Manik & Nandini-Stars & Fireflies Part 56 on Page 145 - Page 41

👏 as always it was an awesome part ..
Waiting for manan to get together ...this party will be just awesome.e ..
Plzzz preety update soon and a long part Plzzz ...
We r waiting eagerly for or next part ...
Update soon

Wow DJ is on 9 cloud after Alya and manik's break up and alya yar i personally like her charecter alot in the show she is my favourite so plz dont show her so bad in your ff plz. Its a request.

WOW love u DJ
hehe she is a typical punjabi dance and masti
cabia u are great as usual
please do continue

Originally posted by: apps33

oh wowiiee ...

again an awesome update

uh have no idea how much i love ua writing

uh absolutely nva fail to impress me

Both of our cuties have finally got deir brains back...😃🥳

superb...it really cudnt hve been better

n m sure now no matter wat dat bimbo alya does hes not gonna step back from his decision to get HIS GIRL...!!!

M Absolutely lovin dis MANIK WITH BRAINs...

our hero wll finally get his grl...

m already droolin ovr ua stry

u r just too gud man

n i hope dat mukti n druv successfully manage to make alya understand n bring her in reality in d facts...!!

she really needs dat

or else as uh said self destruction wont b far frm her...

specially our own monster who wont thnk twice b4 doin nythng if she tries to screw thngs up...

n our DJ...man shes too gus...

how much i love her...!!!!

i loved DJ-NANDU convo...d way she said dat manik needs her...

how cute... n d way DJ assured her dat she is der for hm now so he doesnt need her nymore...!!

n also our very own cabini convo...

how cute can sum1 b...

i mean d way cabir was tryin to make her realise her importance in his life but instead she cut him off n made him realise dat dey r actually meant for eachother widout a doubt...

i loved it

totally loved it...

wll b waitin for ua nxt update

plz try to make it soon

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Wow

such a beautiful update

I mean how how u write such a beautiful nd fabulous story

Till now I read so much on manan but ur story make me so much crazy like KYY does...

I mean I'm so much addicted to ur FF

I feel like I seeing another live KYY from starting with different storyline.

excited for MANIK birthday party

Victorian masquerade ball

wow excellent idea

Thanks for PM

KEEP WRITING ND SMILING

ND UPDATE SOON CAN'T WAIT LONG...

LOVE,

SAMRUDDHI...

Originally posted by: aavani

wow...amazing part...
i am in love with ur stars & fireflies...!!!
loved manik and aliya confrontation...much needed
loved DJ and nandu conversation a lot
finally birthday theme...one of my favorite Victorian masquerade ball..
hoping for an awesome birthday bash...!!!
and DJ and manik part was also fantastic...
eagerly waiting for ur next update
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

swetuuu its awesome thank God fab 4 got to knw about their broke up.and DJ was dancing wowww manikkk is finally going to propose her.waiting 4 next update soon

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow awesome marvellous wonderful update

He just burst aliiyyas bubble totally loved it

He us in a turmoil how to tell his Nandu that he broke up with his gf to be with her as he found his peace at her only

Cabir trying to make her understand about how manik is butt she too very well know about him

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Really loving your stories

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Originally posted by: radhastarbansal

👏 as always it was an awesome part ..
Waiting for manan to get together ...this party will be just awesome.e ..
Plzzz preety update soon and a long part Plzzz ...
We r waiting eagerly for or next part ...
Update soon