Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 42

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Posted: 10 years ago
pls take care your self
and get well soon
hopefully this whenever u OK u ll update
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PLEASE UPLOAD THE NEXT PART FAST NAA. PLEASEEE. 😕
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Yess pls update soon !!!!!!!!! I really love this story 😭
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Hi... I just came across ur story... and it's superb .. amazng ... mind blowing... it's so hillarious and too good... u r an awesome writer..
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Khurana -the presentation is nice I hope the paper work has same standard too

Nyonika-ohh that u don't need to worry about I have personally taken care of it

Tina get my bag

Nyonika takes out the file folder nd passes it to khurana

Khurana opens the zip of the file and sees

Khurana-wat the soo this is the paper work I mean seriously MRS Malhotra wat a paper work

Nyonika-I kno sir I have personally

Khurana -ohh really wat nonsense is this MRS Malhotra A BIKINI really wat do u think I'll do wid this

Should I autograph it or wait a sec u want me to wear it and roam around .

This an insult

Vikas-sir sorry but there is some misunderstanding mam never does such mistakes files must have been inter changed

Khurana -seriously MR.gupta- who keeps a bikni in the file folder

Nyonika- was standing dumb and she went to her cabin

In college

Chachi-tu aisa kaise kar sakti hai nandu tu hume bhul gayi

Nandini -chachi iam really sorry situation aisi thi ki

Chachi-aisi kaun si situation aaagayi ki tune hume bina baataye saagai Karli

Nandini-chachi iam really wait wat saagai kyaaa

Chachi -haan saagai tere chacha bhut gussa hai tere se

Nandini-chachi ek sec hospital ka bill

Chachi-who toh kaal hi manik ne pay kardiye bada suna munda hai who

Kitna khayal rakhta hai who tera

Nandini-manik neee aapne use kyun pay karne diya

Chachi-arey wohi kehne laga parayai koi todi hai who tera mangeter hai aur tu kya bol rahi hai kaal tune bhi toh kaha tha phone pee

Nandini-maine kab aaah

Chachi-chilla kyun rahi acha tujhe patah who keh raha tha ki meri awaz tere se bhi aachi hai keh raha tha bikul solah saal ki ladki ka jaise awaaz hai meri aur

Usnee aaj subah bhi call kiya tha bas tu hai jo hume bhulgayi hai

Dekh shaadi pe atleast bulna yaa atleast call karke baatnaa

Par nandu mujhe nhi patah tha kit u itni romantic hai

Nandini-ab romantic kahan se aaya

Chachi-arey manik ne tumari love story sunayi thi naa kal

Nandini-ab ye kab hua I mean phone peee

Chachi-haan ki tu usse itna like karti thi tu uske peeche bhaagti thi.

aur tune propose kiya usse

Nandini-murmurs -shakal toh dekhoo mai isske pche bhaagi thi

Nd says chachi-mai baad maI baat karti hoon byeee

Fab5-

Alya-baby aaj kitna boring hai

Dhruv-haan yaar fresher party ki rehersal bhi hogayi

Mukti-sahi mai yaar

Nandini was passing nd saw fab5 standing at the canteen nd smiles mangeter darling get ready

Cabir-haan

Nandini comes towards fab5

Cabir-hogaya boring khatam

Nandini comes in suddenly hugs manik

Manik-stunned

Alya-wat the

Dhruv-Ooo

Mukti-omg alya

Cabir-chinta ta chita chita chinta tha manik tu gaya beta tu gaya

Nandini-thank u sooo much for the help

Manik-hain ohho who its ok

Alya- wat thanks manik

Nandini-goes nd hugs alya-nd says sorry sister u r man is engaged

Alya-wat

Cabir-hain saale ye tune nhi bataya

Dhruv-wat

Mukti-tu engaged

Manik-mai engaged ??

Nandini-haan bhul gayee

Alya-kaun hai who haan

Nandini-arey she is soo beautiful ,intelligent ,traditional and very very talented u kno

Cabir- hain manik teri shakal ko itni aachi ladki kaise

Manik-oyeee kya mtalab haan

Mukti-iss talented ladki ka koi naam

Alya-how could u manik

Dhruv-arey wait alya ladki ka naam batane ke baad shuru karna

Nandini-arey itni qualities kisme hoo sakti guess guys

Fab4-kissme

Manik-tum mai tumare mai hai na ye qualities

Nandini-aaah manik poor boy mujhe mai is se zayada qualities u kno my qualities r countless anyway kisi aur mai ye qualities hai

Manik-kisi aur mai kiss mai

Fab4- tujhe nhi patah tu bata

Manik-who patah hai na who ke

Nandini-see ya k for kanta mai hai

Fab3-kanta!!!!

Cabir-phew!! Ab chain ki saas aayi its ok bro ye tere level ka hai mai toh dar gaya tha ki tujhe phirse koi patakah milgayi tum log sukhi raho

Alya-kanta ke liye mujhe chod diya

Cabir-ohh livin relation hai kya bol

Manik-wat rubbish stop it

Nandini-comes close and says in manik's ears-so I hope tumhe pata chal gaya hoga ki over help karne ki zarrorat nhi hoti soo now manage ur engagement fiasco

Nd turns to leave

Fab5- questions manik continuously

Manik-shouts-nandiniii stop

Nandini turns -manik goes nd hugs her- nd whisper in her ears thanks

Nandini's eyes- widens-nooo

Manik -pulls nandini's hand nd says she is my mangeter aka fiance

My sweety kitna drama karti hoo itna gussa hona acha nhi hai tumhe kanta nhi pasand fine nikal diya usse

Alya-wat .i need to go to some mental asylum

Dhruv-happy realization

Mukti-dhruv!!

Dhruv-oops

Cabir-kutte matalab saalon tum dono ek ghar mai sab kuch maine kaise nhi dekha

Mukti and alya-ek ghar mai

Alya-nhiii

Dhruv-takes his phone nd calls

Manik-dhruv tu kise call kar raha hai

Dhruv -mental asylum ko alya ko dekh ke emergency lag raha hai

Nd alya ur hairstyle look will completely go wid asylum background.

Fab4-dhruvvv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dhruv-then wat guys chill maaroo yaar engagement hui hai murder nhi aur alya tumarah kaunsa divorce horaha its breakup .

Cabir-sahi keh raha yaar but manik sach sach bata u did it

*KICK*(nandini kicked cabir)

Manik-I guess u got the answer

Mukti-but nandini out of all

Manik sees nandini and gives evil smirk nd says -ab countless qualities wali ladki ko koi haath se jaane deta

Alya-u were cheating on me

Dhruv-arey alya it wasn't his choice its nyonika's haina manik nd winks

Manik-haan nyonika did this

Alya-acha so u don't like her this is all fake for nyonika so we r still together

Cabir-ye fake hai phir toh u didn't

Nandini-eyes cabir

Cabir-I mean u didn't didn't love each other

Mukti-saale humare saamne kyun natak kar raha hai aur isse jaane ke liye bol natak sirf nyonika ke saamne karne ke liye bol

Nandini-acha ji bikul jaise aap kahe madam pagal logon ye tumarah friend was abut to say dhruv came in and pulled her out

Dhruv-mukti I'll handle u guys go

Manik-dekhke kaat ti hai

Dhruv-took her to the corner

Nandini-wat the oyee topiwale wats ur problem

Dhruv-idiot tumhe hi bacha raha tha agar nyonika ki baat nhi karta toh tume humare saamne full GF hone ka drama karna padta

Nandini-y would I do aur drama wat if who mera asli mai mangeter hai

Dhruv-sweety I heard ur convo on phone chachi ,mangeter ,money nd mai kal manik ke saath bank gaya tha tab I heard his nd chachi's convo too toh I kno the borderline of the story somehow though maine manik se poocha nhi but he said his life is a mess now a days

Nandini-wat eva I gotago

anda leaves

At the coridoor navya and julie attack on nandini

Navya- nandini teri shaadi hogayi

Julie-idiot shaadi nhi saagai

FAB4-

Cabir-dost dost naaa raha

Mukti- kya hua be

Cabir-kyaaa hua yaha ek ladki nhi paati ye saala ghar pe ek college mai ek ko maintain kar raha hai

Manik-abey ooo

Alya-cabir !!!

Dhruv-yaar bechare manik chode de yaar

Cabir- BECHARA!!! Mujhe issi dukh mai peeni hai I need

Mukti-I too need it

Alya-I tooo need it

Dhruv-tere ghar chalte hai manik tu reason hai tu hi pila

MANIK-I wish but I have to go to delhi aaj sham ko soo

Cabir-dekha saale ne waha pe bhi kisko set karke rakha hoga mai bhi aaunga

Manik-abey nhi yaar nyonika ka kaam hai uska chamcha bhi aa raha hai saath mai

AT corridor

Nandini-yaar aaj itna drama ho gaya ab mujhe sirf ghar jaana hai

Navya-par tune bataya kyun nhi

Julie-tu mere saath aise kaise kar sakti hai

Nandini-guys tum log mere saath chalo I'll tell u everything

Navya-tu pagal hai kya wahan who bhi hoga naa

Julie-manik

Nandini-wohi nhi hoga who delhi jaa raha hai ab chaloo

OFFICE-

Nyonika-aaa pehli baar aisa hua hai never .kaise 100 crore ki deal damn it

Koi toh hai jisne ye kiya kaun kaun manik nhi

VIKAS- mujhe lagta hai khurana ko pink color pasand nhi hai

Nyonika-stop it vikas

Vikas-aur bolo kya matalab bikini koi file folder ke andar

TRING TRING

Nyonika-who the hell it is

Manik-ek galti jo tumse 19 years pehli hui thi

Nyonika-wat manik kya kaam hai

Manik-kaaam mera nhi hai tumarah hai delhi tumarah who joker kahan hai

Vikas-trip cancel hogaya hai

Manik-wat the tumhe kya lagta Iam free iam very busy and next tym u don't even expect

And nyonika as per policy I have done ma work so noo more work!!

PRECAP

NAVYA , Julie MANAN and FAB4 at manik's house


hello guys haan mai zinda hoon i kno it has been very long that i have updated my ff its all becoz of my fracture i had to complete my backlogs and was busy soo really sorry readers

so plz drop in ur comments and don't forget to hit the like button😳 😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
finally after ages it was as usual a stress buster 🤣
hope u r fine all the best for u r backlogs
and even i have one backlog *hate backlogs*
Edited by monicaratna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awsm update
loved it
nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: monicaratna

finally after ages it was as usual a stress buster 🤣
hope u r fine all the best for u r backlogs
and even i have one backlog *hate backlogs*

i too hate backlogs so much work
glad tat u liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
oye tu zinda hai writer
kya update ha
bikini🤣
mangetar🤣
maza aagaya
cont sson
agli baar pm bhej dena...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

oye tu zinda hai writer

kya update ha
bikini🤣
mangetar🤣
maza aagaya
cont sson
agli baar pm bhej dena...

haan yaar itna hectic tha ki i couldn't update

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