MaNan OS : My Love Story - Page 3

You make me smile

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

me 2 😳

Originally posted by: musicialtie

okkk read it again... superb... outstanding...

i loved it ... its so smooth... so touchy... dreamy

and lastly manik's smriking pov... hayeee😳

manik i really want someone like u in my side too to shine for me,

kash some day achanak in a fine morning i would open my eyes just to see you sitting beside me< actually kuch aur likhnne wai thi but control aashu bolke samal lia > holding my hands and welcoming my morning with your million dollar smile... i would happily die after that day manik. 😳

harry potter starter yeh tune kya kia???

i still ogle ur that " love happens " os very often and u just to give me more drooling wrote this fairy tale...😊

bachchi k jaan leke choregi tu... but i love u

hehehehe thank yu so much aashu...[<:D>]

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

hehehehe thank yu so much aashu...[<:D>]

I love yu too...

hehehhe abhi se future planning eh ?

yeh maine OS lkha...:P :P hehehe...Really? Thank yu so much...

am glad ki u loved it...

Nahin baba I wont kill anyone..chal ok fine wont write any more then..:P :P

I love yu tooo...:D :D

Very nice os hari, on reading the title and first few poetic lines, i thought it was from manik pov, he was scared to love, but as usual u proved me wrong, a very sweet love story, i like the places, when he was behind her, when she saw her smiling reflection in pond and when he caught her while lying and how he understand her without she telling anything, how can our mananstory be complete without our cupid, cabir, one spl thanks for bringing him in, though it was a small role for him, thanks again for os and pm.

Originally posted by: musicialtie

nehi... tu likhna maat stop kar...

plzz yaar ur stories are taking me dream land... and i do love to visit there very often,... 😳

hahaha yeah !! will not stop writing...well thwey take yu dream land ...hehehe..thank yu..😃😊

Wow...it's superbb

Originally posted by: ..Mellifluous..

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Aww, very cute n beautiful love story.
Loved the way u penned the true love journey of simply nandini to mrs. manik malhotra.
I truely hav become fan of ur writing n lastly keep going...

Wow it was a cute story loved it 😳