Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued** - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
I've read whole story and I must say u've developed the story and whole characterisation u tried to portray ... I could really imagine ...

Manik Malhotra... Well he just wants to be noticed once with care and moreover love...

Someone who understand him what he wants ,what he is what he always was.. What he really wanted to be ... Why he wants to drown in this world of alcohol as u said so none can recognize him and his pain his sufferings his wounds his scars which are scratched every now and then ...

Someone is there MANIK-WATCH OUT;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Terrific update...looks like they are softening up to each other more... can't wait to see what happens at the library..
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update...
manan in library... hehehe...
plz update next part asap...
thanx fa the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Finally an update...awesome beautifully penned..please continue soon eager to read the next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update..
continue soon would love to read it further
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey this is going nice.

do update and pls notice by PM
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 6 - helping the love

The class was over and now time to go to library, the part of her heart wanted to go but other part doesn't. she picked her books and walked to the locker, placing them inside got another note... MEET ME AT LIBRARY 2.

She was confused, why he wants to meet her? library 2? do we have another library also? She was walking and walking but library 2 was nowhere, she decided to ask peon he replied library 2 is downstairs.

She reached there but surprised too, they have two libraries and she doesn't have idea about this. When she entered saw the place has some empty shelves, no books only some broken tables and chairs. She stepped ahead and shouted his name, Manik?? Are u there? Suddenly door closed and the place has darkness everywhere, only few lights coming from tiny window, she was hell scared and shivering badly, she whispered loudly in a broken voice, this is not a j..joke orrr a a p..prank right? stepping backwards slowly and saying by her trembling lips... kk koi hai yahan...her legs stuck on something and she was about to fall, before that pair of hands held her by waist, she screamed loud, he made her stand and put his palm on her mouth, she opened eyes and saw Manik standing front of her, when he released her mouth she shouted what the... he again covered her mouth, why r u shouting Nandini? are u mad or something? She shook her head In no, ok now I m releasing promise me u wont shout? She blinked her eyes.

Ohk, she took a deep breath u know u instantly gave me heart attack.

Well I didn't know u will behave like such a kiddo, are u scared?

She narrowed her eyes No I was not. Anyways why u called me here? I m sure not for scarring me.

Actually I need your help.

Help? She said sarcastically Wow what a way of asking for help.

Yeah yeah I know, it's an old library and since we got new one this is empty so we often use it for secret meetings, its a safe place.

Ohk so what u want? She asked crossing arms.

he came closer and said in seductive voice, really? Do I tell u what I want? She stepped back, plz come to the point.

He let out a sigh. Ok fine, I want u to be friend with Aliya.

Aliya? Who is she?

She is our classmate and a girl Dhruv loves a lot, but they broke up with some reasons and now Dhruv realized how much she was important for him, but she is not ready to talk to him or any of us, so we need your help. Dhruv's birthday is coming and he wants her to be with him that day, this only thing he demanded as a birthday gift and we are trying to get this for him.

She was surprised they all look so tough but Dhruv loves someone this way, how cute, a soft smile appeared on her lips.

She asked surprisingly, he loves Aliya? That brown hair girl?

Yeah I know it's foolish?

She glared to him, NO... it's cute.

he said rolling eyes, whatever... so u r ready to help us?

Of course for the first time u r doing something good and Nandini is always ready for promoting love.

Ok then u make her your friend and on Saturday take her for the party with u.

She knows their reputation in college no one can say no to them, then why they need help for taking her for the party? She asked keeping hands on her hips, tell me something, u all are bullies and what everyone said rulers, then why u need my help for this easy thing?

Why u trying so hard for using your brain? He asked teasingly, She rolled he eyes but still waiting for an answer, yeah it's not a big thing for us, but he loves her very much and wants to win her, we can't take any step which became a mistake and he will lose her for forever. She is already mad at him and we cant make her more angry, so this is the easy way, I know it's stupid for wasting that much time for the stupid emotion of love but what to do. He is my friend.

She was quite impressed by Dhruv's love but not agree with Manik what he said about love but the time is not right for arguing, She asked what I would get?

What? He asked raising his eyes brows.

Omg his every action is sexy. She controlled herself and said I mean If I help you what I get?

he smirked u are not that innocent I was thinking u, ok what u want?

Freedom, from being your slave.

I will think about it, he turned and walked ahead to the door.

Oh hello excuse me, that's not fare she whined. But he left smiling on her childishness.

She saw Aliya in class, she was pretty and modern, After the class Nandini was trying to get a chance to start a talk, when she turned her books fallen on floor, Nandini quickly picked them and handed to her, she smilingly said thanks.

Welcome, btw I m Nandini.

I know you, u r the one who danced at canteen?

Nandini was trying to hide her face in embarrassment

Aliya laughed softly, no no that was fantastic, I really liked that u have guts girl otherwise who can stand front of Manik Malhotra. hii I m Aliya, both shaking hands.

Ok Nandini bye for now I m going to library for making some notes.

Oh that's nice I m also going there.

Well join me then.

Wow making friends is not so tough.

Nandini and Aliya both walking through the corridors giggling on something, Manik and his gang also passing from there, when Nandini saw Manik she winked to him, giving a look of accomplishment and walked away.

he smilingly shook head, this girl is so fast.

Navya was waiting for her in car, she came running, sorry sorry, u waited so long? Hunh why do u care? now days u got other friends too I saw your girly chit chat with Aliya all the time, said Navya pouting.

Owww... it's not like that Navya, u are most important for me she gave a side hug now stop being childish. Ok smile then I will tell u the secret.

Navya grinned and jumped on the seat, woahh I love secrets tell me tell me.

Ok you know that Aliya?

Yes.

Dhruv loves her and he wants to be with her again.

Oh no my option is out Dhruv is booked? Said Navya making sad face.

Navya...

Ok ok continue.

So Manik asked me for help to take her on his birthday party.

Navya's smile widen, really? He told u to take her there, that means u r also going at the party?

Nandini was silent because she didn't think of it, she also has to go there.

Navya shook her where are u lost? Listen plz ask Manik, Can u take me and Mukti too? I really like Cabir, I hope to get some time with him she said dreamingly, plz na Nandini.

But Navya Saturday late night party? What would I say to mom, she won't allow, I can't go, u know her, she doesn't like all this.

Oh come on Nandini, u r a big girl... just make some excuse.

No yaar telling lie with mom, not good.

Come on, u r not doing anything wrong, u r just helping someone, and remember u always said, who helps others to get their love; god gives them their true lover.

Yeah I know, and I really wanted to help them but...

No if no but... u r going and taking us with u that's final then Navya crossed her arms.

But what should we say to mom?

Hmm... let me think, then she jumped idea...tell her u r going to my house for group study, she knows our whole family since long time and trusted us, I m sure she won't say no.

Well, I hope so, we can try at least.

In a library Nandini was silently reading books keeping cute specs on her nose. Manik came inside, his eyes were looking for her, the librarian and other students were shocked to see him, Manik and library totally mismatch. He ignored their gaze and took seat beside Nandini, she was lost in reading, not even realized someone is sitting there. He tapped on her shoulder; she turned her head, asked shockingly u? her only voice was loud enough to take everyone's attention while the whole place had pin drop silence. She gave everyone an apology look and asked again in a whisper what are u doing here?

He handed her a piece of paper which has 10 dots. He whispered to her ears number.

She looked at him confusingly number? he again whispered u know those 10 digits by them u can text or call someone. Every time his hot breath left her behind with shivers.

She gave a look I know that, then written her number on that and again back to book which she was reading. he took the number on his phone and typed something.

Her mobile buzzed, she took it out from her pocket and saw a message from an unknown no...

HEY THERE, IT SEEMS LIKE U HAVEN'T GIVEN ME FAKE NO. THIS IS MINE SAVE IT.

Manik.

He again texted so WHAT SHE SAID ABOUT COMING?

She whispered back we r side by side then why u r texting me.

Librarian shouted I want silence here, if anyone has lots for chat, gates are open, she lowered her head down and buried to her books quickly.

He chuckled and texted again- THAT'S WHY.

She texted back, OK MEET ME OUT, NOW LET ME READ.

He rolled his eyes and stepped out.

Edited by shreya_preets - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aawww that's such a cute the ruler king manik needs help of nandini to patch up dhruliya really i loved der library talk n nandini-aliya talk awesome updates ur updates r indeed worth waiting but plz plz try to update regularly u knw i loved both story too much n dis time u didn't send pm to me 😭 cont regularly
Edited by aminahin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Hope while patching up dhrulya manan will fall for each other
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aminahin

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aawww that's such a cute the ruler king manik needs help of nandini to patch up dhruliya really i loved der library talk n nandini-aliya talk awesome updates ur updates r indeed worth waiting but plz plz try to update regularly u knw i loved both story too much n dis time u didn't send pm to me 😭 cont regularly



thank you so much

oh I m so sorry maybe I missed your name in PM list. sorry dear I will remember next time :)

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