SS: You Are My Genie, You Are My Shining Star, Chap Update Pg 26 - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-

wow mandy loved the Update simply awesome 👍🏼!! ha ha the funny part was manik introduced nandini as his so called wife to his psycho ex-girlfriend and Nandini got so angry that she made his ex-girlfriend problem more complicated with the so called divorce drama lols poor manik god save him now!!🤣 Update next part soon 😊and thanks for pm !!👍🏼


Nandu has surely made it more complicated for Manik but lets see how Manik will handle it 🤣 Thanks for reading Chitra and I will update this in Wattpad next.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: parthadmirer


Hey dear seriously i really liked the way you write and the way you describe in words...
loved your story and hilarious too...
you are a very good writer..😊
love you too dear..🤗


Thank you so much 😳 If you want to read it in future please send me a buddy request. I will send PMs.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

Hi please pm me if u shift the story to wattpad!!

And don't worry you write very nicely..😊


Of course I will PM u 😳 Thank u for being my reader.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monicaratna

ur story was awesome, cute, funny
and i guess the coming myra track will be stress buster
and i really want to read more of ur work


Myra track is defo a stressbuster 😆 I always intended it to be funny. Thank you and I am shifting it to Wattpad. I hope you have added my account to ur buddy list. Will be easy for me to send PMs.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: chair1992

This Story was a love at first read for me
I would gladly be your PA 😆 and promote this Story like it's done for celebraties

Okay I can tell You this, I will read and Review Whether You Poste it Here or somewhere else (if Reviewing is possible on wattpad)

You might not get the reviews you deserve but I can tell You that this the best story on this website

Your characters are all potrayed in a way that You can't help but Fall in Love with them

I Love your oc, i Love the ex girlfriend of Manik, as a manan shipper it's my duty to hate/ dislike the girls WHO are interested in Manik

I hope You See this as an achiviment!!! It's hard to even like a OC but You did it!!!

Okay sorry for my rant!!!
Continue this Story and send me a pm if possible


Thank you 🤗 I am really touched you liked it so much 🤗

Of course you can review in Wattpad as well. All you need is an account there and you can post your comments too 😳

Thank you for appreciating the characterization 😊 I know its different and I deliberately kept it that way since I wanted to experiment as well.

I am really happy that you liked my work so much. Means a lot to me 🤗 Of course I will PM u.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suraiya77

No pls!
Don't do this..
I love ur ff a lot!
After struggling a lot i could open an account in If
if u shift this story how will i read!
Even i don't know how to open account in wattpad..
Plz don't do this..


I am really sorry but I have to do this One reason is the low response and the other reason is plagiarism. I have shared the link and dont worry 😳 Its easily accessible. Just click the link. You dont even need an account to read. But yes if you wish to vote or comment you may need one. All you need to create an account is an email ID. Dont worry. I shall send u PMs whenever I update with the link. Please do check your inbox.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bitasta

This is my first time in this Forum...

Your story was the first thing I read here and I am hooked... You are a phenomenal writer... Your story is amazing, in fact idyllic with right dosages of humor, clash, suspense, sensitivity and well defined and brilliantly executed characters, not to mention a well etched story line.. If this is how you write you can only get better and not fail as a writer _ Be Assured..

However, shifting to Wattpad might be a good idea with all the plagiarism happening with stories written in the Forum.. Please pm me whenever you write next chapter or even shift it to a new platform.. Being a fan of your writing I cannot miss any of your work _ the very ff or even new ventures should you decide to write them...

Good luck and God bless...



Thank you for the appreciation 😳 I donno if I deserve it or not. I hope I don't fail u in future. Yeah another reason for me to shift it to Wattpad is plagiarism. I already have an ongoing FF there. BTW may I know your name?
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Wonderful update...love the way the comforting and the bickering between them was explained...and he recognized her touch..love it..looking forward to the next update...


Thank you and their bickering will continue 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dhrits_24

Hey dear wn I read ur update I was in hurry n I read ur update in 3 or 4 parts...cud nt complete entire part in 1 go Sorry 4 dat...n yess I was waiting for ur update since long...n 5nly u updated...I liked ur update...specailly the moment wn MaNan were in ride n Nandini assured Manik dat he's gonna b 5n...dat assurance is nt easy to get bt Manik gt it from Nandini n dat was beautiful...n off course I love their cute bickerings 😉😛...They r so awesome 👏😆 but I hope dat pink obsessed does nt bcum a reason 4 their separation n she also bcomes a MaNan shippers😛😊😉...Plz dnt quit writing dis here n do update it soon...


Thank u 😳 Nah Myra will do the opposite of what you are fearing. She will not separate MaNan 😆 I am not quitting this FF but I will update it in Wattpad and will send PMs when I update to everyone in my buddy list.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mirage101

Okay...so Meghna here now that was something Mandy. Great update.Boring? Boring hoga principal ka space err...i mean S.P.A.C.E. ka principal. Hmm...know what I totally love Manik but its so weird I HATE DOGS AND I LOVE ROLLER COASTER RIDES.PERIOD. though in Kolkata we don't have any demonator stuff but whenever i ride it i just love the adrenaline rush. Yooo...And final destination is the last thing Manik shud ve thought about those movies really stay with you and I AM SO NOT TRAVELING ON AIR NEVER EVER.God im speaking too much crap
Back to d story Nandini soothing Manik aww that was cute...i really enjoyed them fighting..LIKE A LOTTT!!!!but this time Nandini seemed a bit over the top to me just my pov...specially after Myra hopping in cmon this is someone's life and I don't think there can be anything as scary as a pink obsessed bimbo n Myra...y is she back im so scared for manik i think his nightmare would turn into reality with all that damage caused by Nandini plz make Manik use his mouth in the next chapter.

MYRA ...WHAT THE...
WHAT THE...
WHAT THE...

Anyways update the next chapter soon Mandy
Love Meghna

Oh..ps i thought of reading the previous chapters again since uve updated after ages but u hadn't put up the page numbers on the index.and not just me some new reader wud also find it easier that way.u know he/she wudnt need to check all the 20 pages that way
PPS:shit man...itna lamba comment toh kar diya without reading the note on nxt page hope its not something unpleasant.


Thanks for liking 😆 Manik is different and I had been to Sweden and sat in some of the rides. I am scared of roller coasters. So that was my experience 🤣 Final Destination was hell scary and that is one reason I am scared of roller coasters. About Nandini crossing the line? Dear even Manik crossed that line when he declared Nandu as his wife 😆 Manik is different from the show but let me assure he is not a timid guy at all. Just that he tends to screw up. The index is on first page itself but from now on it will be updated in Wattpad and if ur in my buddy list I will send PMs as well. Dont worry about long comments. I love them 😉 Bring it on.

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