Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 ) - Page 23

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Posted: 10 years ago
you're superb⭐️ & the update is also gr8.
MaNan on Mission can't wait to read what gonna happen next.
Continue soon & please give us longer update, so we can be lost in MaNan land longer😳

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Posted: 10 years ago
come on yaar, please make them meet soon na 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update...
manan awww so cute...
so now mission dhruvlya...!!!!!
thanks a lot for the pm...
pls continue soon..take care
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Originally posted by: ranveerishani

come on yaar, please make them meet soon na 😭

sis mera ff kahatam ho jayega agar woh dono mil gaye...Cry
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thanks for the pm
amazing update
continue soon
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Awh so cute and superb yaar! Continue soon
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chapter 17

precap-manan talk

Dhruv house

manik arrives

mukti-manikitni der kaha laga di manik

manik-mukti tujhe pta toh hai mumbai ka traffic bas usi mein phass gaya tha

mukti-ohh chal aaja lets party

manbir were sitting on the sofa and rest were dancing

cabir-toh kya tha woh surprise ki tu apne doston ko bhi bhul gaya

manik was blushing

cabir-ohho someone is blushing ab toh jaldi bta kya hua tere ko pta hai na mujhe mystery pasand nahi hai toh jaldi apna muh chol warna mein sab ko bta dunga ki tu kisi traffic waffic mein nahi phasa tha tu toh

and he stood up and was going to leave just then manik pulled him

manik-oye chup chap yaha pe betha reh aur sunn

cabir -ha sun raha hun

manik-meina na ...na ...na

cabir-na ke aage badhega

manik-meine na usse purpose kar diya

cabir-oh teri di aur usne kya kaha

manik-kya kahegi u know na no one says no to manik malhotra

cabir-manik malhotra necche aajao aasman mein mat udho chalo phir toh double party banti hai

manik-oye meine yeh baat sirf tujhe batai hai aur kisiko nahi toh dont u dare

mukti-waha kya kusar pusar ho rahi hai chalo

manbir join tthem and maik notices that dhrulya were lost in each other

manik(to himself)-so we were right something is going on between them so now toh inhe jaldi se milwana padhega warna mere aur nandini ka relation secret hi bana reh jayega

cabir-guys i am really very tired so lets go home yaar aur kal college bhi toh jana hai aur kal kisi ko kisi se milna bhi toh hai (with a smirk)

manik gave him a stern look and all of them dont know what he was saying but they ignored it and just said ok went towards thier home

manik in his car was just thinking about nandini thier first kiss, thier talk, her smile ahh her smile it gave him peace he was missing her badly so decided to go to her house and gave hher a surprise

Alia house (outside)

manik reached their and saw alia car and get tensed that how will he meet her so he decided to go to her by the pipe

Alia house(insidee)

nandini-alia tum aa gayi mujhe laga ki tum wah rukhoge

alai-actually meine socha ki kitne din ho gaye ki meine tumhare sath time spend nahi kiya

nandini-oh toh tum betho mein kuch peene ke liye laathi hun

and she brings coke for herself and beer for alia

alai-nahi mujhe na coke peeni hai meine dhruv ke ghar mein bhi alcohol nahi pee

nandini-ohh toh kyu nahi pee

alai-woh dhruv ko alcohol nahi achi lagti na (and she taught what she just said just now)

nandini(to herself)-Bingo so its confirmed that she like no no loved dhruv meri frnd ne alcohol chod di dhruv ke liye wow dhruv jo mein abhi tak nahi kar payi yumne chutkiyon mein kar diya i am impressed

in nandini room

manik reached thier but didnt found nandini thier so he just thaught to wait over thier as he stepped forward a vase fell down due to which nandini and alia got alert

alia-yeh kaisi awwaz thi

nandini-i dont know let me check u stay here

alia-nahi nahi agar koi chor hua toh n no i cant take a risk

nandini-mein bachi nahi hun alia so just saty here

nandini goes upstairs and stopped infront of her room and took a vase as a weapon and opened the door

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fab 5 (mum)

alia-aare tum dono sudhroge nahi tum usse milne aaye the aur mujhe bataya tak nahi

cabir-arre alia ab yeh hamara manik todhi na raha ab to yeh nandini ka hogaya hai

mukti-pehli baar cabir ne koi sahi baat ki

dhruv-sachi mein mein kabhi bhi buddy ko aisa nahi dekha

manik-aisi koi baat nahi hai mein tumhara purana manik hi hun

cabir-oh plz mnaik

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nandini and natasha

natasha-oh toh jiju to majnu nikle itna miss kar rahe the ki milne hi aagaye hehe

nandini-uss waqt toh mujhe bhi nahi pta tha ki manik hai waha pe

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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing bt too short update
Excepting long ones
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww.so cute ..manik is deeply falling for nandani
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
Amazing update..
Superb
Waitin fr nxt😳

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