Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 ) - Page 17

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa


yayieee show me to milta nhi yahi par mill jaye i will be happy

mein bhi likhte likhte kush ho jaungi😆😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

mein bhi likhte likhte kush ho jaungi😆😉


hahaha naughty girl kiss will be full of pasion wala
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice chapter
Manik and cabin were in KUTTE MEIN TERA KHOON PI JAUNGA MODE

Harshad and soha got arrested

Loved the way cabir was worried about manan

Beautifully presented

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update..
Loved Cabir-Manik..
Yay!!! Nandu is safe...
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
i just lvoe it
plz do contiune soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
if you want to, then yes add dhrulya ,cavya and mukbhi stories, but the story should meinly be focused on manan. Where I am (in the united states) you can't watch mtv live, so I watch it on mtv.com and I also love reading fanfics.

I think you should add very romantic scenes, and make nandni arrive sooner so that manan can once again reunite. I hope my advise has helped you. please pm me(like always for the next part).
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa


hahaha naughty girl kiss will be full of pasion wala

natasha teri wajah se uss karamjali ki entry hui 😡.but yaa i too want kiss wala update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 14
precap-nandu was saved by manbir

next morning

manik was trying to wake nandini but but she was in no mood to wake up and manik was hell irritated so he took a bottle and sprinkled some water on nandini's face due to which she waked and she had a smile on her face and without opening her eyes she said

nandini-good morning

manik-good morning

that smile of her was so preety that manik forgot that he was irritated because of her and should be angry and instead of being angry he said good morning

manik-madam jaldi uthiye apko college bhi jana hai

nandini waked up and she was confused where she was and suddenly she remembered what happened yesterday and how manik and cabir saved her from harshad and soha instead of being sad or upset she was happy because she was safe and was with manik

manik-kaha kho gayi jaldi utho

nandini-manik cabir kaha hai

manik-cabir woh niche tumhari wait kar raha hai

nandini-oh toh tum chalo mein aati hun

manik-ok but jaldi aana

nandini -hmmm

nandini(to herself)-meine keh toh diya ki mein aati hun but mere pass kapde bhi toh nahi hai how will i mannage aaiyappa plz help

manik-oh ha nandini us cupboard mein na meri sis ke kapde hai toh u can use them

nandini-ok thanks

nandini got ready and she was surprised that manik sister wear casual cloths like she wear she was toh expecting that she had to wear short dresses but she was lucky
she came downstairs and met manbir

cabir-good morning nandini kaisi ho

nandini-i am fine cabir tum batao

cabir-badiaa manik tu kya kar raha hai

mnaik-mein hamre liye breakfast order kar raha hun woh ajj cook chuthi pe hai

nandini-arre uski koi zarurat nahi i will make some food

cabir-tumhe aata hai khana banana

nandini yes manik mujhe btao kitchen kaha hai

manik-that side(pointing toward it)

nandini goes towards kitchen and manbir were left in lobby

cabir-yaar nandini toh bahut kush lag rahi hai usse dekh ke lag hi nahi raha ki usse kal kisi ne kidnap kar liya tha

manik-mein bhi yehi soch raha tha she is really special yaar

cabir-seriously she is veryyy special(for u in his mind)

nandini-arre kya batein kar rahe ho jaldi aao break fast taiyaar hai

manbir sat on the dinning table

cabir-wohh pasta aur bread omlet nandini tumhe kaise pta ki yeh mera aur manik ka fav nasta hai

nandini-arre its just a coincidence

cabir-ohh

manik-arre nandini hamari perfomance ajj hai

nandini-kya tumne bataya kyu anhi

manik-arre batane ke liye phone kiya tha but tum ki...

his sentence was cut by cabir because she doesnt want nandini to remember that

cabir-wow nandini food is awsm mera toh man kar rah hai ki tumhare hath ko kiss kar lun

nandini-thanks cabir aur manik we dont have time so eat fast then we will practice

manik-ok

nandini called alia

hi alia
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woh mein kal cabir ke ghar rukh gayi thi
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sorry aage se aisa nahi hoga
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woh alia mein an manik ke ghar ja rahi hun practice karne ke liye
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ok bye

manik-ready

nandini-yes chalo phir

manan went towards the room where instruments we kept

mnaik-nandini which type of song u would like to sing

nandini-i want a romantic song

manik-ok

they started deciding the lyrics

nandini(to herself)-manik ajj iss gane se mein tumhe bta dungi ki mein kya chahti hun

manik-(to himsef)-nandini today will be the best day of your life and be ready for a surprise

they decided the lyrics and started practicing with guitar

manik-hows this

nandini-good

2 hours passed and cabir entered

cabir-guys practice ho gayi

manik-haa

cabir-toh chalein we are late function will start in an hour

mananbir left for college

college

alia-hi guys

mananabir-hiii

mukti-ready for the perfomance

nandini-yes

manik-yup...

so lets rock the stage

the function started and manan were supposed to perform next

nandini-best of luck

manik same to you

and princi announced their name

manan came to stage and started singing

click click click click click

hooo

(nandini)

Zehnaseeb Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb

(manik)

Mere kareen mere habee
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb

(nandini)

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hain
(she remembered her cute fight with manik and moment when they became frndz)
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
(manik remembered the time when nandini was kidnapped)
Is kadar hum sono ka milne ek raaz hai

(manik)

Hua ameer dil gareeb
Tujhe chahoon betahash zehnaseeb

(nandini)

Zehnaseeb zehnaseeb
tujhe chahoon betahash zehnaseeb

manik left the guitar and started dancing with nandini

Lena dena nahi dunia se mera
Bas tuhse kaam hai
teri akhiyoon ke shahar mein
Yarran sab intazam hai
(they both shared a eyelock )

Kushiyaan ka ek tukda mile
(she remembered when she and manik were alone in her house)
Ya mile gum ki khud se
(she remembered when she was kidnapped)
Yaara tere mere karche mein
Dono ka hi ek daam hai

(manik)

Hona likha tha yoohi jo hua
Ya hote hote avhi anjane mein ho gaya

(he pulled her more closer)

(manik)

Jo bhi hua hua ajeeb

(nandini)

Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb

(manan)

Zehnaseeb Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chahoon betahasha zehnaseeb

Hua ammer dil garib

(nandini)

Tujhe chahon betahasha zehanseeb

(manik)

Zehnaseeb Zehnaseeb
tuhe chahoon betahash zehnaseeb

(nandini)

Tujhe chahoon betahasha


(manan)

Zehnaseeb


precap-surprise




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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow awesome.. Zehnaseeb.. I luv this song.. Suits manan
Superb... Surprise.. Oh god Wht is it😃😉
Waiting fr nxt
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update
love the song choice
cont soon

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