Tangled Up With U! Ch15: page 40

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AishaManan

@AishaManan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

i read all parts in one go and they r really amazing

i luv to read dark ffs i really enjoy them plz continue like this

and plz update ASAP

lots of luv

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Fatima

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Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Okkk just read all the 13 partsss wowww

I feel so sad for nandini...update sooon

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#203

woww!!!!!that was amazing...i jus loved it...u penned it soo nicely...plss update soon...
eagerly waiting for next part..

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jeel_patel

@jeel_patel

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Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Long time riya no update

Hope to see d next part soon

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musicalstars

@musicalstars

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Posted: 10 years ago

#205

i feel sorry for nandini...she doesn't deserve manik...she deserves someone much better...how can he abuse her...he has no right to abuse her...n y is he behaving like this...?? n after so much last night he still doesn't feel guilty or bad for hurting her so much n abusing her even after she reminds him...n he have guts to say that she can give him disease how can he...this is the first fiction in which i am hating manik...

though i know that somehow nandini will change him n later he will regret on whatever he has done till now but still its to much that he has done...n i don't think that any girl can forgive any guy for this...

i thank that nandini is strong n she will fight back with him n not let him rule over her...

when will u update the next part??

update soon...it has been very long since u updated the last part...

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Absa hasna

@Hasi-Pani1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#206

heyy plsss update soon dea...eagerly waiting...i jus loved ur story...

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blookfericon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Chapter 14

Mom you guys should have informed me" I said firmly to mom while looking at how she was packing her things.
"I know but we really was informed about visa yesterday and there Radhika needs me " mom said. Radhika was their adopted daughter who is pregnant now in USA while mom is going there today itself just before my meet. Ugh! Now I have to tolerate Manik whole time.

" I will miss you " I said while hugging my mother in law. They waved us and disappeared leaving both of us alone. Yeah! His cousins were off to their homes today morning an dhow mom and dad.
" Be ready wife for meeting! " he said and I gave him bad smile.
" All the best dude! " I said firmly and walked to get ready for office. I went to the room and took my clothes and quickly changing it.
"kaka I am leaving" I announced.
"Beta I wanted to inform today i will leave till 7 " he said while I packed my laptop.
" Okahe! But please dinner bana dijiyega " I said walking it. Manik! Must have gone.

...
" Aman? " I asked while he checked my presentation.
" Ma'am just conclusion is left " he said and I nodded. Just an hour and I will make sure he will feel ashamed as I will win the contract.
" Ma'am done " Aman said while I was checking other files.
" Okahe Aman! Check is hall is prepared or not " I asked him while I nodded.
I took the picture of myself when I was in Canada and looked at it. I changed so much. God! I was wearing mini skirt with shrug and top while now I am in my salwar kammez! I changed.
" Ma'am they are here " Aman said and I nodded. I kept my picture and walked out to the conference hall.
I saw Manik siting and smirking waiting for me.

" Good Morning to everyone and specially to our special guest Mr. Malhotra. I know this presentation means a lot to everyone here and to the country. I hope I fulfill all the things through my presentation what you expect from me. Okahe let's get started " I said and the lights went off setting the presentation on.

There came some slides while I answered all the questions thoroughly and surprisingly he kept smirking without saying anything. After sometime th lights went on and I looked at Manik.

"So Mr. Malhotra! Do you have any complain? " I asked him with raising my eyebrow.
" You know what Mrs. Malhotra. I have lots of complains but one compliment " he said making my jaw dropped. I totally recovered.
" Oh! So may I know the compliment? " I asked while he nodded.
" You looked best in whole presentation thing and you were the highlighter while I wished for presentation to be the highlighter " he said making everyone gasp. Did he just flirted with me in front of everyone.
" T... hanku " I said and he again smirked. bas***d!
" Okahe we accept go ur deal though it was not soo good " he said and I nodded.
" I promise you the work will be awesome " I said and we shook hand while he winked at me and walked out Levin game totally shocked.

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" What was that in office? " I asked him keeping my bag asked in couch while he watched televison.
" What? Flirt? Please do not take it serious I just wanted to make clear to everyone that we are really great couple. " he said and I looked shocked.
" Manik what are you doing? " I asked.
" Watching televison " he said
" No manik about all these things? Why? " I asked
" About this shitty marriage? Which never meant for you? "
" Manik I know it's kind of shitty but though I want to make it meaning full to me and you " I said and he laughed.
" No no! If you ever wanted you would have not kissed him just 5 dates before marriage " he said
" Whom? I newer kissed anyone Manik " I said gasping. Did he thought cheap of me. So cheap?
" Oh! OH! Don't be ashamed because hugging nd kissing him in public was really not shameless " he said and I felt tear piercing in my eyes.
"whom??? Whom? Can u please tell" I shouted and he ew the remote and came towards me.
"Whom? Whom? Ur ex boyfriend or still having affair with STEVE? " he asked and I held my mouth with hands to stop yelling. God! Misunderstanding again!?

" Manik he - " I tried said but he held my arms.
" Shut up! U Know why I married after knowing Ur shitty action because it was all about Mom and Dad's reputation. Otherwise who wil ever want u? " and pushed while I trumbled back.
" Manik-" Itried but he stopped me again.
"You can sleep in any room just do not enter in mine " he said walking upstairs while I kept sobbing on floor.

He was not in mistake nor I was but and I never expected him to trust at me cause he just me the. But point is why is he so angry? Is he jealous?
I know you are quite angry! And you not being in faukt I promise I will make this marriage work. Anyhow! ANY HOW!

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Okahe now I think the secret is disclosed now if u all r going to ask why Nandini is not angry on manik so the answer is that she never expected manik to trust her as they just had some days of their marriage. Freak! And no one can expect anyone to trust anyone. Now about Steve kiss and hug soon will be disclosing.

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anupama_m

@anupama_m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#208

After soo long u r back wid a bang...
Riyaaa... love u for dis kind of updates...
And ya plz disclose da other half of da misunderstanding also...
keep rocking...

Edited by anupama_m - 10 years ago