#2 BEST FRIENDS FOREVER. MaNanBir FF( UPDATED LINK OF THREAD 3)Pg1 - Page 25

Ah end, how can you stop this in such a moment ,wow what an update ,the whole lap dance sequence of Nandu was really good . I am imaging a shocked smitten Manik's face .

OMG what a update yaar...sooo hot..

Amazing update
Loved naughty nandu and shocked manik
Continue soon

Originally posted by: musicialtie

thanks a lot dear. .. Thanks a ton..
dear I am extremely happy getting such a big comment.
Thanks for liking this too much.
Please keep loving.
and about your suggestions toh they are whole heartily welcome.
I am so glad.
and please stay tuned to know more. .

thank uh foh lyking my suggestion.. it was juz an idea.. my pleasure dat uh lykd my comment :) :) uh put so much of effortz into this story, i cn atlst make it upto uh by commenting long.. hahah.. uh dun nd to worry.. i m n alwayz will stay tune.. i lyk dis story too much.. itz lyk bcm a part of my lyf..

dude its amazing
poor manik got a shock
but why a cliff hanger
cant wait for the next part contu soon

woh kya task tha

NO NO NO... not done yaar ...i was lyk aage kya hoga nd u jst left d parth on a cliff hanger...

Seriously amazing chapter..
The way you wrote manik's feeling while nandu's sexy dance...
It was fab...
And after dance teasing that was also a nice part...!!!

Wow...👏 it was too good

OH MY GOD!!
dis is sooo haaawwwttt!! uh knw these teasingz r more sensual than the actual deed..
man uh will kill me 1 day!!
uh mk our nandu so bold.. uff!! c did lap dance wid manik.. at first c was afraid but as soon as manik supported her, c rocked!!
i cnt comment as i lykd evry bit of it!! uh gv me a superb idea to mk my bf happy :) :) m sure he will b hell shocked.. heheheh..
manik was shocked as he didnt expect nandini to do dis!! the effect was too much..
alya.. the baddie.. till nw in ur story alya is the only villain.. usne intentionally yeh chit bnaya n evn marked it so dat c cn get the opportunity to b cozy wid manik.. sick!!
cabir, mukti, abhi, dhruv n navya were shocked by nandiniz act..
evn m also shocked..
m using "ShockeD" word again n again coz mujhe iske alawa koi aur word nhi yaad aa rha h.. sorry..
i will wait foh the continuation of "UNDONE"..
thank uh foh the pm..