Removed - Page 4

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

fab update

loved it

nicely written

cont soon

Quote

Apurva

@apps33

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

wooahhh it was amazing

loved it

but how can manik evn say dat to nandu😒

nywae hope uh wll sort out evrythn soon bt manik deserved dat punch from cabira n rishab

wll b waiting fo next update

plz pm me if possible

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

awsm update

loved it

new twist

hmm its getting more interesting now

cont soon

Quote

zaroge

@zaroge

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

m supper confused ...

why the hell r they fighting

Quote

Roshni S

@Roshni8

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Hey it was a nice update

And this title suits the story actually

And Manik was really harsh with the words.

And Thanx for the pm

Update soon

Quote

baani9

@baani9

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Nice update.
What is this twist yaar.continue soon y did Manik speak with Nandu like that I know he is annoyed with her decision n why did u Change the title.
continue soon

Edited by baani9 - 10 years ago

Quote

kirankusum

@kirankusum

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Hey I m just speechless
I dont know what to say to you
Just one word superb
Update soon
And do accept my buddy request
And do pm me when you uodate the next part
I read all the parts in one go
It was really amazing
But the suspense is killing me what would be happend at that night
Wanted eargerly to know
So plz update asap
Love kiran
Its a very long comment of mine
Woh bhi first time