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Hey guys back with my weekend dose..Happy reading..comments are more than welcum😊

Have attached the link of Part 1 and 2 at the bottom for them who wanted

Part 3

The car halted with a jerk. She would have just smashed her head against the dash board had it not been for the seat belts holding her back. But wait she didn't have them on when she had sat or rather was pushed inside the car, Nandini thought to herself.

It must have been Manik but where is he? puzzled she looked out of the window. She saw Manik walking away from the car and towards a huge bungalow in front of her. She had a bizarre kind of feeling and tried to recollect what had happened earlier that day, the girl, the fight, the kiss followed by the slap and immediately she was back to her senses.

She untied herself and got down from the car, by now Manik had vanished probably somewhere in the house. The view in front of her was breath taking. Both sides of the drive way were adorned with beautiful gardens which had flowers of such amazing variety that she had not seen most of them. The sprinklers had just bathed the garden afresh; the water droplets on the leaves and shine on the grass were apparently evident. The fragrance of the wet soil was filling her senses. A little away from the garden she saw a hammock tied in between two small trees. The whole place seemed so serene. The house or rather mansion house complimented the view perfectly. It was a two storied lavish bungalow The outside appearance of the house with beautiful architecture itself could vouch for the same. The whole view just matched perfectly with her dream home just that she had never imagined such a big one but other than that it was a place where she would happily like to spend the rest of her life. Amidst her saga of admiration something struck her suddenly.

Where was she?? She looked around. It was not Manik's house for sure, she had been there n number of time and knew every nook n corner of it. She rushed to the gate only to find that it was a secluded place. There was no other house nearby. She couldn't even see any living soul on the road that had led them there.

She got annoyed at every thought that crossed her mind. Had Manik kidnapped her again?? What was wrong with him?? Did he really need to behave in such a reckless fashion every time there was something wrong between them? These questions were hiking her irritation further and to get her answers she turned back and hastily walked towards the bungalow cum farmhouse and this time ignoring the awesome view around her which she was admiring a little while ago. The door in front of her was massive but it opened with a slight touch of hers.

The dcor of the interior was amazingly beautiful. The living room was enormous; the centre had a comfortable couch arrangement and right behind it was plush open kitchen, the left side had a huge dining table followed by a neat bar counter with a display of exquisite collection of wine bottles. The right hand side had a staircase where Manik could have gone as she couldn't find him anywhere else. She hastily climbed the stairs two at a time to reach upstairs. She saw two doors towards her left and without wasting time knocked on the first.

"Manik" she called out, there came no response so she entered the room. It was empty, she didn't bother to check the wash room and thought of trying the second one. This time she didn't knock and just pushed the door open.

She saw a familiar masculine body occupying the bed. The bed was huge enough for both of them and also the rest of FAB 5 and still some space would be left for Navya but here the king only was ruling it, she chuckled at her thoughts. She saw his jacket and shirt dropped on the floor carelessly, his shoes upside down. She ignored the mess and neared the bed.

Manik, she called out again but in a softer tone. But again no response, he was fast asleep. She thought of waking him up but then decided otherwise. She saw the peace on his face and decided not to disturb. As she walked out of the room Manik opened his eyes and saw her leave.

Why is he here?? To Sleep?? She muttered angrily. Nandini was getting restless with every passing moment. She took the room next to him and tried to be comfortable.

The next two hours she spent brain storming as to how she could get out of the place. She hunted her options. Well she could run but where?? It was a stranded place she didn't know what to expect. She had dozed off during their journey which left her completely clueless about their location. She could ask for someone's help?? But whom she had not spotted a single soul since the time they landed there. She could use Manik's car but again that was out of question, the last time she tried she almost killed herself. She could call someone?? But hell she didn't even have her phone or her bag. It made her blood boil to realize that Manik did that on purpose so that she was not able to get in touch with anyone. Finally she zeroed down that she would need Manik's help and had to wait for him to get up from his dream sleep.

She pondered on the allegations that she had laid on Manik, their argument which had led them there. Did she really believe whatever she said? She zoomed out of her thoughts when she heard a door open and then close.

Manik is up..her eyes twinkled. She jumped off the bed and came out of the room and followed Manik through the stairs. Manik was well aware of the chase but decided to play the ignorance is bliss game. He walked in to the kitchen straight and reached the king size fridge. Nandini was hopping behind him like a 5 year old does behind her dad to get her favorite toy. She wanted him to initiate the talk and was dancing behind him like a shadow for a little attention from him. Manik on the other hand took a juice pack from the fridge, poured some into a glass and picked a sandwich kept on the kitchen counter and headed upstairs nonchalantly.

Nandini stood there shocked..What he is ignoring me??Why is he behaving like that?? What is wrong with him??She needed her answers Why were they there?? She had waited for bloody 2 hours for the prince to wake up and he decides to just walk off. She was pissed.. damn pissed. She made her way upstairs and barged into his room and pulled him by his vest to make him face her.

What do you think you are doing Mr Manik Malhotra? Why have you got me here? She barked both the questions at one go.

Manik just gave her a cold stare and did not utter a word. His behavior was getting on her nerves now. Even she was hungry and this guy who claims to love her dint even ask her once let alone offering. So she decided to do it her way. She snatched the sandwich from his hand and in one bite half the sandwich was in her mouth. The bite was bigger than she could manage, she struggled to put it in place mumbling things in between which was impossible to understand. Her already chubby cheeks had puffed further with the food in her mouth. Manik had to agree that she looked adorably cute and her antics in that scenario made Manik smile for a moment. Nandini choked with the bread for a moment unable to swallow it and Manik offered her the juice which she took happily and finished in one go.

After she was done dining, she braced herself for the serious talk. Manik looked at her for straight 2 minutes and suddenly caught her by her arm, pulled her out of the room and banged the door close. She couldn't believe for a second. Did Manik actually throw me out of the room? She questioned herself.

Tears rolled down her cheeks without warning, she just could help them. What went so wrong between us that he had to behave like such a jerk? She knew she was at fault; she shouldn't have said and done what she did in the morning but was is that bad that he couldn't bear to see her, she wept louder but there was no one to console her. She wanted to feel his fingers wipe those tears off her face, she ran into her room and threw herself on the bed and bury her face in a pillow and wept harder.

Part 1 and 2 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4379926

Part 4 page 2

Part 5 page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it...quite interesting ...do write the next part soon...would love to read it
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nice update
continue soon
please previous update ki link muje pm kar do i cant find them and next time pm me
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cn uh plz gve me d lnk fo d prv. parts coz i ansolutely lvd dis part...bt hv no idea abt d prv ones...
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Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

nice update

continue soon
please previous update ki link muje pm kar do i cant find them and next time pm me

Thanx for liking it..Have updated the link of the previous parts on the original post ..kindly check and the next part is due tomorrow watch out for it
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Originally posted by: apps33

cn uh plz gve me d lnk fo d prv. parts coz i ansolutely lvd dis part...bt hv no idea abt d prv ones...

Thanx for liking it..Have updated the link of the previous parts on the original post ..kindly check and the next part is due tomorrow watch out for it
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I love the way you write 😉
PLEASE Post everything in one post it breaks the flow
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Why are u guys being so kanjoos with comments😭, gud bad whateva it is let it cum. But i am also dheent in true sense lo jhelo next part😛


Part 4

The clock ticked 3 am. Nandini couldn't sleep and just changed sides lying on the bed. She was lost in her thoughts. Her life had completely gone haywire after the Pandit incident. She didn't know what to focus and what to defocus from her life. The only sane thing in her life Manik had gone insane. She sat up on the bed a let out a deep sigh. A voice from somewhere inside her told that she had to make him talk to her. But she chided that part and argued

"Why cant he talk to me? I am in a vulnerable state. I should be pulling these stunts on him and he should be caring instead but no he only has to behave like this. Why? because he is The Manik Malhotra that's why?"

That part again put forth her point that Manik had made enough attempts to cajole and please her but she didn't give in to which she said (aloud)

"so what he wshould have tried a 100 times more if it was required, he is my Manik..."

The sudden sound of her own voice startled her, she was loud thinking. Manik was driving her crazy. She needed some water to bring back her sane senses; the side table had an empty jug. She got down from the bed and trolled downstairs to the kitchen. While on the stairs she glanced Manik lying on the couch on his tummy. He was large enough to fit in it. His left leg was arched on the arm of the sofa and his right leg was spread along touching the floor. His guitar was also giving him the company lying on the carpet under the couch. Nandini looked at him for a while and went to the kitchen to satiate her thirst. On her way back she again stopped near Manik. She had irritation written all over her face. She bent down slowly pointing both her palms to reach his neck.

"How could he sleep so peacefully when I am not being able to put my thoughts straight let alone sleep?" but stopped mid way and retreated her hands back. She kneeled before him to have a proper view of his face. He was so handsome so pure so innocent.

How could a guy as handsome and desirable as him fall for her? She thought

She was looking at him like that after a long time or may be it just seemed so besides she had not let him come close to her all this while except for the forced kiss part. She looked at his lips which he had crushed on to hers this morning and had an uncontrollable urge to touch them but stopped herself. She was not as impulsive as him and more so they were not talking. But she didn't want to leave him and hence slowly shifted herself somewhere near his chest and sat on the floor. She folded her hands on the edge of the sofa, tilted her head towards his face and closed her eyes. Yet another night they spent together in each other's aura.

The next morning was welcoming and afresh. Nandini had a good sleep after a long time; she twisted her arms back and forth to break the morning sloth. She realized that she was comfortably stretching her arms and legs and leapt and sat up on the couch. So Manik had put her there, a smile crossed her face and as she tried looking for him sitting on the couch her eyes stopped at the kitchen. The impeccably clean kitchen that she saw last night was in a complete mess. She charged towards the kitchen to note the details and extent of the mess.

Juice spilt on the floor, the kitchen counter had bread crumbs and burnt bread slices and egg shells scattered, the wash basin had used plates oozing out of it, coffee spilt on the gas burner. She slapped her palm on her forehead.

"Oh God!!! Was he making breakfast or fighting a battle in the kitchen" she rolled her eyes in exasperation.

She couldn't stand the mess anymore and stepped out of the kitchen to look for the brilliant chef, just when she saw the dining table. She was amazed by the very sight of it. She could see a glass of juice, some bread toasts and coffee neatly placed on a tray with a note (not the pink one) which just said.."EAT".

She was flattered by this gesture, even though they were not on talking terms, he took effort and made breakfast for them, although she was aware of his cooking skills .. I mean a man who would make coffee after referring 5-6 websites and would struggle to cut a lime, it was indeed a great deal. So she decided of taking her chances. But she had to freshen up first so she hurried upstairs to her room.

She entered the bathroom. It was a fully automated one. She could not figure out how to go about using stuff. It felt like she was about to launch a rocket for NASA, the knobs, the levers all seemed alien to her. It would actually be stupid to call Manik to help her out in this she thought to herself and decided to test her skills. She anticlockwise rotated the knob besides the wash basin but there came the shower and before she could manage to get hold of the knob again and turn it off she was completely drenched like a crow.

"Nandini ..you idiot what have to done", she muttered angrily

"Aiyappa what will I do now "trying to separate the wet garment from her body.

She had not planned this unwanted vacation with Manik and thus had no options in terms of clothing. She stepped out and hurried to Manik's room for help. She sneaked inside his room. Manik was in the shower she understood and stealthily picked up his shirt.

"Mr Malhotra u can do with your vest but I need this badly" giving a naughty smirk, just then Manik's phone buzzed, she literally pounced on it before it could make any further noise and saw Cabir's name flashing. She took the call.

Cabir - Hap..(when he was cut by Nandu's voice)

Nandu - Hello Cabir

Cabir - Nandini you.. where is Manik?

Nandu - Amm.. he is in the shower

Cabir - (in a teasing tone) well you should join him then.. I mean

Nandu - Cabir please.. I am really worried now

Cabir - I know I know you are worried about Chahca Chachi na, they are fine and they are more than relieved to know that you are with Manik. So don't worry about them..just worry abt Manik today is his..let it be I want you to figure is out. Bye

Nandu was a little relieved to know that at least Manik had taken care of these issues. She clenched his shirt closer to her heart. As she was about to put the phone down she saw 15 unread messages and 7 missed calls, she checked further to find out that his friends and family had sent birthday wishes to him.

"Oh hell it is his birthday today" She heard the water go slow and hopped out of his room in one go and once she managed to get in her room she started cursing herself.

"Oh God!! Aiyappa it is his first birthday with me when I should be doing special things for him all I did was annoy him. I was going to strangulate him last night..Oh No Aiyappa pls forgive me pls forgive me "(slapping both her cheeks lightly one by one) but the frowny pout on her face soon was replaced by a mischievous smile.

"No worries the day has just started ..I will make sure that he never forgets this birthday of his ..be ready birthday boy for some real surprise."

She quickly freshened up this time being a little extra careful and changed into his shirt which was more like a half gown to her pertaining to her size. The shirt reached somewhere near her mid thighs, two Nandus could easily fit in there, the sleeves made her hand invisible. She looked at her reflection in the mirror, she would have been embarrassed otherwise but here she was around her man and she didn't feel shy, she had his aroma all over her and clung to the shirt as if it was Manik himself. She tied her hair into a top knot and headed to the kitchen for her preparation. She quickly cleaned the counter so that she is able to start her work. As she was busy in her work, Manik came down. He had put his jacket on his vest and figured out the whereabouts of his shirt as he saw Nandini in the kitchen hopping from one corner to another. He thought of calling her but something stopped him..he turned around and walked out of the door without making a sound. Nandini had lots to do before evening, she had to cook, bake a cake, make a gift for him and lots. As she was about to start she thought what if Manik came down her surprise will be spoilt and so she immediately tiptoed upstairs and locked the door of his from outside.

"Mr Malhotra the wait will be worth it.. I promise.. Nandini promise "

She began her arrangements. First she started with the cake and then made a few of Manik's favorite dishes that she knew. She was running all over the house as if it was her own, making every arrangement single handedly. She really wanted to make it up to everything that they had missed out on. She trotted to the garden and handpicked the flowers to make a beautiful bouquet out of it. She didn't have many things to decorate but she did everything that she was allowed under that scenario.

Although she was surprised that Manik had not made any attempts to get out of the room so far, she ignored her doubt thinking he must have slept again, that is something he had been doing a lot since they came there. Besides it was good for her, she got ample amount of time for her surprise without him intervening, she blushed thinking how amazed he would be by this gesture of hers and she didn't want to disappoint him this time. It was almost evening and she had finished her preps. She dimmed the lights, placed the cake on the centre table which said "HAPPY BDAY MY MONSTER" decorated it with candles and flowers and after giving the final touches she went upstairs to get Manik.

She slowly unlocked the door and slightly pushed it open. "Happy BDay Manik " she announced. She saw no one. Nandini got a little worried, she looked around the whole room, in the bathroom and in the balcony but he was nowhere. She rushed downstairs, through the massive door, out in the open. She called out his name hysterically, pleading him to respond, she also threatened him out of sheer helplessness to come out but nothing came handy. She ran from one corner to another bare footed but couldn't see a trace of him. She had already started crying, when a deep shock engulfed her..his car was not there.. Which means he had left.. he had left her alone and gone. Her body was shivering, the knees were not supporting her to stand and she thumped on the grass.

The night had fallen, even Manik's stars were betraying her. It was dark all around her vision was further clouded by her tears. She didn't know what to do? Where to go? and just sat leaning on the wall beside the door and crying. She had lost all hope and was on the verge on loosing herself when she heard a car honk at the main gate. She stood up with a brisk and wiped her tears to get her vision back.

Manik got down from the car.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is so not fair to stop here ... It's wrong :'(

Continue now I want to read more..
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pls pls one more..
dis was such a cliff hanger..

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