Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued** - Page 16

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Part 7-

Nandini stepped out from the library and her eyes searching him, he was at parking, talking with someone on phone leaning to the car.

she walked ahead to him, he was looking breathtakingly handsome in a slight sunlight, his brown eyes shining with a small laughs, one hand holding the phone and the other was under the pocket of jeans, his style of walking, talking and even standing can make anybody drool, she brought back her mind from the distraction and reached to him, he looked at her and said I will talk to u later and pressed the end call button, he kept mobile back under pocket and folded his arms, well I can see u r very nice in completing the given task, so what is the progress?

She is my friend now and I asked her to coming with me for a party, I told her that I m taking her to my friend's birthday. First she refused because of not acquainted with birthday person but when I requested she agreed.

Wow that's nice.

Manik, can I bring my friends, Mukti and Navya also?

Yes of course, pretty girls are always welcome, then he winked to her.

She blushed little by noticing he called them pretty.

But Manik, what if Aliya get angry by all this? Because I'm lying to her?

Hmmm he rubbed his chin and said ok come with me.

Where?

Just come.

They reached to the football ground where Dhruv, Abhi, Max and Cabir were laughing and teasing each other, their laughter suddenly stopped to see Manik and Nandini coming.

Oye who is this item coming with Manik, asked Abhi.

Oh she is Nandini, Manik's one week slave, who danced at canteen. Replied Cabir.

Hey guys what's up. Manik asked bumping fist with them one by one.

Cool... btw Manik where were u?

Well let it be, I want u all to be friend with her she is Nandini, they all were surprised because he never involved any girl in their group as a friend, for them girls are only for one thing, but they smiled and shook hand with her, Nandini was also happy because they all were nice people and warmly welcomed her as a friend. Cabir was the first one who is very much interested to chat with her because of Navya, he saw her always with her.

So Nandini now your lie became truth coz Dhruv is your friend and u r taking Aliya to your friend's party, and if u r afraid that she would be angry on you so just don't worry because according to her u doesn't know anything about Dhruv and her relation and so u have to pretend like this, no problem at all.

She smiled weakly; this problem is solved but what about her over protective mother. She took leave by waving them a smiling bye.

When she left they all starring at Manik...

He asked raising eye brows What?

Nothing, u r involving a girl in our group, strange. Said Max.

Oh hello, just being friendly with her doesn't mean we are involving her, he took seat beside them, u know what we are? How can a girl be part of us??

They were all still smiling and that was irritating him, he scolded them why u guys smiling like idiots... get up we have lots to do.

Nandini quickly made her mother agree on a sweet lie of group study at night because her mother always want her to study hard and going Navya's home is no matter of worry for her because of their good and faithful relation with Navya's family.

Nandini was so excited and choosing dress for the party, finally she picked a black skinny jeans with beautiful blue chiffon top, with blue matching stylish belt and sandals, she took all makeup thing to her college bag along with books and slipped a loose kurti above her top so that her mother could not caught her lie of going to the party instead of group study to Navya's house.

Nandini my princess, enjoy there said her father from behind folding the evening news paper.

She was confused and said I m going for study papa.

He raised his eye brows and looked at her up to down, she gulped down in nervousness, he chuckled and said I know where r u going but don't worry I m not old fashioned like your mother, he said this part in a whisper I know its a age, if not now then when? Go and enjoy but be careful and never let your parents down. Ok.

She nodded and hugged her father, I love u Papa.

He kissed her head love u too baccha. And u r looking beautiful.

She smiled and left where Navya was waiting for her in car with Mukti, she sat in a back seat and pulled off her kurti, wow u both r looking gorgeous, you too Nandini but what with this college bag? Navya and Nandini laughed together, will tell u later Mukti.

They reached to Aliya's house and all girls again started touching up their makeup's, Navya, Mukti and Aliya attacked on Nandini because she was only one without any makeup. They rolled her hairs in loose curls and gave a smoky look to her eyes, she applied shiny lip gloss and looking at mirror with happy smile, this is first time she was going to a party at late night and very much excited to feel the new experience.

All girls smiled to each other then moved for the party.

Manik was standing outside and waiting for them, he texted her... where r u? she texted back I m on my way.

All girls reached to the party place, they all stepped inside but Nandini's eyes searching for Manik, she doesn't know why but she likes to be around him, when they all saw Dhruv, moved forward and wished him happy birthday, Dhruv smilingly thanked them, but Aliya was stunned and stood still. Nandini came to Aliya and said he is my friend Dhruv go wish him, Aliya asked surprisingly he is your friend?

Yes, why? Is anything wrong?

No, I just want to go back.

But why plz stay, we just arrived.

No I m going, But when Aliya turned her body to go back, found the door closed and suddenly all lights were switched off, only one light was on, that was colorful and the big screen was playing beautiful romantic song along with lovely pics of Aliya and Dhruv, they were looking so cute and crazy in love couple, Aliya's eyes turned teary to saw them as she was living each and every moment again. Then Dhruv climbed on stage with mike, Aliya I m sorry, I m so sorry for everything, don't know what I was thinking of myself, when I ignored u and our love. But Aliya trust me I love u so much, our breakup can't change anything, u r still so special and important for me like before, I want u again in my life plz come back to me, plz, I won't hurt u again, his pleading was so touching. He then stepped towards Aliya and opened his arms, Aliya couldn't control herself and ran to him hugged him back I love u too Dhruv.

All present there smiling with awe...

The whole surrounding was cheerful, everyone clapping and whistling, Nandini had also some tears in her eyes, someone offered her a hanky, she looked down then him, he was smiling playfully, she took the hanky and wiped her tears... thanks.

Well thank u too. For this, Manik pointed towards hugging couple. Then Dhruv and Aliya cut the cake together and fed each other, then his all friends, Dhruv fed Nandini also she was surprised but got remembered that she is also their friend now, he hugged her and whispered thanks Nandini, she smilingly replied your welcome.

When the cake cutting finished, the DJ hit the noisy party music, everyone got engrossed with it, Mukti was dancing with Abhi, while Cabir and Navya got each other's company, Aliya and Dhruv were kuchhi cooing in corner and Manik as usual dancing with all girls. Nandini rolled her eyes on him and took seat at the bar counter, some boys also tried to dance with her and trying to be acquainted but she shooed them away.

That loud music started giving her headache and she decided to go out to take some fresh air.

When Manik got tired of dancing he moved to the bar for a drink and notice that Nandini was nowhere, he took a look of whole place but didn't find her, he never cared for anyone specially a girl but Nandini was different, he asked with Abhi who told him he saw her going out, he also moved out and saw Nandini was walking to the soft sand of the beach, the night club where the party has threw was near the sea.

Her sandals were hanging to her hands and jeans was rolled up, she was enjoying the tiny waves on her bare foot, the place was dark but few lights were coming from the club, he recognized her by her perfect shaped figure.

She turned back and found Manik coming to her, he asked what are u doing here?

Just wanted to take a walk.

Ok come let's go to the party...

No... actually I like here.

U don't like parties? Isn't it?

No, it's just I m not used to it, these things are so new for me that's why I feel uncomfortable, but u go.

He ignored her last words and asked u like beaches?

Yes very much, the sweet sound of waves is my favorite. lakes, rivers, fountains I really like them, u know when I was in shimla, I often sat near the lake for hours.

well so lets sit here, she nodded and both sat on the send, both were silent for some time, starring the sea.

Then Nandini broke the silence and asked sarcastically, btw why are u here? I m sure your dance partners' must be missing u... he chuckled.

No serially don't u get tired by running behind these bimbos? You all boys are same.

He quickly turned his face to her oh hello, I don't run behind anybody, they were dyeing to be with me and if u talking about boy's nature then these girls are not less. They can do anything for just getting attention.

oh plz... if they really does that for attention then u boys should not fall in the trap if u guys are so smart... but only a short skirt is enough for making boys turn their heads.

He chuckled, I think U can also wear short dress, he glanced over her toes to head and said u have a nice body I m sure that will look good on you and also u would make so many heads turn, he replied with teasing smile.

She blushed and replied no no I can't. What will people say?

What should we think about people, we should do what we like.

Yeah your transparent society allows all these?

Of course and transparent society is much better than the hypocritical one.

Yeah right everything is normal in big cities like live in relationship, gay couples and before marriage...she bit her her lip and stopped.

He asked what before marriage?

U know that S word.

He controlled his laugh and asked what S word, I don't know.

aa ummm...

What? SEX?

Ha wohi.

He was started laughing like mad, shaking his head; Nandini pouted and folded her arms. Come on Nandini, its just a word it wont take away your virginity just by using a name. she glared to him fine, SEX... ok.

So what is wrong in it? it's a need of body, like food, sleep and other things, if two people wanted each other then what is big deal?

But I think that should be expression of love instead of being just need.

Well ye toh apni apni soch hai, btw have u ever done this? No no its a silly question of course u never did, but haven't u kissed at least?

She was feeling so awkward about these adult talk with a boy, she stood up and said I m going, he pulled her hand back and made her sit beside him, u can't go without answering? His has amusing smile on face.

Fine what u want to hear? Ok I haven't kissed anybody yet. Happy?

He chuckled really?

She nodded.

His eyes suddenly stopped at her beautiful soft and pink lips, her black eyes and long eye lashes, her small nose, how is this beautiful perfect girl is still unnoticed, I m sure all Shimla boys have eye sight problem.

He asked so u still haven't get your first kiss? And never got experience how it feels.

Ok now end this topic she said shyly.

He grinned and said ok.

Edited by shreya_preets - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Loved dhrulya
Plzz make Manik mad for nandini soon he should get his punishment by trying to woo her
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow nice update...
please update more fastt...

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Posted: 10 years ago
aww its to cute but plz cont regularly lobely update thnx for the pm dear cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update... love how sweet he is towards her and the way their relationship is developing
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Posted: 10 years ago
hiii
read ur ff in one go nd seriously loved it..
loved how u portraying the relationship between manan..
u penned it beautifully...
plzz update soon nd if possible pm me also...
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 7 was awesome...finally dhrulya patch up...
loved manan talks
continue soon
take care
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...so manan are friends now and dhrulya are together..like the way the story is progressing
Initially I thought manik in the story is a dark brooding character who will be possessive about nandini but he is friendly with nandini..and the gang looks chilled out too..waiting to read what happens next..please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Read all.the chaps in one go...seriously I loved your ff...plzzz pm me for the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 8- Reaction

Party was awesome at last night na? asked Navya yawning and stretching her arms...

Yup now get up fast and drop me home miss lazy head. Replied Nandini.

Navya slipped down her blanket and came near her, u know Nandini I enjoyed a lot, Cabir is so cute, Btw did u know Cabir is not only Manik's friend but also cousin?

Really? I didn't know.

Yes He told me, I noticed u were not at party for long time, where were u?

I was outside, U know na, so much loudness makes me lightheaded.

Oh ok, so u got bored... asked Navya sadly.

No not at all Manik was there with me and we chat for the long time.

She jumped on her place, really? U both were together?

Yes, then she looked at her super excited expression, but I don't think there is any reason of jumping like that Navya. U know I was thinking before that he is so arrogant and mean but he is not that bad I liked his company, I mean nobody can feel boredom with him, but I must say these big city people are very much opened up about adult talk.

So u both having adult talk? Navya playfully hit her shoulder by hers.

No no not in that way, we were just talking normal things...

U r blushing Nandini, ok tell me do u like him?

She gave her a glare...Nooo.

Come on Nandini, don't deny, every girl here wants him and I know somewhere u also not unaffected by his charm.

Plz Navya, u know he is not my type and we are not similar in anything, we think different way, our background, thoughts, living way everything is different, just because of his some nice gestures we can't deny how is he? He and his friends are most spoilt guys in college, they involves in gang wars, blood shade, drinking, smoking and lots more, being rich is not everything, a person should have capabilities, he should be responsible and serious about life.

Navya sighed and said holding her shoulders, u r thinking so far darling, I was just talking about liking.

We have to think far Navya, because I m like that, boyfriend then roaming around, had fun then breakup this is not my thing, for me love is life and one person is for forever, I m sure Manik is definitely not that person. U asking me I like him or not, I don't know, maybe I do but I know very well that we are not for each other. Now drop me home plz.

She let out a deep breath ok fine miss serious, leave it. Anyways what is so hurry? today is Sunday, stay some more time na. Navya wrapped her arms around her and leaned to her shoulder.

I know but I have some assignment along with Manik's.

Huhhh...Ok then let's go.

When after Sunday Nandini reached college the whispering had already started about Manik and Nandini... when she passed from corridor some girls whispered oh she is the one right?... yes her name is Nandini...lucky bitch, their attitude showing their uncontrollable jealousy... Nandini said to herself no I m not.

she reached to her class, sat on the place but her mind was somewhere else, Aliya took seat beside her but she didn't notice, she tapped on her shoulder, where r u lost Nandini?

Oh hiii... bas aise hi, Aliya can I ask u something?

Yeah sure.

Is it true I m the first girl who got entry in their friend circle?

Yes, it's true u know I was also surprised to know this, I must say u r the lucky one, they are bad guys but nice also, don't think too much about gossips, they are just envious.

Nandini nodded smilingly to her.

Nandini and Navya angrily cursing their car. I m telling u Navya sell this dabba then she kicked the tire.

U r right Nandini see it ditched us on middle of the road. Now what to do?? Ooper se ye garmi mera sara makeup kharab ho gaya, stupid car. Agrrr... She was feeling like pulling her own hairs. Both trying to show their mechanic-geeri but badly failed.

After some time they saw two boys coming on their sexy bikes, Navya's smile widen to see Cabir and Manik, she waved them to stop.

What are u guys doing here? Asked Cabir.

Enjoying the weather... said Navya sarcastically. Can't u see our opened car? Replied Navya crossing her arms.

He rubbed back of head and smiled sweetly, sorry... can we help?

Yes u can drop us.

Yeah sure.

Navya quickly jumped and seated with Cabir, Nandini was trying to say something but stopped bcoz of hesitation and they left without wasting a second.

Manik was quietly sat with amused smile... waiting for her to say something, but she was looking here and there while playing with the corner of her dupatta.

When he had waited enough, asked anybody want lift or I should go?

She silently stepped ahead and sat behind him, he get on his helmet and started the Ride, she felt little uncomfortable and afraid of falling too because of his super fast riding.

Plz Manik slow down.

Sorry Nandini, its Manik's bike, its can't go slow, he chuckled and said well if u want u can hold me.

She rolled her eyes and softly kept her hand on his shoulder just to make sure she would not fall, her heartbeat increased and lots of butterflies started dancing in stomach only with the simple touch.

When they stopped front of her house, Nandini was confused and hesitated, she knows it's a bad manner to not invite in, especially when someone helped u, but what about my typical Indian mom, she would start investigating like CID to see a boy with me, how can I forget how much she embarrassed me when my classmate came to my house at Shimla, but I should ask him at least as a formality.

Manik tapped her shoulder, what r u thinking? It's your house right? Then go.

She smiled and said thanks, when he was getting on his helmet; she stopped him Manik plz come inside if u have some time.

He smiled and quickly followed her as if waiting for her invitation. She found the door lock, oh thank god mom is not home, I think mom went to market as told me at morning. She opened the door by her extra keys and both get in.

He sat in sofa comfortably keeping his foot on the front table, as if that house was not new for him and he regularly comes... she smiled on his bindass nature and asked can I get u water?

No No don't bother... when she was about to sit he demanded with a sweet smile. I want coffee.

She shook her head and moved to the kitchen, he shouted I want strong.

She replied back... sure.

He was strolling at her house, watching the family pictures hanging on walls, her trophies and shield which her mom decorated in a glass shelf; she came with coffee, your coffee sir.

hey is this all yours? He pointed towards shelf.

Yes I won all this.

hmmm impressive, she handed him the coffee, He took a one sip and complimented nice coffee Nandini.

Then he again moved his neck to looking around the house.

I know my house is not big likes yours.

Oh plz , house is necessary for shelter That's it. in fact small houses are better than big, at least chhote ghar me usme rahne wale logo ke beech doori toh kum hoti hai... she was concentrating on his words as trying to understand the hidden meaning, his voice turned serious while he was saying that part and that thing caught her attention.

Then he said cheerfully, but I must say your house is beautiful and lively, I really like the decoration and specially the picture wall, he moved towards the wall and pointed his finger on a photo which has a cute small girl smiling and showing her broken teeth.

Who is she?

It's me?

He chuckled Really? U were so cute especially your teeth, he again laughed... she gave him a fake angry glare... and this is your parents? he pointed to the other photo.

Yes...

They were watching some more pictures, in one Nandini was riding bicycle and her father was holding to give support, other was where Nandini was running holding her doll and her mother was trying to catch her and one was where Sudhir and Amrit tickling her and she was laughing and showing her all teeth, The wall was full of their awesome old family moments... Nandini happily giving him brief of every picture, he felt himself so unlucky to see her beautiful childhood, he also wanted this, attention and love of his parents, but never get even a smaller part of it, just got loneliness and pain.

Well I think I should go now, thanks for the coffee.

She replied smilingly My pleasure...Thanks for the ride.

She followed him to the door, he turned back and gave her a soft hug, she was hesitated before but then hugged back in a friendly way.

Ok bye Nandini.

When he left Nandini was about to close the door, but noticed that her nosy neighbor Shanti aunty was looking at her with wide eyes and disgusting expression, she understood the reason, their old and typical mentality, she rolled her eyes and closed the door ignoring her.

After 1 and half hour Nandini's mom entered with angry expression and asked who was that boy?

Who mom?

Don't try to make me fool, shanti has told me everything...

Omg shanti aunty is so fast in passing news my mom not even stepped inside the house before that she done her work.

Plz mom he was my class mate.

Oh classmate? But she told me you both were hugging? Tell me truth Nandini, do you have affair with him?

She shouted angrily mom plz I don't have affair with anybody, he is just a friend.

Amrit started crying with fake tears, u r shouting on me... boys are coming to our house, u r hugging them and answering your mom shamelessly, today only shanti saw this, one day whole colony will talk, they would split on us, do you have any care of our dignity? she sat on the nearby chair and started slapping her forehead... Nandini was watching all this with irritated expression, said Amrit looking up to the sky... hey bhagwan ye sab kya ho rha hai mere ghar me...then she again looked at her angrily Aise chalta rha toh kaise milega tere liye koi bhale ghar ka rishta?

She rolled her eyes wow my talented and full of variety mom, in one second she has full of bucket tears and in other all just vanish... then anger, miss drama queen.

Mom plz stop over reacting, u really should stop watching those drama serials and u r talking about shanti aunty? did she know what her own daughter doing? She has lots of boyfriends, every day a new one, I think she should look after her instead of keeping eye on other's daughter.

Nandini finished her last sentence and moved upstairs.

Amrit angrily walked towards kitchen and placed the vegetable basket, hunhhh... I won't let her effect by Mumbai air, I think I should start looking for a nice boy for her marriage.

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