Coz, WE ARE MEANT TO BE MISS MURTHY..!!part3 (last part) pg no 6 - Page 2

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Ha Ha
Nice try fresh epi
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Amazing one..loved it..hope to see smthng like this in the show...
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lovely continue soon jaanu and pm me baby
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i cn juz say a single word-WOW..
seriously lyk hw, hw uh alwayz manage to amaze me?!!
plz continue..
v r being tortured as there is no fresh epi on fridayz :( :(
thank uh foh the pm..
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Originally posted by: Saisha77

i cn juz say a single word-WOW..
seriously lyk hw, hw uh alwayz manage to amaze me?!!
plz continue..
v r being tortured as there is no fresh epi on fridayz :( :(
thank uh foh the pm..
i wna say 1 more thing.. again a thank uh.. there r 15 memberz in ur pm list n m 1 of them.. thank uh.. n i knw i nvr hit lyk button but frm nw onwardz i surely will do :) :)



Ty so much.. There are more than that in my pm list but they dont allow more than 50 so.. But i will pm u guys never ever i willmiss them
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Wow..awesome os..love your writing
Hope something like this happen on the show too
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awesome os ...
u have to continue...😭
plz don't stop it here ...
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aww loved it
totally
please write more dear
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Part 2:

After a while,

Nandini: wait wait wait that means you are coming with me?

Manik: tumhe achanak ho kya jata hai and oh dumb agar tumhare sath baitha hun toh obviously.

With this he again made her rest her head but she jerked off

Nandini: are you nuts?

Manik: of course not!

Nandini: Manik it's not a joke you know na Am's don't like you?

Manik: han toh

Nandini: don't act Manik, you can't

Manik: oh hello Miss. Murthy, as I said I am here for workshop and that workshop is held by

Nandini in shock: Am's? But she is classical singer

Manik: Yes we know this is Classical workshop.

Nandini got amazed: seriously you will learn classical?

Manik: You doubt me

Nandini: Manik, why are you doing all this? Why are you taking all pain for me?

Manik: I am doing all this for US.

Nandini had tears...

They reached Mangalore...

Urwa, Manglore. ( that place is requested by a buddy that's for you toshana)

Fab3, Risabh and Navya too reaches there..

Cabir: wow Nandini grand place han?

Nandini: It's of our ancestor.

Manik: wow, I like old places the smell amazes me...

Nandini was looking at him he was so adorable and suddenly

Am's: Oh so SPACE students are here?

Cabir: Namaste mam

And everyone did Namaste and even Manik but Am's still hated Manik..

Nandini and Risabh hugged Am's

Am's: aiyyo Risabh Nandini tum dono bhi nachalo andar..

Am's was going ahead when she ordered servant to keep their luggage in guest room and arrange bed for them.

Am's: take rest kids class will start after 2 hours.

Mukti: like seriously itni tiring journey ke bad no rest

Am's: rest de rahi hun you are not here to roam. And yaa Nandini apne frens ko bata do I am so punctual and strict and I want well mannered students in my class maintain discipline, telling this she eyed Manik

Cabir: tu to gaya

Nandini came with water and said: guys am's

Mukti: suna humne chill

Nandini: Thanks Mukti.

***

15 mins left to complete 2 hours,

Manik was the first to get up,

Manik: guys get up

Mukti: Yar Manik sone de

Cabir: han yar

Alya gets up n sprinkles water on everyone

Mukti: what the f**k Alya?

Alya: get up guys Manik need us please

They all got ready before 5 mins

Nandini thinking, "Aiyyo, Am's uth gaye yeh log lemme check?"

Nandini knocks the door and gets shocked to see everyone so fresh

Manik: Hey are we late? Guys come fast

Nandini: no Am's is in her room

Manik: thank god, chale guys?

Cabir still sleepy: yaa okay.

*****

They sat in the riyaaz hall and Am's arrived

Am's: I am happy to see you all, first of all Nandini meko khusi hui tumne fusion concert main bht acha kia and Manik tumne bhi.

Manik: Thanks Am's

Am's: main sirf Nandini ki Am's hun

Manik: sorry, mam

Everyone was shocked Manik apologizing for the thing he is not wrong. Nandini was getting hurt by this but Manik assured with eyes that's it is okay

Am's: Nandini you dint let Trilok down and nor did me..

Nandini tremble on the name of Pandit she started sweating profusely incident rolled in front of her eyes, When Am's touched her she shouted and went to her room.

Manik: shit! Nandini wait

Am's: Manik yeh mera ghar hai iske rules hai.

Manik: Am's please she needs me

Am's: NO

Manik: Am's please, he shouted a bit which was heard by Nandini as she was returning and she slapped him

Everyone got shocked

Cabir: Nandini

Nandini: she is my Am's Manik dare you talk loudly with her

Manik was shocked by her gesture: I am sorry Nandini and Mam

Cabir: Mam hum kal se

Manik: Nai we are fine..

They started the riyaaz.. Nandini knew what she did was wrong she was waiting for him to look at him but he dint look at her once...

After the class got over he went straight in the room and took his guitar took the car keys and was leaving the house..

Am's: 9 pm deadline. This is neither Mumbai nor your house

Manik: I won't disappoint you mam

***

Mukti: Manik kaha hai?

Cabir: chill Mukti he will be back for Nandini

Alya: this is wrong how can Nandini? Manik ne apna sab kuch Nandini pe luta dia and she

Nandini was hearing all this and she actually felt that she came in

Nandini: Guys Manik?

Mukti: nai pata

Nandini: kya?

Alya: yeh tumhe tab sochna chahiye tha

It was 8:55 when they were talking and suddenly Manik arrived,

Cabir: Kaha that u? phone kaha hai tera?

Manik: sorry guys but you won't believe yar yahan the lake it was so beautiful

Mukti: tu thik hai na?

Manik: of course

Nandini: Manik.

Manik ignored her

Manik: yar Cabir khan eke liye koi news

Nandini: Guys main yehi batane aai thi food is ready please come

****

After dinner he came back to room without saying goodnite to her

Cabir: Manik tu use avoid q kar raha hai?

Manik: toh kya karu?

Cabir: tu gussa hai for the slap?

Manik: no Cabir she can slap me jitna she want its not that but she is not telling this to Am's

Cabir: Hmm bdw yeh offer humare liye nai hai slap wala?

Manik: maza aara hai tujhe

****

Am's: Nandu what's bothering you? Nandini was resting her head on Am's Lap and stroking her hairs

Nandini: Nothing Am's

Am's: tum ab Manik se close nai ho acha kia I don't

Nandini gets up and walks to her room but stops and says: Am's, Manik is the best guy I came across.. ek bar use samjh loge na toh dikkat nai hogi. Aaj agar main apke samne sahi salamat hun na to uske wajah se good nite Am's

****

Everyone was sleeping..

Am's and Cabir were roaming and suddenly am's saw Cabir

Am's: tum yahan?

Cabir: neend nai aari thi.. mam aap yahan

Am's: beta Nandini thik hai na?

Cabir: nai

Am's was shocked kya hua use

Cabir: kya fayda aap bharosa nai karoge

Am's: Aisa q bol re ho?

Cabir: qki yeh apke pyare student Trilok ke bare main hai and Manik ke bare main bhi

Am's: kya?

Cabir narrates the wohle incident and says yakeen nai toh abhi bhi news dekh lo Nyonika ka statement ya fir Mumbai ki jail

Am's gets shocked and go on her knees

Cabir: Am's are you okay?

Am's: meri beti ne itna kuch saha, I can never think trilok can be such creep and Manik instead of praising him I accused him. Aiyappa yeh maine kya kar diya?

Cabir: Am's please control

Am's and Cabir sees Nandini

Am's: Main abhi Nandu se bat karti

Cabir: nahi Am's woh ake pas ayegi and waise bhi woh abhi Manik ke pass and aap chinta mat karo they will never let you down aap sojao

****

In rest room,

Nandini saw Manik taking turns but can't sleep

Nandini: Neend nai aari..

Manik shouted: tum?

Nandini covers his mouth: shh sab uth jayege

Manik: tum?

Nandini: han coz I knew tum so ni pare

Manik: acha, hmm

Nandini: why are you avoiding me angry?

Manik: I can't avoid you bus I can't see you like that.. and m not angey you can hit me thousand time, I won't mind.

Manik makes Nandini lay her head on his lap and moves his hand in her hand..

Manik: the way you calm me down hope I can do the same

Nandini kisses his hand..

She was melting...

Precap:

Nandini shares the night

Nandini tells Am's

Manik leaves Nandini and returning home...

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Wow!!! Finally amms knows now...she'll surely stop him

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