Ky2 Emotional Encounter 14: An Insight into the Blank Promise

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Dear Monster Manik,

Finally you listened to me. You are going for it. The confession. Finally you stopped yourself to fight with me about that. Finally you got your reason to confide in love.

And you surprise me once again. You proved now you are calm... now you are careful... now you see things clearly more than before...

Seriously, you give her a blank promise. That you will listen to her. Wherever she wants and wherever she wants. At that moment, I was really in shock. That you were putting me in danger. I was like, "What? You trusting this girl with the provision... who keeps taking horrible decisions to hide things from you with the fear that you will overreact. Who once failed to trust. And finally ended up hurting me badly... your heart..." I wanted you to be the responsible one and be careful about her over protectiveness. But then you put a condition. Why not? I smiled. So are you listening to your coconut heart now?

She was rejoicing. But your intention was exclusively not that. You place the condition. The only one condition. Let me quote you, "I should be able to see within your eyes... that you really mean it." I was clapping at that moment. Your confidence with her eyes. You have proved the excellence of your memory. So I have no doubt that you have learnt to read her eyes. You are able to estimate her lies and trues from those eyes using your past experience. And she hides those eyes when she wants to hide something troublesome.

And she understands. "Unlimited supply of fulfillment of her wishes" from Manik Malhotra is not going to be an easy gain . She will have to prove she is with her truth and trust...with her eyes. And when she will be pain, her eyes will expose it to you. No more hide and seek. Well done Manik Malhotra.

And best wishes with the your on-going confession. As you need her for your completeness...
And best wishes with it's after effects. Cause I am going to make you feel the way you never felt.😉

Yours Only
Coconut Heart

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For the Record: Based on Kaisi Yeh Yaariaan, aired on April 29, 2015



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Posted: 10 years ago
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so here comes ur EE...
though i love it as always...but as u said no being biased...so i will do that...

feeling the emotion of love must be beautiful...though i have never felt it yet...but i see people around me glowing beautifully day by day in love...


as they say- " all you need is love"(by John Lennon)

so i guess may be they must be right, coz if it gives u a happiness like Manan which was clearly evident on their faces...then its the truth...


And see the change it brought in them...
Manik became Calm and Careful...
Nandini became Wild and Impulsive...
though i dont have a freaking idea that is it a good thing or a bad thing...

as they say- " it is very strangest thing to be in love, it changes you"(by Cassandra Clare)

so i guess the situation will eventually define that is it a good thing or a bad thing...


and then comes the promises...arent they one of a kind...
especially when he stated his condition with the devil smirk...and of course she will agree...as she also wants the same thing...
to be with him always ...
to look into his eyes forever...
to be beside him humesha...

as they say- " love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies." (by Aristotle)

so i guess they truly are each other's soulmate...
as their soul is linked with each other for better or for worse...
and coz they can't live without each other...

And yes i think some things are just meant to be...like them...
though they did faced lots of hurdles and are yet to face some more..
but after this as Nandini said-" if we are together ...we can take anything."
so yes...fate bring it on...coz our love birds are ready to fight their way to their happily ever after...



To Nandini...my star,

Your beauty overwhelms me
As I wrap my arms around you
I press your softness tight
Great passion fills my inner being
I'm captured in your embrace
Your eyes control my very soul
The touch of your lips, heaven
Forever
frozen in time
all else fades in to nothing
From Manik...your coconut heart.




Edited by aairahahmad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautifully said...I had been considering the possibility that the blank promise would be the thing that brought the next negative twist for MANAN but this provided m with some hope and a different perspective on same... thank you!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Will read this once i get to watch the episode.. But the letter format is back.. Yey 🥳
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Originally posted by: anotheranfan

Will read this once i get to watch the episode.. But the letter format is back.. Yey 🥳


😆Oh I remember you every time I write anything like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohhh my Sana...you're like that one candle my Manik baby saved last night from losing it's flame...My one ray of hope that maybe...just maybe this blank promise actually turns around the harsh circumstances they may have to face one day because he...he's not going to buy her wish, her lie-filled promise as long as her eyes don't express it to him...
No matter how much she may need of this promise to be fulfilled one day...even if it's a promise that means it will keep him safe despite her absence...even if it's a promise to let go of hands despite the fact that their hearts and souls have merged as one...his confidence in himself...his confidence in his ability to gaze into those crystal-clear eyes that will guide him to the core of her soul where all her truths reside, will save the pain of many heartbreaks! His demand of not fulfilling that promise until her lies become as truthful as her truths...it's a demand, it's a condition that may actually leave her stunned of how he can read her like an open book...

He's promised her a blank promise today...yet he's taken a promise from her too...a promise that he snatched from her almost...the promise to never ask for any separation, the promise of no more goodbyes...the promise of never-occurring farewells... because the minute she demands for these promises to be fulfilled...he will close his own eyes and yet tell her so confidently, so self-assuredly, so bluntly...that "Nandini Murthy...I don't need eyes to know your eyes are lying...

Love you for this post...definitely have missed your presence <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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beautifully penned...!!!! 👏
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Honestly Sana..u r a fab writer..
I love the way u express ones feeling in ur own words..and its always heart touching..
I always find that uniqueness in ur posts ..and I love u for this!

*hold on ..no praise...just encouraging u to write more..keep up the good work!

and Manik says..
"I should be able to see within your eyes...

yes..he said this..finally,he said this..
this line has it's own importance and charm!

now that he has finally poured his heart out..confessed his love to his shining star..he is confident enough that..he don't need eyes to know..what she feels..
he can read her eyes..,without uttering a word..they can understand each other..
he can read her heart..even if she try hard ...to hide her feelings..and not to expose herself..

He assured her that whatever maybe the circumstances..he will always be there for her..and gave her a blank promise..
with a hope..
that she will always trust him..she will always believe him..
she wont make him regret it!

Love is a variety of different feelings..states..emotions..and Manik's love always showed the unselfish loyal and benevolent concern for the good of nandu..his love for her has always been unconditional..selfless without any demands..

he gave a blank promise..trusting her not to break his heart again..

and I just hope..this time..she wont let him down..she won't break his heart again..
She should love him selflessly..
and I believe..the best proof of love is trust!

Sana..u rock..
Thanks for the lovely post!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsum u kneeled it.. beautifully written
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Originally posted by: ashmitaa

Honestly Sana..u r a fab writer..
I love the way u express ones feeling in ur own words..and its always heart touching..
I always find that uniqueness in ur posts ..and I love u for this!

*hold on ..no praise...just encouraging u to write more..keep up the good work!

and Manik says..
"I should be able to see within your eyes...

yes..he said this..finally,he said this..
this line has it's own importance and charm!

now that he has finally poured his heart out..confessed his love to his shining star..he is confident enough that..he don't need eyes to know..what she feels..
he can read her eyes..,without uttering a word..they can understand each other..
he can read her heart..even if she try hard ...to hide her feelings..and not to expose herself..

He assured her that whatever maybe the circumstances..he will always be there for her..and gave her a blank promise..
with a hope..
that she will always trust him..she will always believe him..
she wont make him regret it!

Love is a variety of different feelings..states..emotions..and Manik's love always showed the unselfish loyal and benevolent concern for the good of nandu..his love for her has always been unconditional..selfless without any demands..

he gave a blank promise..trusting her not to break his heart again..

and I just hope..this time..she wont let him down..she won't break his heart again..
She should love him selflessly..
and I believe..the best proof of love is trust!

Sana..u rock..
Thanks for the lovely post!


mitu u too rock...
n i think u r also a fab writer...should write something...

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