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part -2

college

Soon enough , both entered the college .

Nandini had taken up her passion of writing and studied literature , for like her monster put it

" when she wrote , her each word like a magical potion clung to another to create thundering spells ",

But , Manik studied commerce , hoping to soon take on his father's business .

Their courses were different , they had friends in their classes , but still nothing changed .

They still talked about everything, all the time under the sun .

Not soon enough, after loads of fights , innumerable number of times emotional blackmails to each other , thousands of special moments tucked away in the corners of the college , late night coffees , a gazillion phone calls and texts

There courses almost came to an end .

It hadn't been an easy journey for Nandini , she had her share of stresses and doubts . she had always been living in a shell , not opening up with fears , fears built in her since long .

but Manik as always , was there for her , hearing her each and every debate script that she changed a million times without even one complain to making sure he stood in the audience and gave her all the hope and the world's luck in every competition she participated .

Very stealthily indeed he had captured her heart .

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Infact not long back , when she had lost a competition and had gotten sad

A kind of sad that , manik felt she would go back her earlier self

So , He had started writing chits for her and keeping in her room for a month .

Till date he remembered the first one , even though he berated that his writing wasn't even close to hers

" Nandini

Remember I love stars right ?

And you always asked me why !

Soo here is your monster's secret , so make sure u stash this piece away once you read it :P

You know Maa always said

" For the love that created the stars ,

Created you .

Soo when you look at yourself in the mirror ,

Smile at the sun and the moon in you .

Feel the oceans and

The roaring lions inside you .

.For you are the one with the whole .

. And all is inside you.

Soo my girl , keep smiling , the way you are smiling right now !

Hey don't look around , I know you are smiling .

Just make sure you Keep that one safe ."

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And for manik too , it wasn't any different

He too had his fears , his share of struggle .

Manik was the second son of "the Malhotra's " , even after being the youngest , his father never saw him capable to being a businessman .

He always said " Manik , that guitar of yours won't get you anywhere , it's the books that will "

Not that Manik was bad at studies , but just for his brother was brilliant in them .

Every other day , whenever he had altercations with his dad , or everytime when his brother showed him down at the lavish parties with his harsh words .

He would rush home , lock up himself into his room and switch off his phone .

And that was it , and Nandini would know .

She would slowly unlock the door with the duplicate key and go and just sit near him in his pitch dark room .

She wouldnt say a word , just slowly ruffle his hair and in a just a few moments he would lay his head on her lap and she wouldn't stop caressing his forehead until he would open up .

And soon enough he would be healed .

It was rather beautiful ,

The way she put his insecurities to sleep.

The way she dove into his eyes,

starved all his fears.

And then tasted all the dreams that

he had kept coiled beneath the bones.

it was just beautiful .

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Last day of college

" manik , are you sure I' m looking fine ?" she asked him , looking at herself for the millionth time in the mirror .

She was in a beautiful white lace gown , fitted perfectly to highlight her slim , petite form , her hair in a half up crown updo with her curly tresses falling on the sides of her shoulder and the a beautiful floral tiara on her head and her ears studded with simple , small floral earrings .

She looked like an angel walked down from heaven

"Breathtakingly beautiful " Manik sighed to himself when he saw her .

He then slowly helped with her gown and they both made their way into the early evening party that was hosted for their farewell .

That day wasn't another day , for the first time they had realized the spark betwixt them when they were announced " the best couple of the evening ".

Something that Nandini hadn't expected in her dreams !

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reality

Nandini was soon an intern and Manik was in his training period .

It was Just a few days after their farewell and the reality of life hadn't yet sunk into the two .

" Nandini , I m going to Bangalore for a month " he said in an extremely low voice for he knew it wasn't as easy as he had said it .

" what ?" she said in an absolutely astonished voice

After loads of talking and complaining he packed to leave the very next day

That night , Nandini couldn't sleep

She knew the reason

.It was him.

He slowly kissed her forehead and hugged her once again before leaving . When suddenly ,

she pulled him and hugged him and whispered

" Don't forget me "

And all he could think of was could he ever do that ?

She had asked

as if the coast could forget the shore ,

or lung could forget to breathe,

or the earth could forget the sun,


thinking , that he kissed her cheek and strode inside leaving

a girl with half a heart behind .


ohk , firstly i m absoultely sorry for the delay and yes ! it is a threeshot soo the main part is yet to come .

also this is an alternate universe hence their character development are different .

i hope you guys like this part and yes ! the nxt part will be quick i promise .

Edited by drnidsur - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
soo beautiful
& the lines u used in b/w
those r so superb
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love this update... the way they comfort each other and their slow realization is adorable...can't wait to what the separation does for them...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really amazing!! Waiting for the next update!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Superb short n sweet.beautiful quotes and pouring their heart loved it 👏 continue pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
your words can create magic. ..

Ur the outstanding nidhi. ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: urvisaini

Beautiful!

Continue soon

tysmmm
will surely 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: navk

soo beautiful
& the lines u used in b/w
those r so superb

tysmm
i m glad u loved those lines
😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love this update... the way they comfort each other and their slow realization is adorable...can't wait to what the separation does for them...

tysm
i m glad u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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tysmmm😳😳

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