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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
No nandini cannot have a boyfriend only Manik can be her boyfriend plz kick that Aditya out of ur story 😛
Don't take it seriously its just a request
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: rithanya

No nandini cannot have a boyfriend only Manik can be her boyfriend plz kick that Aditya out of ur story 😛
Don't take it seriously its just a request


Manik and nandini meant to be together but lovestory me maza nahi aata jab tak kuchh twist na ho.. So wait... 😆 😛 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
hello ppl...many of u are not happy bcoz of nandini's boyfriend thing but trust me MaNan are meant to be together dont worry
part 5

Manik: I don't know about rest I bloody don't care, U have to come... thats it..(Holding her tightly)

Nandini gets little upset and shocked looking manik like this. She jst push him back): listen I hv some work I cant come.

Manik: fine nandini, aa miss nyonika, the deal... that I was doing with ur college is nw cancelled... yeahh thank u so much... (and starts leaving)

Nandini stopped him: sir U cant do this...

Manik: I can...(looking straight into her eyes)

Nyonika: okk guys chill manik nandini will come, surely. Do not worry, I'll make sure k she come.

Nandini: but ma'am, I have...

She was interrupted by nyonika: nandini plzz..

Manik: fine, good.. see u in the evening.(gave an angry look to nandini and left).

Nandini: ma'am Its wrong.. have u seen he is weird I mean how can he be soo angry at me, I am not going anywhere..

Nyonika: listen nadini, hame kahi aur se nahi mili he sponsorship, if he is giving then respect him, whats the big deal, U can do this, atleast for a month, after that who is telling u to do all this...

Nandini: but ma'am for money, I can not play with someone's feeling...

Nyonika: ohh come on nadini, u'll have some fun...(smiled and winked at her)

Nandini: ma'am its not correct...

Nyonika: everything is fare in LOVE and WAR' and EVENT'...

Nandini made an upset look...

Nyonika: see nandini its about our college, please do as I am saying...

Nandini nodded in yes and leave the staffroom and goes to his friend who all were sitting in canteen and chatting..

Cabir: ye lo ye bhi aa gayi... kitni der..? kaha thi..??

Nandini was lost in her thoughts...

Mukti(shook her shoulders): nandu... kya hua..??? anything serious..

Nandini: wo manik ne aaj party throw ki he.. we all r invited..

Mukti : thats good. Nyonika mam man gayi...???

Cabir: use to manana hi tha, manik ka charm chal gaya hoga uspe..

Mukti: waise ye banda sahi he haa... itna rich he phir bhi koi attitude nahi he... hai na nadu..??

Nandini was still in her thoughts...

Cabir: 1 minute tere chehre pe 12 kyun baje he..

Nandini: guys, me nahi ja sakti aaj party me, aditya ne bulaya he...

Navya: are usko bolo na k kal mil lena..

Nandini: tumhe pata he na navya, wo gussa ho jayega. Aur manik bhi... (she stopped)

Cabir: manik bhi matlab..??

Nandini: he said that agar me party me nahi gyi then he'll cancel the deal...

Abhi: ajib jabardasti he...

Nandini: and upr se mam ne bhi promise kar liya he manik se k I'll come.. I don't knw why manik is behaving so strange. Maine na bola to bola k deal cancel kar dunga. So mam ne bola k for one month be NICE to him.

Cabir: matlab..??

Nandini: matlab ki u knw make him feel comfortable...(making a strange face)

Mukti: tu pagal ho gayi he kya, aditya will be mad at you.

Cabir: I don't think so, its brilliant guys, mam is right. If because of nandu he'll not ask anything about money, we can use lot of money to make this event successful.

Abhi: but cabir what about nandini...? If she will be comfortable..??

Cabir: hum aas pas honge na.. maine kab bola hum use akela chhood denge. Aur tu party me aa rahi he, It will be fun..

Nandini: cabir U knw na ki aditya ko agar ye sab pata chala k me party me gyi hu n all to wo waise hi gussa ho jayega and upr se usne mujhe aaj hi bulaya he..

Everyone got silent and suddenly a tear came to nandini's eye.

Cabir: tu use chhod kyun nahi deti...??

Nandini: cabir tujhe pata he ye itna aasan nahi he, and I dnt like to break relationships...

Navya: haa cabir nandini sahi bol rahi he..

Abhi: but navya if someone is forcing you then why..?? zaroorat kya he aise insane k sath rehne ki.

Mukti: exactly... Nandini, see we all knw k school ki bat alag thi, tu alag thi wo alag tha, time alag tha, but ab sab change ho chukka he... khas kar ke wo... there is no love in-between.. so why r u hurting urself..??

Nandini was almost in tears: mukti nothing is changed, hum bas bade ho gaye he and things has got complicated, but someday he will understand me.. someday he will change for me..

Cabir: ye jot u bate kar rahi he na, its all bullshit, he is a jerk, that we all knw...

Nandini: cabir lets not talk about him right now.. lets focus on Manik and how to handle him..

Abhi: ya right guys..

Cabir: see I srsly believe k mam is right.. wasie bhi banda achha he..

Mukti: I think k aaj chalet he party, lets see how he behave then only we will decide. What say..??

Nandini: yahh better.. guys I think I should leave. Me abhi jake mil leti hu aditya se..

Everyone hmmed and she leave. She called him so many times but he didn't pick up, she reached her home and goes directly to the bedroom. She again called but no reply. Then he started messaging him, but he didn't replied. Then she slept and woke up in evening, but there is no call or message from him, she expected this, but yet she called again, suddenly he mother came to her room.

Mom: beta uth gayi.. ye lo tumhari specialwali coffee.

Nandini: thank u mom.

Mom sees her trying calling someone: kya hua..?? mukti phone nahi utha rahi..?

Nandini hide her cellphone and sit on the bed: haa wo.. careless girl... (a fake smile on her face)

Mom: dekh beta me waise tujhe kuchh puchhungi nahi, I knw u can Handel all things but kabhi bhi zaroorat pade to bata dena, I am here only. Aur ye le tere liye parcel aaya tha..

Nandini got happy. She thought k it is aditya but she saw there is no name on the gift and giving her that her mom leaves the room.

Nandini: aditya I knw it is u..

She opens it and there was a beautiful anarkali dress inside with a letter.

"sorry for morning, I don't want to be rude, soo this is my way to say sorry to you. Please aaj ise hi pehnana. Mujhe achha lagega... sorry again.."

And she got surprised to read the name..

Nandini: Manik...??? matlab ye manik ne bheja he... pr kyun..?? aditya ne nahi bheja..?? he jst don't care.. but why manik cares for me...???

She got really confuse.


soo tell me did u like it or not... not so happy manan scenes but, make it up in next part...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
wow
Loved it manik gave a dress wow aur yeh aditya itna rude Kyu hai I hate him plz isse jaldi se story se out karo its a request plz
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
its reallyyy Amazing eagerly waiting for next part.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
i 2 am feeling like kicking that jerk aditya casanova kahika..😡
i truely feel nandani should leave him..
plz cont soon
n want more manan scenes plz...
waiting for the next update..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
sorry double..but want to ask the character of dhruv...i know he is manik's frend but again dhrulya should start naa..
sorry again
Edited by kristii - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Wow awesome
Manik's end her gift..
Great
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Here's a new updat hope u like it..
Part 6



Manik drive to his house, in car he was thinking about what happened in college..
Manik: I am sorry nandini, I dont want to hurt u but Me chahta hu k hum dost bane pehle uske liye I hv to spend time with u. Hope u like my gift (giving cute manikwali smile)
He reached home and blushing thinking of nandini, suddenly he was stopped by someone. It was his sister nipur.
Nupur: 1 min. Kya chal raha he bhai.?? Subah to gusse me nikle the..?? Abhi ye blushing..??
Manik blush again
Nupur: bhai ur cheeks are red.. Bataiye kya hua..??? (She made a face like she was thinking something while manik was just standing there) wait... Kya wooo Ladki..??
Manik: yes... Nandini.. (Smiling)
Nupur: ohhh kaha mili.?? Kaise mili..?? Aur aap abhi mujhe bata rahe ho..??? Thats not fair bhai...
Manik: are are dhire dhire sab batata hu.. Pehle ye dekh (he saws her a dress photo in his phone) ye kaisa he.??
Nupur: bhai. Its awesome.. Dont tell me aapne ye use gift kiya..?? Use kya aap yad ho..??
Manik: actually nahi.. I dnt think k use me yad hu and ha maine use gift diya (and tell everything what happened the whole day)
Nupur: hmm soo party...!!!
Manik: haa aur ye le tere liye bhi leke aaya hu ise hi pehnna thik he..?? Achha bata mom kaha he..
She pointed towards kitchen and he leaves. He reached kitchen n stand beside his mom
Mom: kya baat he..??
Manik blushingly: wooo
Mon: wo ladki mil gyi..???
Manik shocked: aap ko kaise pata.
Mom turned and looked straight to him: mom hu tumhari to pata chal hi jayega na..
Manik hugs her and tell everything and seeing him his mom was very happy.

Nandini's house
Nandini: mom mere earings.??
Mom: are beta tere bed k bajuwale drawer me hi he.
Nandini: mamma nahi mil raha he aap aao na.
Mom came to the room: ye le yahi to he.
Nandini: thanks
Mom: waise ye dress..??
Nandini: woo ye mom mukti ne diya he
Mom: mukti ne..??? (Making a suspicious face)
Nandini: haa mom.. Achha I am getting late bye..

Manik's house
Manik to servants: are ye flowers aise nahi aise lagao, bhaiya kya kar rahe ho music should be calm and romantic. Ye aisa mat bajao, everything should be perfect.
Everyone was busy in their work and suddenly manik sees nandini coming in that dress he was mesmerized by seeing her. She was exactly looking like he wanted to see her.
Manik: heyy.. Bahot jaldi aa gayi tumhe aisa nahi lag raha..??
Nandini: nahi time was 7:30 na..??
Manik: 7:30 ki party me 7:30 baje kon aata he..??
Nandini: me aati hu..
Manik: okk baba. U wait here, I'll be back in some time.
And he left
Nandini to her self: usne notice nahi kiya k maine wo dress pehna he jo usne mujhe diya... Choodo mujhe kya..
Manik in his bedroom calling dhruv: achha sun buddy, zara alia ko pick kar lena plz..
Dhruv: buddy u knw na she doesnt like me.
Manik: i knw but wo yr nandini is already bere and agar me use aise chhod k jaunga to achha nahi lagega plz.
Dhruv: chal thik he last time.
Manik: cool thanx.
And suddenly light goes off. Nandini was looking here and there, he accidently reach at manik's bedroom and went inside where manik was almost shirtless.. Suddenly he sees someone but because of darkness he didnt knw who it was. He just went near and from behind he catches her pin to the wall and put hands on her mouth and light came. He was shocked to see her in his room but she was so close to him he jst looked looked and looked to her.
Nandini tries to speak but couldnt coz of manik's hands on her mouth.
Manik: what r u doing here.
Nandini actioning to his hands on her mouth. He takes his hands away from her mouth.
Nandini: woo andhera tha to i thought k kahi 1 jagah beth jau and i found this room open so i came.
She was tagging her hands behind her ears and manik sees k she had only one earring
Manik: naya fashion he kya..??
Nandini confusingly: haaann kya.??
Manik: wo tumne sirf 1 kaan me hi earing pehni he so..
Nandini touches her ears and found k he was speaking right and started finding earrings. While manik found himself shirtless so he wears the shirt and started searching for her earring.
Nandini: shit wo mamma ne di thi. Agar mamma ko pata chal gaya too me to gyi..
Manik: chill yahi kahi hogi.
And manik found it he takes it and gives to her
Nandini tries to wearing it: ohh thank u so much agar nahi milti to kya karti. Mamma to mujhe mar hi dalti

Ishq bulava jaane kab aave
Ishq bulava aave jab aave..
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta baitha kol tere...
But she couldn't wear it manik takes it from her and pull her close to him.

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansaanda ravaan
Tainu takda rawaan...

Nandini was looking at him. She found that somewhere I have seen this eyes. Those deep eyes.Manik was so close to her, he put her left side hair behind the ear and looked at her straight into her eyes and they share an eye lock.

Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di
Ajeeb rangaan di tu hai badi
Lage alag hi jahaan di


Manik made her wear his earing touching her cheeks that made her shivers she closes her eyes, he was looking at her soo passionately, suddenly she push him away and wanted to go away but she found her necklace was got stuck in his shirt's button, he gave her a big smile and she blushed, he then started to help her.

Ae to nazraan nazraan di gal ve
Tu vi sun le zaraa

she was looking at him like she had never seen anybody, his cute face he was so tall but dir bhi he bend and helped her.

Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa kol tere rehna
Main taa rehna kol tere...


Manik looked at her she was also seeing him they share an eyelock.

Tainu takdi rawaan
Naina 'ch tere main vasdi ravaan
Paagal main khud nu banaunda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan
Tainu takda ravaan


They manik gestured her to see her necklace, they both are now separate again she looked at him and gave a blush look.

Ishq duaavan jaane kab aave
Ishq duaavan aave jab aave
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main ta kol tere rehna
Main taa baitha kol tere...

Tainu takda ravaan
Baaton pe teri hansda ravaan
Pagal main khud nu banaanda ravaan
Tu hansdi rave, main hansanda ravaan


They were deeply into each other that they didnt realised how much time they stood there. And suddenly she came back to her senses and started to leave, he hold her hand from behind and pulls her closer, she bumped her back on manik's chest, he smiled and bent down.
Manik reaches to her ears making her moans.
Nandini: manik...
Manik huskily in her ears whispered: woo U r looking beautiful..
Nandini started blushing and said: thank you.
Without looking at him she jst left his room. She ran and came to a corner of a big livingroom
Nandini's POV: ye kya hua..?? Why I m blushing soo much..?? I hv seen this eyes before.. These passionate eyes, so deep, so intense but where..
She started thinking and then she realised what is she thinking.
Nandini: aaaiyaapaaa ye me kya soch rahi hu..?? Why even I m thinking of manik...?

So hows it...?? Do tell me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story but plz do kick that Casanova Aditya out of your story soon

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