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part 17B ...NANDINIS POV...
I was dragging him with me towards my tent...and he was whining like a child make cute looks.. .awww who on this whole world can ever imagine ...'The Great Monster Manik ' whining like a child and being so cute ...OK so I am the lucky one
"Manik stop being a spoiled brat and come "I said
"Ahhh why?I wanna be with u na baby let's go back ...some more time we will spend together"manik said making cute pout ...
"Manik "I glared at him...
"OK fine ,u don't wanna spend time with me ok "he said sadly and started walking beside me making a sad face...
I can't see him like this ...he looks cute when he laughs and smiles but when he is sad and angry...he doesn't look good
"Accha OK manik ...stop "I said and made him turn towards me ...we were near my tent ...
He turned towards me but didn't looked at me ...
"Manik ...look at me "I said softly ..trying to make him look at me ... But no he was not looking at me ...he was looking down with a sad face ...
"Manik do u wanna make me feel bad and make me cry "I asked to which he shaked his head in a no but still he was looking down...
"Then ...look at me pls..."I said cupping his face ...and this time finally he looked up ...I very well know this is all a trick to make me stay with him for a while more ...I too wanna wait but navya ...and what if some one saw us ...but he never understand anything
"Pls try to understand what if some one saw us together ...I don't wanna spoil anything pls ...fab5 ko agar.."I was about to say more but he snapped at me ...
"What fab5,navya ,harshad...?do u even think about me "he snapped ...
"Manik what do u mean...I am talking genuine right ...agar kisiko pata chalo tho kya hoga ye tum bhi jante ho right "I said ..I too got little angry ..
"Yeah yeah ...u know what you are saying this all purposely ...u don't wanna spend time with me bol do na u don't want ..."he said angrily
"U know what I don't wanna talk to u ..."I said and turned on other side angrily
"Oh ...so mein bhi maar nai raha tumse baat karne ke liye "he said and walked away to his tent which was just opposite mine ...he went inside the tent and didn't even turn and looked at me once
I opened my mouth in o shape ...how could he ...some time ago he was so romantic and all and now all of a sudden he became impulsive argh monster manik ...I hate this monster wala manik ...
But beep down I know ...tomorrow he is the one who is gonna apologize ...its his habit first he will make me cry and then he will come with a chocolate in his hand to say sorry and of course his cute tactics to say sorry...
I was standing near my tent pouting angrily when I felt some one behind me ...I turned to find Alya standing there ...her eyes were red like she had cried a lot and she looked angry ...
"Are u OK ?"I asked concerned for her
"Come with me "she said and dragged me with her without even listening to my answer
...END OF NANDINI'S POV...
...WITH CAVYA(CABIR ,NAVYA)...
"Cabir kaha le jaa rahe ho humein"asked navya pouting as they walked in the jungle more ...they were walking beside eachother
"Mujhe pata hota tho tumhe bata deta"cabir said softly so she doesn't hear it...
"Cabir humne tumse Kuch pucha"navya said and stopped walking ...
"Kya ruk kyu gai"asked cabir and walked back near her ...
"Humein jawab do ...humein yeha kyu lia"she asked stubbornly
"Haa wo na mein wo mein ...haa wo nai wo"cabir started mumbling ...
"Kya haa wo nai wo...pagal ho ye tho pata tha par tum haklate bhi ho"she asked taunting him...
"Oyye miss.black and white madhubala ji ...mein haklata vaklata nai hu ...haa mein tumhe yeha kyu laya pata h ..."he asked
"Nai"said navya innocently
"Mujhe bhi nai pata"he murmured
"Kya?kush push kya kar rahe ho"navya asked making faces...
"Haa mein tumhe ye Clift dekhane laya tha ...look ..nice na"he said showing her the Clift which was some distance away from them ...
Navya got shocked ...
"Hai Mata Rani ...tum humein yeha se girane ka plan tho nai bana rahe na...chal kya raha h tumhare dimak mein"she asked walking away from him..
"What rest ur brain miss.filmy madhubala ji ...don't be so chessy OK ..."he said and pulled her towards him ...
She was close to him ...his hand around her waist ...for the first time they were lost in each others eyes ...he suddenly started moving his face towards navya's(manik ishtyle.😉)
"Kya kar rahe ho "she asked softly
He came out of terrance and left her and started looking here and there ...she was also awkward
To clear the awkwardness he said" madhubala ji I brought u here because I wanted to show u this place ...u know suicide karne ke liye awesome jaga h ...as u know ur little heart is gonna break ...tub ye jaga kaam aayegi "
"Kuch bhi na...humara dil kyu tutega "she snapped
"Harshad ...u don't know him ...u know he is a big time jerk but I know u will support him now"he said smirking
"Harshadji humse pyaar karte h ,aur vo"she was about to say more
"Haa haa pyaar vyaaar and all shit ...mukti ko bhi na yehi bola tha usne ...so tum pyaar ki baate Karna band Karo ...he is just useing u bore hoga na tho ...tumhe bhi chod dega just like mukti ...so don't trust him ...warna dil toot jayega tumhara"he said
"Mukti unka past h...aur wo humare saat aisa Kuch nai karenge ...hum jaa rahe h ..."she said and turned to leave but she slipped and fell down hurting her leg
"Ahhh ouch Mata Rani"she said
Cabir started laughing and said"dekho tumhari Mata Rani ne bhi bol diya harshad se dur hi raho ,usse pyaar na Karo"he said like he is singing
Navya just made faces and tried to get up but can't ...so cabir gave her his hand and she took his help
...with nandu and alya...
...nandini's POV...
Ahhh where is she taking me ...her grip is so tight ...what's wrong with her
"Alya where u dragging me ...listen ...have u lost it ...ahh u r hurting my hand"I said with tears in my eyes as her nails dug into my skin ...
"Oh yeah...why not...I am hurting u right nandini"she said and stopped dragging me and looked at me with her angry eyes yet they looked hurt..
"Alya u ok na "i asked
"Ohh so now u care for me ...u r asking me am i ok ...after what u did how can i be ok "she said with tears in her eyes yet angry eyes ...
"Mein ...meine kya kiya alya ...what did I do"I asked with tears flowing continuously from my eyes ...
"Awww poor girl...so innocent u r na...how innocent ...I will tell u what u have done ...u have spoiled everything ...its all because of u"she said
"Alya say it clear what u wanna say ...pls I didn't get u what r u talking about ..."I said as I really didn't understand that what she is talking about ...
"Stop being innocent OK...just stop your I am an innocent girl drama ...bloody behenji ...its just because u that my manik broke up with me ...u r the problem ...just because of u I lost him...but for ur kind information...manik loves me ...he loves me not u "she yelled on top of her voice making me shiver
"Alya.."I tried to talk
"No ...just listen ...let me just tell u the Truth today ...u know what ...you don't deserve a guy like manik...I mean just look at urself ...as much I know him he has a class and he will never fall for any girl like u ...he can never fall for an commoner like u ...his standards are not that low and yeah one more thing ...u know what he loves me a lot ...vo mujhse pyaar karta h ...and may be actually I am sure he is doing all this drama of love to get revenge on u...u punched him na...revenge le raha h vo"she yelled more
"Alya manik aisa nai h...he can never..."I tried to say my eyes were filled with tears ...I know he can never do this ..
"Oh so u will tell me how he is ...no my dear I will tell u he is like this ..he is really impulsive aggressive and he always takes revenge ...he hated u tho suddenly pyaar kaise aaya tum le usse just think ...or may be ...oh let me guess may be he is physically attracted to u "she said smirking
"Stop ..."I said trying not to listen to her ...I closed my eyes not able to take this things she was saying
"Aww tumhe bura laga ...tch tch tch ...but u know what I am right ...he is just physically attracted towards you or I can say he is just planing an revenge on u for that punch thing ...so now I warn u don't even dare to come near him...stay away from him just away ...because he is mine"she said and went away leaving me go all weak thinking about what she said ..my tears were not stopping to flow from my eyes ...
...end of nandini's POV...
Maniks tent ,
...maniks POV...
I changed into my vest and pants and lied down ...how could she just be so ziddi ...I wanted to spend time with her but no she never listen to me ...but was I over reacting ...I mean she had a point about fab 5 thing ..it will be a big trouble if any one of them got to know ...I mean cabir already knows but dhruv mukti alya ...they will kill me if they got to know about this from someone else ...and harshad he is tho always ready to create problems for fab5
She was right ...oh god why I get so angry with out reason I snapped at her ...my baby ...she must be crying right now ...I need to say sorry to her ...
I went out of my tent and saw cabir and navya coming together cabirs hand on navyas shoulder and one hand in his hand ...I think navya has hurt her leg but iss cabir ke bacche ko kya hua ...itna pyaar ...he looked at me and I gave in a naughty smirk Indicating navya ...he gave a 'shut the f**k up'look i laughed
...end of maniks POV...
PRECAP
"Cabir manik nandini tent mein nai h"said navya worried
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"Manik cool down we will find her"said cabir assuring me
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"I can't live without her cabir ...agar usse Kuch ho gaya tho mein kya karunga"I said tears flowing from my eyes ...
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"NANDINI"I yelled
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Edited by sauju - 10 years ago
