A Manan,Dhruv n Cabir SS:No one can tear us apart(new prt Tsrs pg 3)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Introduction:-
Its a story of four chilhood best friends who r inseparable cauze they live for each other.They r good at nature but if any one intends to harm them then they can go to any extent to protect each to other.Their families r closer to each other one or the other way.

Index
1)Intro:-Page 1
2)Characters:-Page 1
3)Part 1:-Page 2
4)Part 2:-Page 3
5)Part 3 :- Page 4
6) Part 4 spoiler:- Page 3

So enjoy the intro afterwards I'll introduce the characters n then part wise update the stories too.
Edited by Sandhirrocks - 9 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice conceptstart ur fictioon son
Loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continue soon..
plz do pm me..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character sketch:-
  • Yash Malhotra:-Worlds top businessman,husband of Nyonika Malhotra n father of Manik.Very kind at heart n is affectionate towards Nandini.
  • Nyonika Malhotra:-Owner of S.P.A.C.E academy, wife of Yash Malhotra n mom of Manik.She loves her family allot n she is affectionate towards Nandini.
  • She is a very calm soul as she handles everything calmly.
  • Manik Malhotra:-The most hottest guy in the town n son of Nyonika n Yash Malhotra.Loves his freind allot n is always there for them but hates the one who harms his freinds.Nandini is her one of her best friends n girlfriend too.Apart from Nandini Dhruv n Cabir r also her bff.
  • Prakaash Moorti:-World renowned heart surgeon,husbend of Naima Moorty n father of Nandini .He loves their daughter allot.
  • Naima Moorti:-A famous orthopedist,wife of Prakaash Moorti n Nandini's mom.Nandini is her life.
  • Nandini Moorty:-She is very bold n beauriful.She is a fashonita.She is daughter of the famous doctors Dr.Prakaash Moorty n Naima Moorty.Manik is one of his best friend n her boyfriend n apart from Manik Cabir n Dhruv r also her bffs
  • Sunaina Dhruv:-She is one of the famous event planner n Cabirs mom.She acts more as a best friend then a Mom.She loves Cabirs friend n knows that Cabir loves Navya.
  • Cabir Dhawan:-He is a fun loving guy n his mother is an event planner .
  • He relly loves his mon n frendz allot.He's not a gay,he loves Navya n wanta to confess her when she comes back from USA to India.His bffs r Manik,Nandini n Dhruv.
  • Chetna:-Chetna is a renowned chef n has three children namely Nil,Dhruv n Aanya.
  • Nil:-Nil is elder brother of both Dhruv n Aanya n eldest son of chetna .He is in banking field.
  • Dhruv:-He is very shy type of guy.Loves spending time with his family n frendz.His bffs r Manik,Nandini n Cabir.
  • Navya:-Navya is Nandini's cousin sister n she had to leave India at the age of 17 to go for her higher studies. She loves Cabir n soon wants to confess her feeling as soon as she reaches reaches India cause now she had completed her studies n now she wants to learn music n that too in India at S.P.A.C. academy in Mumbai.She is also another fashionista.

Note:-In this all families r family frends from long si they know each other very well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting
please,send me pm when you post first part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting cs continue soon..please pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting concept... love the character sketch... and plz pm me if you can...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1:-
Nandini:-Pata nahi abhi tak yeh monster utha bhi hoga yaa nahi.Uff I have to check him everyday,aiyappa yeh larka kab sudhrega
(On the other hand The Great Manik Malhotra was sleeping peacefully holding a frame closest to his heart which was picture of all four friends .Finally Nandii came to his house)
Nyonika:-Bete aap abb hee jaa kar hamaare sahabzyaade ko utha sakti hain humne toh itni kosish kar li par yeh uthey tabb naa.
Nandini:-Don't worry aunty abhi dekhna main aapke is monster bete ko kaise utha ti hoon.
Nyonika:-Jaaiye hamaari mini monster jaake unhe uthaaiye,pure 10 baj rahe hain aur hamaare monster bete abhi take so rahe hain.
(Nandini straight away went to his room n found him sleeping peacefully, he was looking very cute.She slowly removed the frame from his hand n then kissed him on his cheeks. Manik woke up with a smile,held her from waist n kissed her hands.)
Manik:-Good morning my shining star.
Nandini:-Good morning to u too my monster but as of now u need to get up.
Manik:-No Nans not now.
Nandini:-Its ten Manik,please get up otherwise I'll not talk to u.
Manik:-Nans yaar this blackmailing.
Nandini:-Get up fast I said.
(As Manik woke up Cabir n Dhruv came in the room n started taunting him)
Dhruv:-Tch..Tch..Tch..poor Manik Malhotra.
Cabir:-Baba Manik toh bura phase.
Manik:-Guyz will u just stop all this
Nandini:-Manik please get up its our first day at S.P.A.C.E academy.
Manik:-Uff Nans why u forget that its mom college only ek din nahi jaaenge toh kuch nahi hoga.
Dhruv:-Abb mahabharat suru hone se koi nahi rok sakta hai.
Cabir:-Aur iss mahabharat ke baad Anaarkali aur Salim ki love story suru ho jaaegi.
Nandini:-Manik just because its ur mom college that dosen't means ki tum college miss karo,how can u be so irresponsible yaar.
Manik:-Nandini plese yaar subeh subeh apni lecture matt start karo.
Nandini:-Accha abb tumhe meri baatein lecture lagne lagi haa actually u know what ur bored with me n u want another girl for ur own pleasure.
Manik:-Nandini just shut up aage ek aur world bola naa toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga.
Nandini:-Mujhe bhi koi shaukh nahi hai jaa rahi hun main huh.
(Manik indicated Cabir n Dhruv to move out of the room so both of them went to hall area.As soon as Nandini was about to leave Manik held her hand)
Nandini:-Abb kya hua mujhe pakkar kyon rakkha hai.Hamesha toh main hee galat hoti hoon naa aur the great Manik Malhotra hanesha sahi.
Manik:-Nans m sorry par mujhe uss time gussa aa gaya when u said that m bored with u.U seriously think that I only touch u for my pleasures; Nandini what I feel for u trust me there is no one else in this whole damm world for whom I can feel like what I feel for u.
Nandini:-M too sorry Manik may be I reacted to much.
Manik:-Leave that n give my sorry kiss
Nandini:-OK come baba
(She held Manik's face n the kissed straight on his lips. They had long kissing session of damm 4 minutes n soon broke the kiss as they were out of breathe)


Hope u liked the first chap guys.

Edited by Sandhirrocks - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part..
Loved it...
Waiting for next part :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update dea. .
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time

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