Manan ff- Let Me Love You updated NOTE on pg 73 - Page 24

Awesome..loved it..I like both your stories but this one takes the first place as it has humour laced into the story and nandini is the one placing manbir in humorous situations..this update is funny and emotional at the same time..now that manik spoke guess the equations will change...please continue soon

awww... y are u such a good writer ??

u r just awsum yaar how do u manage to write so well.

Wow yaar! I just read this FF after your PM and must say you write so well yaar!! Continue both soon and please PM me if possible when you update them :)

I joined India forum only this weekend ..and in 4 days this is my 3rd story ... first 2 is so emotional and this one your's OMG I really salute u all of 3 ...
LET ME LOVE YOU..
your writing is amazing each and every word perfect ..u make us laugh and laugh...
keep update

Manik -badi aayi hate karne .haaan hate karne walon ki kami nhi paas nd nd jump on the bed nd roll down nd finally end up sleeping on the floor

In the room

Nandini-nandini sahi toh bol raha hai who ussne kya kiya hai mere saath nyonika ne kiya hai sab kuch

But nandini u can't melt like this after all he is her son aaah I don't know wat to do

After such emotional nd confusing day there comes a new morning

Nandini was in kitchen

Was about take the sandwich kept on kitchen slab suddenly she hears

-nhiii

Nandini- turns nd sees a lady running towards her.her atire was totally that kanta bai style oops she is the kanta bai

Kanta-badi ayiii ye toh humne apne haatho se manik baba ke liye banaya hai tum kaha mmuh utha ke kahane aagayi

Nandini-wat the !!! who r u

Kanta-whooj u phele han whooj poochne wali woh bhi humse .u whooj

Nandini-kya iss ghar mai sab weird hai

Kanta-yeee gali deti hai humko choodungi nhi tumko

Nandini-enough abhi manik se baat karni padegi

Nd storms into his room

Nd sees the bed empty

Nandini-kaha hai ye nd searches for him every where in house nd panics thinking yesterday nights convo

Kanta-hayeee ram tumne manik baba ko unke gharse bhaag diya chudail kahi ki ,bechaare manik baba

Nandini-grrr😡 nd looses her temper hold kanta's neck-chup ok chup ek aur word I swear tumarah gala tabha dungi

Kanta-gets scared -nd nandini leaves her-arey gussa kyun hogi hum toh aise hi

Nd nandini-turns nd gives angry stare

Nandini goes out nd asks watchman -aapne manik ko bhar jaate dekha

Watchman-ji nhi madam

Nandini all feeling guilty goes into his room nd sits on his nd a tear escape -I didn't want to

Nd suddenly she hears ouch -nd wipes the tear

Nd sees around nd again the sound

Nd she notice it coming from down the bed nd bends nd sees manik sleepin

Nd she smiles-idiot gadha ,jerk

Nd nandini pulls him out nd some how manage to lay him on the bed but she to falls on the bed with him too uff again the sexual tension but this time it was from nandini's side

She kept looking him nd goes near to kiss -nd suddenly realized their position nd get up

nandini-control tujhe kya ho gaya

With manik tat get up from his sleep-aaah

Manik-aaah mera sir

Nd nandini rushes out so does kanta outside ear dropping at the door she too rushes out nd then they both enter with lime juice

To manik

Nandini-looks at kanta -signalling her to go

Kanta-smilies -nd signals she won't

Manik lifts his head nd gets surprised to see two glasses on his face

Kanta-saahab aapko dard ho raha haina dekhiye mai aapke liye nimbo pani laayi hoon

Nandini-looks here nd there nd don't know wat to say -hmmm woh lime juice who

Manik-looks at her in surprise-jaan se maarne ka iraada hai na tumara nhi toh lime juice aur tum

Nandini gets angry-as I said hopless u r lime juice yee mai tumare liye nhi laayi who woh woh mai ccabir ke laayi thi

Manik-gives a questioning look

Nd suddenly-cabir

Cabir-mere liye sach nd starts crying -tum kaha thi aaj tak

Nandini -gives wat the look-hall mai the na tum

Cabir-tumne yaad kiya aur hum chale aagayi

Nandini -acha saara bahar aana

Cabir nd nandini goes out

nandini-zayda bolna u kno where I kick

cabir-par tumhi toh laayi thi juice mere liya

nandini-aaa haa aa shakal toh dekh apni bada aaya juice peene .tere liye mai subah uthke juice banaogi .

nd drinks it her self -aapne liye banaya tha ok

cabir-hain!!!

Nandini-hain!! Kya chup chap bhaag jaa

Cabir rushes out with tat dhamki

INSIDE THE ROOM

Kanta-saahab juice

Manik-haaan kanta who

Nandini-barges in to interrupt purposely

Manik-wat now

Nandini-aaa who cabir gir gaya usske chot pe sir aayi hai.

manik-kyaa

nandini-i mean sir pe chot aayi hai haan haan sir pe chot aayi hai

Manik-wat nd gets out of the bed nd rushes out of the room

Nd

Nandini-gives evil smile to kanta-

Kanta-gives angry stare

Nd while kanta passing by, nandini pushes kanta nd the juice falls on the ground

Nandni-choo shit tumarah nimbo paani

Kanta-aaah

Nd outside

Manik searching very where nd comes to nandini

Manik-kaha hai who

Nandini-who kaun

Manik-cabir

Nandini-ohooo cabir !!! kaun cabir iam getting late for college so bye

Manik-aaah ye ladki

Both gets ready nd comes out

Manik gets into his car nd sees nandini-coming out

Manik-says-lift chahiye

Nandini-smiles -thanks nd was about to open the door manik starts the car nd rushes out

Nd turns nd gives evil smirk nd shout-autowali auto mai achi lagti hai

Nandini-grrr idiot

Nd the watchman comes-madam auto bulaun

Nandini-gives angry -auto auto nhi mai taxi mai jaungi taxi bulao

Watchman calls taxi

Nandini-SPACE college

Driver-150 lagega

Nandini-kya loot hai yee zayada se zyada 100

Driver-petrol aap bechne lag jao usske baad 100 ke liye poochna bade aaye paise hai nhi aur taxi

Nandini-areyy jao jao auto hi achi hai

And calls for an auto nd gets in

As she enter the college she sees a car entering the college nd

The person who gets out of the car is again a surprise

Vikas

Nandini-vikas uncle yee toh papa ke under kaam karte the ye yaha

Nandini gets down nd was about to meet him nd she sees nyonika nd manik coming towards him

Soo she hides behind the bushes nd hears them

Nyonika-vikas u came

Manik -nyonikaa plz I have work jaldi tell wat the he has to do with the deal

Vikas-hey boy have patience see u just have to introduce me to mr.malhotra aage ka kaam I kno

Nyonika-smiles -so u do vikas

Manik-wat r u dad se kyun

Nyonika-no questions manik as I did u r favour rite by asking warden about the nandini to be back

Manik-nooo I don't want tat

Nyonika-I dunno tat manik its ur pay back time do as I say

Manik-fine nd leaves

Nandini-vikas uncle nyonika ke saath

PRECAP

Nandini-hears nyonika nd vikas convo

Nandini drunk manik handling (its time for nandini to speak up)

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the update of the other ff is in processes will try to post soon if gets complete

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loving the story

the update was awesome..but precap is interesting..

eagerly waiting for the next part update soon

Poor Cabir..
Well a good update..
Continue soon..