**story of my life **manan ff ( part 34)5/7 pg 138 - Page 34

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awe...loved the phone conversation...both want to be together...
Hope this Soha doesn't disturb their life ...n she should infact bring them closer like before...
Hope everything goes fine...
Please update it soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plz update yaar... its sunday...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey update soon... U have glued us to ur story.. Plz update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 14
Nandini keeps his phone ..stood beside window..
Nandini pov
Aiyappa..why I m feeling this..why m I so excited for his arrival...voh humsha...aiyappa...ussey baat Kaise karugi...wait Nandini hold on. ...aap Manik se pehle baar thodi mil rahe Ho..my monster waiting for u 😳
Pov end
Their day end as usual
Nxt day,
Nandini gets up early does her regular chores..
Nandini:shit ...Nandini..manik ghar as raha hai and u going to wear this(talking to herself in mirror)
She goes towards her wardrobe (means thier wardrobe) she's confused what to wear??
Manan: Mom...
Nandini: Hmm
Manan: Mom..(she replies the same he gets frustrated) ..mom what r u doing??
Nandini: Baby I m confused what shall I wear?
Manan: Mom red..
Nandini:okay...(she kisses him and goes to change)
She's wearing a white jeans and red kurta type wala topand walks further towards mirror for wearing earrings..
Manan picks one of it ..these one..manan is kinda obsessed with her earrings...
She goes and prepares food for him...
Manan: Mom mey dad ko pick karne jaa raha Hu..
Nandini: Okay fine..wait..aunty(maid and manan's caretaker) aap bhi jao .

It's evening 6:00pm..
They r not at home...
Manik and manan arrive she looks at them fully drenched in sand their jeans folded up to their knees(Manik wears casual while travelling) she gets furious
Nandini: Don't u both dare entering my house in that state...
Manan: Mom..dad ne bola...
Manik: What??..maine..
(they start quarrelling but cute but r still at doorstep)
Nandini:shhh.shh..both wash ur self up.. ...
Manik walks inside as manan runs ...manik handover her red roses to her..
Nandini is amazed and happy
Manik: Voh..sry for being late...
Nandini: It's okay..go freshen up...main khana laga dete Hu...
Manik: Not so soon..hum kha ke aye hai...
Nandini: Manik bhar ka...(he keeps finger on her lips and ask her to be quiet)

Manik freshen ups and sits on bed...thinking about soha's fiasco
Nandini enters
Nandini: Manik...(she's about to tell him abt everything ..that se forgotten abt past and wants to move on)
But senses something wrong with him
Manik: Ha..Nandini u wanna talk..
Nandini: R u fine..manik
Manik: Sighs..no..woh bas work and that..so..
Nandini: So..
Manik: Voh..sohail...forget it kuch kahe rahe thi tum..
(she sits bed holds his shoulder and gives massage)
Nandini: U ll fine..
Manan comes running ..dad
Manik: Voh..champ baat kya hai...
Manan: Nothing...(looks at Nandini)
Nandini:okay..okay..i will not come in ur father son talk bas
At night ,
Dining table
Manik and manan are signalling something each other by eyes...
Nandini: Enough..kya chal raha hai..
Manan: Nothing mom bas...kal
Manik: Ki khana bhaut aacha bana hai..feel like I should kiss kaka for making such delicious food..
Manan: Then kiss mom's hand...she made it..
After chit chat...
Nandini makes manan sleep..
Nandini sees Manik tense..
Nandini: Tumhe nind nahi ah rahe...
Manik: Nothing...
Nandini: Manik baat kya hai..(holds his hand) u can share...
Manik:(to himself) I can't Nandini...bas samaj lo I can't risk ur life again
Nandini: Kaha khoy Gaye...manik actually I...
Manik: (thinks she's enquiring about his work) voh..i want a investor for my new project..so tensed
Nandini: But Manik...
Manik: It's getting late lets sleep
She gets up he holds her hand kisses it
Manik: Food was tasty..(she smiles)

Nxt day,
Nandini wakes up late..
Nandini: Shit...it's nine..mera alarm Kaise bandh hogaya(checking her clock)
Manik:maine kiya tha...
Nandini: Manik..why did u do. Tum he pata hai... Agar this habit continues na ..sab Gaya..and manan's school to start...aiyappa
She gets ready..
Manan enters with his butler
Manan: Mom..
Nandini(was abt to share her feelings):yes baby..(he signal him to keep it)
Manan: Mom breakfast for u..i made it for you
Nandini: Aww..(hugs him) par kyu..
Manan: Happy mother's day..mom (she kisses him and makes him feed first)
Manik captures moment in camera...
Nandini feels Manik hurt he must be missing nyonika ..she walks towards him and feeds him too
Manik: Breakfast hogaya...lets get ready
Nandini: Par kyu...
Manan: Mom..lets go na...get ready..
In car,
Manik: What nxt??
Manan: Shopping because mom loves it
Nandini: So this is it...ur talks
They reach mall..
After lots of shopping...manik and manan caring bags..
Manan: Dad movie
Manik: Okay...first hum bags car me rakh ke arey hai...god it's damn heavy
After they return
Nandini: Lets watch piku..
Both unison:PIKU...no
Manan:avenger's..
Manik: That's nice..chalo decided
Nandini: Oh hello..why we r out?
Manan: For mothers day...
Nandini: Who ur mother?
Manan:u
Nandini: Whom u both want to feel spl?
Manan:u...
Nandini: So..
Manik: Lets watch piku
(she sees them walking disappointed actually they are acting)
Nandini: Okay. Lets watch avenger's..
Manik winks at hin 😉
After movie they walk towards beach and enjoy the fullest running catching..playing with water..eating junk food ..manik and manan r still playing
Nandini's watching them
Nandini pov..
Manik manan looks so happy with you..and u too..i don't know tum kya chupa rahe Ho..but I trust you..
Pov end
Manik looks at Nandini whose smiling
Manik pov..
I just missed this...ur smile..I'll cherish the day in my life ..I'll make sure Ki din hamesha hamare life mey aye...
Pov end
While leaving..
Nandini: (holds manan) thank u . For making this dad so spl and for being my son..
She kisses his forehead and Manik too..
Nandini: And u too..for being there..
They drive home...
Manik holding manan in his arms..
And talking with Nandini
As they enter and sees nyonika..
Nyonika: Long time Manik...ahh Nandini tum...
Manik:(handover sleeping manan to aunty and ask her to take him up)..what a surprise..tum yeha(sarcastic tone)
Nyonika: Well main apne ghar nahi aa sakte...and nandini didn't expected u and someone either (pointing towards manan by her eyes)
Manik: Nandini lets leave
And they head towards their bedroom

Precap: Nandini confronts nyonika and Manik gets new investor
Sry for late update
Thank u everyone for lovely comments keep commenting love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update
manik and nadini had gone through troubles enough plz don't separate them again
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update.. Don't separate manan please
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chotto sa update...! But I loved it.. Dad and son bonding... They both are so naughty... And as always our protective Manik.. In one word awesome!
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Posted: 10 years ago
dear plz oust dis soha plz plz plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it... hope they talk about Soha and about Nandhu's feelings soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice
Let manik nandini clear their talks na

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