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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Thanks god, after a long time u post my fav story. Plz keep posting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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All they went back towards their homes as iit was a hectic yet dramatic day in college.
Arjun dropped nandu home. Nandu went inside.
She threw her jacket and bag on a couch in living room , and went to check Rishab in his room he was playing video games.
Nandu went and lay herself on bed
Nandu:Hey rishu what's up?
Rishab: as if you care di.
Nandu: what happened now ? Ab mene kiya kya ?
Rishu: Dii jab se US Se wapas aayi ho , you didn't bother to spend some time with me , bs you and your friends.
Nandu: ohh ! I am sorry rishu I know its my mistake and I promise I will do anything to make it up?
Rishu: Pakka dii ? Anything ?
Nandu: anything tu bol tou?
Rishu: okay so this whole weekend, you will be with me di ,we will go to shopping , play video games and will do hell fun , that's what I want .
Nandu: okay baba , as u say.
She kissed his cheek and went to her room.
She got freshen up and was checking her mails and Facebook on her lapi.


Malhotra Mansion

Manik and dhruv came home. Niyonika was sitting in the living room and watching some news channel
Both came and kissed their mom's cheeks
Manik and Dhruv in unison: hey mom
Niyo:hellow boys so how was your day ?
Manik:Hectic
Niyo: I hope you are not planning to bbulley the freshers this time.
Manik: Mom , that's just for fun.
Niyo: that means you guys again did something ?
Dhruv: Not us , Only this ladla beta of yours because I am not included in this han.
Niyonika: Okay boys , isko fun tk hi rkhna , torchure bilkul nhn.
Both the boys went to their rooms.

It was almost evening when cabir came to Manik's home.
MAnik was in playing his guitar with a beer on the side
CCabir: Manik kiya hua hai tujje ?
Manik: nothing dude mjje kiya hoga ?
Cabir:Abbay tu yh jhoot dhruv ,mukti aur alia k saamne hi bol , mere saamne nhn smjha na ?
Manik: kiya bolun yaar, i can't tolerate it anymore.
Cabir: kon alia ?
MAnik:Hmm
Cabir: tou tjhe kisne bola hai ? Tu kyun apne baaray main nhn sochta maniK? Kb tk hmaray baaray main sochega tu ? I know u are not meant to be with her phr bhi hmaray lye kyun jhelrha hai usey ?
Manik: tou kya karta main cabir? You know na if i had refused her kia hota ?
Cabir: tou honay de na , Why to torchure yourself dekh what is meant to be yourself na that will come to u on a perfect ttime aur agar usko fab 5 ka part hi rehna tere bina tou janay de usko.
manik: tu theek kehrha hai , I will talk to her about this tonight.
Cabir: Cabir baba ki jay ho 😆
Manik hit him playfully.

Precap: Manik-Alia breakup.
Alia and Nandu's fight.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Amazing update
Recap is too wonderful
Want manan as couple plzz
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Amazing update ...
Loving it
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
Love it... so cute... they are getting close again... hj. but Alia..UG... hope Nnandhu clarifies she has no BF soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
precap is awesome
waiting fr next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
I read yur ff in 1 goo... all 8 chapters...
I lovef d concept of yur story...
D story line us truly AMAZING!! ⭐️
jus a suggestion... I really hope u don feel
bad... its jus suggestion...
U showed navya aso as modern soo make
her speech aso a bit modern... actually u shown
dat dey used to stay in nyc... soo like u can
More a english n everything in deir speech...
mayb it may turn out very well... oder than tat its
yur story... u can write it as u want...
bt I seriously love... n ya plss a give a bit longer
n regular updates... plsss... cause I loved yur story... 😃
👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
chapter:8
Next day Space Academy..


All reached collage , fab 5 were jamming in their music room , while cabir and Dhruv went outside as they had some work , mukti was playing her guitar , Alia was busy in her phone while manik called mukti

manik: mukti, woh

mukti: manik tjhe kch bhi kehne ki zarooorat nahin i know u guys want to spend some private time na ? so okay , i will meet u guys later , enjoy. she winked at alia and went.


manik: alia , i want to talk.
Alia: bolo manik , kiya baat hai
manik: I want break up.
alia:what?
manik annoyingly: i want break up...
alia: but how could u do this to me manik ? are you out of your mind ?
manik: listen , i am in no mood of listening your crap , these 4 years i tolerated you just because of my friends because of fab 5 per ab i can't tolerate you anymore , so please from now stay away from me . bye
manik went from the music room , alia was still here murmuring angrily
alia: that new girl , i will not let her snatch my manik so easily , i swear i will make her life a living hell.
nandini and navya were walking by the corridor , talking and laughing , alia came and started shouting at nandu
alia: how dare you girl ? how can u think tht u can snatch my manik so easily from me ?
navya: W*F ? are you mad ?
nandini: 1 sec navya , ab bolo what do you think you are ? huh ?just cut this crap and listen I am really not interested in you and your so called boyfriend Manik , so please.
alia: just because of you i have lost him today , i will make your life hell i am telling you.
nandini annoyingly: oh just shut up , apna so called boyfriend apne pas rakho , as i said i am really not interested so just get lost ,
Alia went from there angrily and nandu also left with navya ,

alia was burning with anger and jealousy , when she thought to make a plan to Hurt nandu.
Nandu was wih her friends when a peon came
Peon: Nandini , aapko Raghav sir library main bula rhe hain
Nandu: okay
she went towards the library , manik saw her going towards the library and he thought " abhi tou library band honay ka time hai na why she is going there ? he started to follow her
nandu went and was waiting for raghav sir while manik also came and was finding nandini , peon locked the door from outside as per alia' instructions.
Nandini saw manik
nandini: what are you doing here ?
manik: wohi tou main puchne aaya hun ? what are you doing here ? abhi tou library band honay ka time hai
nandini: I don't know , someone just said k raghav sir is calling me here so i came
Nandini's phone rang
Arjun: nandu , i am going home , dad called me so we will meet in evening.
nandini: okay , theek hai
Arjun: bye Take care
nandini smiled: i will and you too take care bye
she cut the phone , manik was looking at her
manik: so your boyfriend is so caring ! han
Nandini: what , nae he is not my boyfriend , he is my best friend , arjun
manik: oh , sorry ..
Nandu: its ok , sur kitna wait karna parega raghav sir k lye ?
manik: i don't think raghav sir abhi aaynge , yeh library ka closing time hai , i think someone has just throwed a prank.
Nandu: ok fine
As she was trying to open the door , it was not opening , manik also tried but he failed to do it so ,
Nandini: manik , i think someone has locked it from outside
manik saw is watch,
manik: shit
Nandini confusingly:what?
manik: abhi college main koi peon nhn hoga jo isko unlock karay hamare lye , we will have to do something.
manik tried to call cabir but there were'nt any signals , nandu also tried but the same problem occured with her.
manik: we have to wait jab tak koi aaye ,
Nandu kneeled down and sit on the floor manik also sat beside her , she was adjusting her hair in a bun and manik was just staring at her, a word came from his side
manik: beautiful
Nandini: wht ? kuch kaha tumne ?
manik: aa , nae , kuch nae ..

Precap: manan library Romance.😉
Edited by leocious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Nyc... but today u didn't send me pm...
Not fair...

Update was awesome..
Continue soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Sweet and superb update continue soon

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