SS: You Are My Genie, You Are My Shining Star, Chap Update Pg 26

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: monicaratna

thanks for ur clarification and it helped me😃

You are welcome 😳

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#112

Comment updated on page 14. 😊

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monicaratna

@monicaratna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#113

hey when will u update this fic
waiting ti read more

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: monicaratna
hey when will u update this fic
waiting ti read more

Maybe not this week since I am busy at work. But will try to write after that.

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: Paint.It.BlacK.
Edited--
Mindblowing!!

Whiskey! Wow what a perfect name. 😆 Loved his play!

Poor Nandini ! She is angry as hell!

But i liked how Maneek shot her back with what's called a perfect retort! 👏

And whoz that friend-Maneek lost to the accident? Will we get to know about it more later?

And Cabir was fun! Quite a lively guy! Bought light and ease to the scene. 😊

And...here you achieved for some dare my dear!! I am talking about the "Lesbian" addition. Really it's always challenging to introduce things which unease people easily! But you put on the braveity and broke out from that conservative pattern and dared to inject it here--says a lot about your neutrality and openess of thought. Bravo. 👏

P.S. The writing style you have opted for here is completely fresh and rejuvenating!! Truly a relaxing calm spread over me and i drifted in a happy and enjoyable coocon after having read this. Keep it up! Cant wait for the answers to unfold and the story proceed. 😃

Thanks a ton for the update. Thanks much and keep updating!!! 🤗

Indu ur comments are always a pleasure to read and they are so encouraging 🤗 Whiskey was my former neighbor's lab and he was very naughty in real too 🤣 So he is the inspiration. Manik Nandini will get into more such awkward situations for sometime and Whiskey will continue to annoy Nandini 😆 Cabir is my fav character in the show and he is gay there with Rose being his fake girlfriend. So I twisted it here. U should watch him in the show. Ayaz has done a fab job as Cabir.

You really liked my writing style? 😕 I actually thought none of my old readers who have read my works like Guardian, Destroyed or Ever After will like this. But thanks 🤗 It feels good to have u as a reader 😳

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Meghna Saha

@mirage101

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Posted: 10 years ago

#116

Manik's dream was really funny it reminded me of pyar ka punchnama.even i hate dogs on d other side my bro loves dem n to me my cellphone is more important than my life. understand the situation y manik n Nandini r fighting though i always enjoy it wen things start with jhagda. Dhruv dead:'( if it happened bcoz of Manik that i guess makes it harder for him to live with that...
Thanks for the update and continue soon
PS:im new here n i felt like ur a pro at writing so can u pls tell me abt ur other stories.

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Mandy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: mirage101
Manik's dream was really funny it reminded me of pyar ka punchnama.even i hate dogs on d other side my bro loves dem n to me my cellphone is more important than my life. understand the situation y manik n Nandini r fighting though i always enjoy it wen things start with jhagda. Dhruv dead:'( if it happened bcoz of Manik that i guess makes it harder for him to live with that...
Thanks for the update and continue soon
PS:im new here n i felt like ur a pro at writing so can u pls tell me abt ur other stories.

Hi there 😊 Thank you for reading my story. U hate dogs? 😲 Well I adore them absolutely but yeah some of my friends don't like them much either. I haven't seen Pyaar Ka Punchnama, so donno about the scene ur talking abt but this was inspired by my friend 😆 She is defo nothing lilke Manik's ex girlfriend but everytime we went shopping she'd choose pink n go gaga over it 😳 U will know more about what happened with Manik and Dhruv in future updates. U will know if Manik was responsible or not. Thanks for mentioning that. Not many readers noticed it.

I will send u a PM about my other works and since ur new I can suggest a few good stories I read on MaNan. Its not much coz even I am visiting this forum from last 3 months or so 😳 U have really good writers here n if u like reading MaNan stories u shd try their works 😊