MANAN OS: WRONG NUMBER : chap 14 pg 26 Oct 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
aw both are shocked hehe
manik lyks nandu
interesting
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
both r shocked hihihi lol manik maybe likes her n nandini will be like him soon so first kiss wwooww update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
"3 din ladki in " challenge will be fun... and ya pictures idea is awesome.. u should attach pics... and plz pm me nxt tym... i didn't receive pm for last two updates...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
As a reader we like to see pictures also as it help us to understand the story more and we like it more and the update was amazing plz con soon 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
loved the part3..
OMG..! manik in nandu' s home it wld be fun to read hw manik wld make nandu fall for him..
plzz update soon nd do pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Great update!! Yes pictures would be nice!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
story is going very nice...& yeah..if u will attach pics in the story ,it will b more effective & remarkable...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Nice continue soon and please pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
So I heard u all want the pics...for some reason I couldn't upload pics today!!...but I will make sure the story is interesting keep showering me with these comments thank you ...
-loads of love
Manasa
Chapter 4:-
I was so bored that night...I couldn't sleep I decided not to sleep ..I made some popcorn ...a can of coke and a movie was all that was needed for me right at the moment ...I crept to the kitchen slowly not making any sound as manik was asleep in my room...I hated thinking that...I went and bought the things from the kitchen and went and sat in the comfy couch and switched on the TV ...I thought of watching a horror movie ..."the conjuring"was going on ...I sat back started having my popcorn and coke and was watching movie happily ..but I was a little bit scared too...I was waiting for the scene were the ghost would come ...suddenly after a few mins the lights turned off...maybe the power had gone ...I was a bit scared but I sat were I was sitting and didnt move a hair out of it's place ...a hand came near my shoulder ...I got hell scared and I screamed "HELP!!!AAA" and suddenly the ghost held my mouth I closed my eyes ...and the ghost spoke ...the ghost actually spoke in a sexy tone "open ua eyes " I was already impressed by the ghosts voice I opened my eyes anyone could tell I was sweating ...and I was not less surprised to see who the ghost was...it was The Manik Malhothra ...though he was not less than the ghost...he was a Greek god ghost I laughed at my own sarcastic thinking ...but this time I was hell annoyed for making me pissed off...I was so angry on manik I saw a vase next to me and started hitting him "manik how dare u...u idiot ..I just hate u and he started running ...I started running back if him hitting him yelling his name ...and guess what we fell on the bed ...we fell like every Bollywood movie scenes...god it was embarrassing ...I fell on top of him he had to hold my waist for support...so here we were looking into each others eyes...deeply passionately ...
Maniks pov
We were on each other just like those dumb movies...but for some reason I liked touching her ...unintentionally ...we were lost in each others eyes...he beautiful eyes made me fall for her...her clear face looked like the moon...and her rose petal kind of lips made me kiss her so I approached for her lips she didn't respond anything so I thought it was OK to kiss her...even she wanted the same ...so I went near her...and placed my lower lips on her upper ones ...it tasted like strawberry maybe she was wearing a strawberry lipgloss...and she responded back it was a surprise for me though...but it felt nice ...i had kissed many people before but her...it felt like I want her alwayz her dace was the one whom I wanted to wake up and see daily morning ...whom I wanted to love with always...we could have kids one maybe 2 or 3 who knws ??? And suddenly with this thinking ...I broke the Kiss...I didn't want to but with that kind of thoughts running on my mind I had to...so I did and went away from there...
End of POV
We kissed we actually did...I dint want to but still...it was the most best experience of my life...I loved it...but he broke it so soon ...of course he doesn't love me and all he is a flirt and I kissed him ...i fell asleep there only with a smile on my face ...as I was totally exhausted ...
My pov
Manik had come there after a lot of thinking processes ...he came and saw her sleeping peacefully ...with a smile ...he did wanted to see her face every morning ...he slept next to her without touching ...
Next morning when I woke up I saw manik sleeping next to me...first I had ddirty thoughts coming in my mind but though I hated him I trusted him and he couldn't do such things ...I woke up and went to prepare coffee..I took two mugs my favourite ones...I took 2 spoons of nescafe and sugar and poured milk and took the one cup to manik he was sleeping peacefully ...it was looking as if he to had a horrible past ...I felt that I should make him spitout that pain he had hod it in himself for some years now...cabir had mentioned that he had a bad past but what?even she didn't have any idea she woke manik up and told there is coffee in the table and then off to bath...
I again stood below the hot shower ...it was falling on my shoulders like heaven ...I felt relaxed ..for the first time I dint think of my past under the shower ..but what I thought of was yesterday ...the kiss and all the moments...I smiled ...I came out of the shower wrapped myslef in a blue towel...and saw the mirror I was blushing for no reason..I stepped out and manik was awake rubbing his eyes having coffee...he saw Me and gave a devilish smirk I gave one back to and I banged the room door beind him ...and I was changing I thought as it was weekend I ..dhruv...abhi ...navya and alya should go shopping today ...so I wre a Capri's...and a. Forever 21 plain yellow top with a long Chain...I had my hair into a pony tail a little bit of blush eyeliner and khol...and I was perfect I came out and saw manik preparing breakfast I guess ...egg omlete ...it did look yummy we ate it .."I'm hitting the shopping mall today with my friends u wanna join with ua friends. ?".. I and my friends would love to...
So we all met at the mall ...I met mukthi...and cabir I already knew...and another guy named aryamaan he was surely hot...so we all chilled out I could see a spark between navya and cabir and I had bcme the cupid now between them. ...we had full on masti we also sang song they gave as a mike and we were singing and all had given us one penny each some people one dollar...it was fun after a long day I and manik reached home ...
Precap:- manik to know about nandus past and manik to be her supporting system ...cabir got to knw that manik has fallen for her...as for nandini he is trying to find out...cavya romance

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update...please continue soon and pm me when u next update

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