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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh nooo! I really hope things get resolved soon...terrific update, loved the family involvement... and the way you used the lines from the show...
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful part loved it
loved manan terrace scene a lot
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was so touchy..
Can u pm me plz
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Awsm stry... bs ab jealousy trk mt lana yr.. dnt mk nandu to sffr.. glti mank ki h to usiko punish krna... updt soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved it
please update soon :3
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved this chapter...bt one suggestion...its all manik's fault...now dont shoelw as per the show...like manik wl behave rudely to her...or insult her...show that manik wl nt give up on them...and win her trust back in a polite way...i.mean wat i want to say is dnt make nandu suffer more...i hope i havnt said too much...and post nxt part soon...waiting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
where were u lost itne bade suspense me chod k kaha gyi aap plz came back n continue ur story
plz yaar update sooon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
When will u post the next chapter.
Waiting for it.
Continue soon
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manik ne show mein bhi bola that but aisa kuch nahi hua aur yaha bhi nahi hona chahiye
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for late update..!!! But busy doing preparation... I am starting my job from monday...!!!
Soo will end this ff in one or two chapter.. As after joining job, i will not able to write...
Soo sorry..!!!

Part 26


Nandini was crying in her room. She didnt know why, but her heart, her heart was hurt badly...

Nandini's POV

Manik...(she sobbed)
Tum chahte kya ho.?? Samj nahi aata. On our first date, u acted like u care so much for me, u love me so much... Uske dusre hi din, u broke my trust, u broke my heart...
And now u saying sorry for not trusting me.. How could u manik. Aur tum chahte ho me tumhe maaf kardu...?? Kyun manik...??? Kyun...!??

End of POV

She was sleeping on her stomach on bed. She was constantly crying. She heard a knock on her door. She wiped her tears and stood up to open the door.
It was nupur. Nupur can see how much she cried. She asked her to come in, they both sat on the bed.

Nupur: nandini i know, bhai ko samjana thoda mushkil he, but trust me, he is pure at heart.
Nandini just looked at her with shock.
Nupur: kya aise kya dekh rahi ho.? Ye joo aankhe red kar di he wo pata he mujhe.
Nandini turned her face, so that she could not observe other things.
Nupur turned her face: sacchai se bhago at nandini, u both know that u both r meant for each other, phir why this chasing.?
Nandini smiled a bit: nupur tum abhi chhoti ho, bado jaise baat mat karo.
And she stood up.
Nupur also stood up: ab jab tum dono bachho ke jaise behave karoge to kisi ko to mature behave karna padega na.?
Nandini laughed a bit.
Nupur: chalo atleast u smiled...
Nandini smiled: bhai rulata he aur behen hasati he.
Nupur: nandini i don't know weather bhai said this to u or not but...
Nandini: but what..???
Nupur: wo tumhe tabse chahte he jab tum log pehli baar mile the.
Nandini instantly remembered their first meeting, in ice cream parlour. A smile came on her face.
Nupur shook her shoulder: wake up nandini. And see how much my bhai loves u, just once give him chance... Please...!!!
Nandini looked at nupur, and she just blinked her eyes.
Nupur started to leave. She stopped at the door.
Nupur: waise nandini BHABHI bahot achha lagega... Haina..???
And she winked, nandini was blushing hard listening nupur...
Nupur left from there and nandini again lay down on her bed and started remembering every moment she spent with manik. Most of the moments were happy. Just dew was painful.

She didn't know when she slept.

Next morning,
As usual, SPACE was busy doing preparations for the event.
Here all of them also doing practise. There was everyone. Manik, nandini, cabir, mukti, alia, dhruv, navya.

They were practising making fun of each other, teas session, but there was an unknown silence between manik and nandini. They both didn't talked not at least for once.

They both were ignoring each other as they don't exist only.
After jamming session was over, manik picked up his guitar and started to leave.

Cabir: are manik.
Manik turned around: haaa.
Cabir: wo kaha ja raha he tu.?
Manik: cabir... Office..!! Kyun.?
Cabir: aahhh, kuch nahi chal raste me baat karte he.
Nandini saw them walking away.

Nandini(to herself): aiyaappaa.. Ye cabir isse kya baat karne gaya..

Here manik and cabir walking silently.
Manik: cabir kya hua.?? Tu itna chup kyun he.?
Cabir: me bhi ye sawal puch sakta hu manik.
Manik: matlab.??
Cabir: matlab ye.. Ke andar tu sabse has has ke baate kar raha tha, sirf ek ko chhod ke...
Manik again started walking, cabir too started walking.
Manik: tu kiski baat kar raha he.? Mujhe kuch samj me nahi aa raha he.
Cabir turned him around, and make him stand.
Cabir: waha dekh.
He pointed at far away standing nandini, she was talking to some random girls, and was laughing too.. An unknown smiled appeared on maniks face.
Cabir: uski baat kar raha hu.
Manik: aisa kuch nahi he.
And he started leaving. Cabir jerked his shoulders.
Cabir: manik aaj nahi, aaj me teri ek baat nahi sununga. Bata kya hua he.?
Manik dragged him towards the car, and push him on the passenger sit.

Cabir: manik ye kya kar raha he..?? Tu mujhe kidnap kyun kar raha he.?
Manik sat on the driver's seat: cabirr... Funny people can be easily killed u know that.
Cabir: tu mujhe darane ki koshish kar raha he??
Manik: tujhe koi shaq he.?
Cabir: nooo... Chal ab bata kya baat he.?

Manik was driving his car: yarr pata nahi wo ladki chahti kya he..?? Tujhe pata he kal uske ghar pe dinner tha. Wo uski mom and meri mom bachpan ki friends he. To kal unhone hame invite kiya tha. But u know after what happened in college, i thought she didnt want to see me. So me nahi gaya waha, i ignored.
Cabir: haa toh..??
Manik: tooo she called, and madam ordered me to come.
Cabir: hmmm...
Manik: haa bola ke mom dad ko bura lagega tum nahi aaoge to, and she cut the call... Maine sab kuch chhod ke uske ghar gaya dinner ke liye, badi mehnat se sabke samne se me nikla to go to washroom, she was helping me to show the path, usne mujhe bolne ka mauka hi nahi diya dude...
Cabir: phir...
Manik: phir kya, we had dinner, all together, she didnt looked at me once. After that she went on terrace, i too followed her... And then her arguments, tum manik samjte nahi ho, tumne mera trust break kiya. Tum atleast ek bar mujhse baat kar sakte the... And blah blah blah... And she started to leave. Maine use bola.. Dekho nandini iss baar u walk away, i will not come behind u...
Cabir: and..???
Manik stopped the car in jerk: and she left..!!!!

Cabir started to laugh... Manik was hell pissed with cabir's behaviour. He started to punch him.

Manik: sale yahan meri jaan nikal rahi he aur tujhe hasi aa rahi he.???
Cabir: wo is liye.. Kyunki u are complaining like a typical boyfriend...
Manik: what.!!!!
Cabir: haa tooo...!!!!
Manik straightened himself.
Manik: aisa kuch nahi he... To bas isliye me usse baat nahi karunga.
Cabir: achha.. Tu baat nahi karega..??
Manik: haaa...
Cabir: tu na pagal ho gaya he. Ek to teri galti, upr se tu bol raha he tu baat nahi karega. Aise ho chuki tum dono ki love story...
Manik: too kya karu me bol.. Tu bata... Usse baat karo to problem.. Naa baat karo to bhi problem.. Me karu kya.???
Cabir: hmmm...!!! Badi gambhir samasya he apki balak...
Manik shook his head...
Cabir whispered in his ears something...
Manik: tu pagal ho gaya he... Wo punch degi mujhe..
Cabir: trust me bro...!! She will love it...
Manik was in his thought.
Cabir: isse achha mauka tujhe nahi milega mere bhai...!!!
Manik: par uske liye.. Mujhe...
Cabir: haaa u have to ignore her...
Manik: wo jaan se maar dalegi yaar.
Cabir: abhi abhi to tu bada sher ban raha tha baat nahi karunga..?? Ab kya hua.?? Hawa nikal gayi.???
Manik: wooo haaa to kya hua.. Kar lunga ignore... Koi badi baat nahi he...

He started to drive the car.

Manik(to himself): beta agar nandini ko wapas lana he to ye to karna padega...

Manik(a bit louder, with famous smirk): get ready, Miss. Nandini Murthy...

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