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Hello people .Yeah !! Am back again with another OS.It is entirely diffferent from the story plot.You'll understand as the story goes.I want to dedicate this OS to all my wonderful readers especially two people.One is Nats[Natashaaa].I can't make posts Nats but I can dedicate an OS to you for becoming a GOLDIE.Second is Eshuu[musicialtie].You are asking for Jhaadu ki Jhappi na? Here it is.Happy Reading.Ignore the mistakes.


MaNan OS : Silent Love

A beacon of light pierced through the mullioned panes of glass,bathing the glossy stone floor ,illuminating the darkened room.Rays of bright light awoke her from her deep sleep.Rays of brightness cast on the floor,reflecting onto several objects in the room .She woke up from her deep smulber and there was a smile on her face.She brushed her teeth and changed her clothes into walking tracks and went for walking grabbing her headphones.It is her daily routine.

A boy who doesn't wake up before 11 is waking up at 6'O clock everyday.He quickly changes his clothes and goes for walking.His mother starts wondering like what has gotten into him.He quickly goes to the park and sees her walking with her headphones on.It is his daily routine to come to park and ogle at her.She sees him and smiles .He too smiles.It is THEIR daily routine.She sits on one banch.He too sits on a bench which is far from her beench.He stares at her.He thinks how beautiful she is.How cute and innocent.She sees him staring at her.She quickly loweres her eyelashes and stares at her phone.

Their 30 minutes staring session is over and the girl smiles and she goes and he stares at her going.Everyday he comes determined to talk to her but when he see her he forgets everything.Manik Malhotra ...For whom girls go gaga he is not able to speak to a girl..a mere girl not a mere girl.She is the one who stole his heart.15 days back his father forced him to go for jogging and he said ok unwillingl.He went for walking and he saw this girl who stole his heart at first sight.He doesn't believe in love at first sight but she made him believe.She was playing with some kids.How innocent she was.He fall her.Her beauty didnt capture his heart but her personality,her simplicity did.Neither he talked to her nor he listened to her voice.He is dying to listen her voice.He kissed his father on cheek for making him to go walking that day.

Everyday he go to walking and stare her and comes home with a smile on his face.Today he went home and his mom asked him why he is smiling? He replied the same nothing.His mom is asking this question everyday and he is replying the same.He is a well known and a successful musician.After a tiring day he slept with a determination that he will get her number and first he will talk to her through messages.He didn't know when he became so shy.He slept and he wake up and went to the park and she too came to the park.They both sat on the same bench today but he is on one corner and she is on one corner.They exchanged smiles.She started to read paper.He is finding ways to ask her number and she saw him and he smiled and aksed her phone number by gesturing through hands.She saw him and smiled and said her number gesturing through hands.She first showed him nine fingers,then 7 and then 6...and ladtly 5.He gt her number finally.He smiled and she went as it is getting late.

Today he is so happy.His happiness has no bounds.He got her number.He thought she is too shy to say her number..Man !! she is driving me crazy.He went home happily.He went home and kissed his mom and danced with his sister and kissed his ather's cheek and said You are the best dad.They all thought he has gone mad or what ?He didnt dare to call her.He thought of mesaging her but he want to see her face when he is messaging her for the first timeHere she is waiting for any message from his side.She is too shy .She couldn't even message him as she doens't have his number.She slept with a smile.He too slept as the day ended.The nest morning again same routine..he waited for her and she came and sat.She started reading paper and suddenly message popped.She saw him and he said see phone with his eyes

She saw the message and their conversation is like

Manik : Hi !! Am Manik..:-)

Nandini : Hey..I am Nandini :-)

Manik : Hey Nandini..Very beautiful name like you...:-)

Nandini : [Blushing emoticon]Thank you.

Manik : SO what do you do ?

Nandini : Am a teacher.and I know you are a very successful musician. ;)

Manik : Oh !! Teacher JI..You know very well about me huh ? :P ;)

Nandini : hehe ..;) ;) ...
Manik : You always listen ? Can I also listen the song ?

Nandini : Some other time..Am getting late..See ya..

Manik : See ya Teacher ji..

Their conversation ended and they went in their respective ways having a smile on their faces.Nandini is thinking about him and here Manik is thinking about their first conversation.Finally he talked to her.Though through messages but he talked to her finally.He will talk with her tomorrow.The tiring day ended and they both slept with their thoughts.Manik woke up and went for walking.Today she didn't come.He is waiting for her.Finally she came.They saw each other and exchanged smiles and glances.He messaged her .

Their conversation is like this..

Manik : You are late today.

Nandini :[Embarrassed emoticon]Sorry.I slept mre today.

Manik : It's ok. :) :)

Nandini : So you want to listen what I listen ?

Manik : Yeah !! :D :D

Nandini gave her earphones and he kept and he saw her for three times.She then gestured with hands that she is deaf and dumb.He doesn't know how to react or what to say .He just gave her earphones and stood and went.Nandini saw him going.She felt her heart skipped a bear.Nandini use headphones so that no one can know that she is deaf and dumb .No one can approach her.Unknowingly tears formed in her eyes.She went from there sadly.It has been one week since he came.She is waiting for him everyday hope he gets any sign of him.But everyday she go to home with a disappointed face.

Nandini went to her school and she teaches deaf and dumb students.She went and sat on one bench waiting for her students.Her students came and stood in a line and she sees them with a questioning look on her face.They say explainging through hands [Sorry for late.It took me one week to learn your language and am still learning it]She couldn't understand why they were saying that and suddenly they moved aside and Manik is on his knees.He explained her that it took me one week to learn your language.And am still learning it.He explained I don't care how you are ? I just know one thing that you stole my heart and my heart is beating for you.I can't imagine my life without you.Will you marry me ?He took the ring out and she is like her happiness has no bounds.She nodded her head and everyone clapped.His parents,friends everyone is present.

Nandini is an orphan.Her parents dies in a car crash and she has no one on her side.She completed her study with great difficulty.She had grown up in an orphanage.She just hugged him and he hugged her back.Everyone shouted and hooted.Nandini said I LOVE YOU in her language.He said I LOVE YOU in his language.When there is love,Language doesn't matter.You can understand some things without explaining.That is the magic of love.They married and they lived happily ever after.Shall we name this love ? I would name it as SILENT LOVE.What would you name?

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SO ? I dont know how I excuted it.I just wrote what came to my mind.But I wrote something different for the first time.I dont know whether you people will like it or not.? Do share your views and comment and like if you life it.DONT FORGET TO HIT LIKE.It is inspired by a story

Love,
Harika..Keep Smiling..It looks good on you..

Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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yayyy um first one perhaps

well I don't have words to praise u

this z completely different concept, I jus loved it

loved it from core of my heart

ur all stories r different

nandini deaf n dumb n manik d most famous musician...awsm

I jus loved d part wr manik came with children n he was learning her lang...this one was heart touching

hmmm I need to learn loads of things from u
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looking forward the read :)
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wow beautiful os
loved it
very nicely written
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Beautifully one..
well written..
Loved every bit of it.
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beautiful..!!
You stole my heart Hari...Ufff...
You made my day...
Thnx alot..
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whenever I come online I find ur update first...I feel like too lucky to have a writer friend like u...an awesome, superb,mind blowing os once again...which is different from the story plot but have its own charm...which definitely fascinates each n every reader of it...about the update...I have just no words to speak...its just marvellous...plz do write more
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This update is really good :)
The best part is that there is something different from other os and ff 👏
Okay so I'm already very keen to read more
Update soon
Thank you for the pm :)
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Very well written... you describe the story very well... i m in love with your story... u are a very good writer... and m also waiting for your ff plz post their nxt parts ASAP... 👏 😉
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amazing story...waiting for something more exciting coming from u👏

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