IF IT'S NOT FOREVER, IT'S NOT LOVE( Chapter 42 on page 83)

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Ayesha Nazrat

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

its dhamakedar update..

loved the ballon scene...

loved every manan bit...

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pooja bhattacharya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

any one would do as long as Manan stay together and fight the hurdles head on...i would not like separation...iv'e seen that enough on tv.

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lavina1612

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Awesome...

Loved it..

I just love your story..

U r an awesome writer...

Waiting for next part.. :)

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Manya

@manya_189

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Ooo this is going sooo damn interesting!!
Loved it !!
MaNan's romance and MaNanBir's bonding was awww
And Friendship that is shown is something very rare and beautiful :')
Great job !!

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zaroge

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

just so beautiful
thank GOD
aryaman got some piece of
mind
n manan r just to cute
cont soon

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HTA111

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Omg superb fantastic too good

Manik was too cute and the romance was awesome at least aryaman has a conscious by which he confessed to fab 5 for the mistakes he had done. For now his evil plan got spoiled but i hope nothing bad happens.

Continue soon waiting for more

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Humairaa

@Humzy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

beautiful update

loved it

very nicely written

cont soon

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jai18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Hey I was just gonna ask for another update and BAM! I got one😛 Yet agaib, this was a beautiful update! Laods of masti and fun... The church part was really sweet! Manik being manik, will do anything and everything for nandu😳 My only criticism is that I would have loved to have a balance between all the characters... U know just maybe a little bit more of cavya, mukbhi and dhrulya!

It's just a suggestion so don't feel bad! U write brilliantly and stay the way u are 👍🏼

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chai_008

@chai_008

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

IMPORTANT NOTE!

I met with an accident a few days back and was advised to take complete bed rest. There are no major injuries but I have injured my leg as well as my hand. "" So please wait for a few days more and I will update the next part. Sorry"
Anyways Parth is now recovering So I am damn happy. Okay Thanks Bye