


They say you fall in love but not out of it.. Not matter how hard one tries love never leaves them or gives up on them... It stays with you in your smiles, your tears...It never takes anything from you but it only gives.. Gives you the strength to look beyond the horizon and find the rainbow...


Ever since Manik hear the word "Love Story" all he remembered was Oliver and Jenny and Nandini's inscription about love... While Manik was lost in thoughts about a love story which was fictional and girl and her thoughts who was very much real... Soon his thoughts were broken by Mukti and Alya's blabbering about the plays...


"How tacky we will do romantic plays like these.." Mukti said.. "Like really there's nothing like Romeo Juliet stuff in this world.. And what's the other one "Love Story" never even heard about must be even more tacky.." Alya expressed her unhappiness... Hearing this Manik got restless "how can she say Oliver and Jenny's love story is tacky?" Manik turned around and said "how much do you know about Love Story to say that it was cliched?" Alya was surprised and so were other members of the group to hear Manik talk about a book that too a romantic book..


"Oh really Manik.. So do you know about Love Story then tell me na.." Aliya asked him... MAnik took a deep breathe , closed his eyes and spoke "Jenny didn't leave Oliver alone..She fulfilled her promise of loving him till death did them apart and death tore them apart...But Oliver was not alone Jenny gave him memories millions of big and small moments and love that changed his life, a love that changed him...Love, it never dies it lives on even after us like Jenny's love will live on..Love heals us, it heals a broken heart like it was never broken..Its crazy, insane and mad but if it's not it's love.."


Everyone over there were surprised but Cabir and Dhruv knew its not Manik's ords and they were right.. Manik read Nandini's inscription of love that she wrote in the book. Just like that no matter how hard he fought himself, how much he denied Nandini Murthy was in his blood and her love consumed him just the way it was supposed to be crazy, insane and passionate... Manik was surprised and shocked as how he remembered her words exactly the way she wrote and Alya Mukti were shocked as to from where did he got this idea...


Cabir excused himself and sneaked out from there.. They way he left from there aroused suspicion in Dhruv who decided to follow him.. Cabir went to straight to DJ's music room where she was working on the list.. She had cancelled the classes so Nandini and Navya were not there.. "What's up partner.." Cabir greeted her.. "Shhh someone will hear you.." She asked him to talk slowly "Waise no one saw you coming na.." This conversaton of Cabir and DJ left Dhruv confused who was listening to their conversation from behind the door..


"Acha koi progree hai ya nahi.." CAbir asked.. "Cabir you won't believe.. today Nandini totally ignore Manik and that jalebi was so frustrated.." DJ chuckled.. "Really.." Cabir asked.. "Yes it took a lot of strength from her but she did it.." DJ was happy and so was Cabir.. "So finally your jalebi will understand he is wrong.." Cabir exclaimed... "But what next?" DJ was thinking... "We have to make use of these plays to bring these two together and bring Manik down.." DJ said and they were lost in deep thoughts...


"maybe I can help.." Dhruv walked in and they both were startled.. "No Dhruv please we are done with the list.." DJ said trying to cover her plan.. "Really DJ I heard everything..." Dhruv said... DJ and Cabir looked at each other.. "But Dhruv.." Cabir said... "I know I like Nandini but Manik loves Nandini so he need to understand.." Dhruv clarified.. and this brought a huge amile on DJ's face and Cabir hugged him... "I don't want my best friend to loose out on his true love.. Manik will have to understand and he will.."


"And maybe in the process even I will find my true love.." Dhruv said.. "I am sure beta.." DJ said.. "But still what next.." Dhruv called them closer and said something in their ears and hearing that Cabir said "Waah tu itna intelligent hai.." and they all hugged each other...


End of Part 49...

Ciao..Love..

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Posted: 10 years ago
hey...
u know u r one of the best writer of this forum... yes u r...
becoz... 1)u penned everything very good...
n 2)ur story is going very well...
3)u update regularly..
4)n u never give promos or teasers... i dont like promos..

now come to the story..
i think The DJ is kind of clich...
n i want more of manan face off/ confrontation /scenes..
n i want fab 5 scenes n navni scenes too...

keep going..
entertain us more...
be happy...

Edited by BriNi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely dear ,
now Dhruv is also on .
Continue soon dear .
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing...
beautifully penned...
DJ, Cabira N Dhruv... mission Manan... awesome
... he loves her but his ego...
...Ayappa yeh ladka kab sudrega..
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Posted: 10 years ago
So one more entry in the secret group, happy that everyone is supporting nandini, waiting to see what gonna happen next.

pls give us a lil big update ya, this is so small.
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part...
wow...so Romeo &Juliet and love story...!!! amazing...!!!!

i really loved the scene where manik describing about love story...u penned this scene so perfectly...
so dhruv also joined with cabir and DJ for their mission manan...superb...!!!
eagerly waiting to know their plan
continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
take care

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