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Posted: 10 years ago


Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
First of all u have a prettiest name Manya.
Wow 👏 👏 👏 u are an amazing, mindblowing and a very talented writer. Hats of to you for this amazing job.
I read all ur parts today thanks for the index. What say about ur part? U described the preparation of the concert very well with truth, friendship, love... This conception is just amazing.
Manan is an couple just wow yaar. Ur parts are excellent. U are very talented. I will not write anymore but just read ur post. So I have little request to you today I have a small operation so I wished that I read ur part before going to the operation theatre if it's possible. Otherwise I will read tomorrow. Thanks to write it very regularly not like me. I am very happy and it's because of u. U inspired me today really. Ok now it's time to stop my nonsense. Love u sweetheart, take care of ur health not like me. Bye bye. Take care 😳
Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 8seetha

First of all u have a prettiest name Manya.
Wow 👏 👏 👏 u are an amazing, mindblowing and a very talented writer. Hats of to you for this amazing job.
I read all ur parts today thanks for the index. What say about ur part? U described the preparation of the concert very well with truth, friendship, love... This conception is just amazing.
Manan is an couple just wow yaar. Ur parts are excellent. U are very talented. I will not write anymore but just read ur post. So I have little request to you today I have a small operation so I wished that I read ur part before going to the operation theatre if it's possible. Otherwise I will read tomorrow. Thanks to write it very regularly not like me. I am very happy and it's because of u. U inspired me today really. Ok now it's time to stop my nonsense. Love u sweetheart, take care of ur health not like me. Bye bye. Take care 😳



Awww that is so sweet of u !! I hope all goes well with u and i'll definitely write ... And i am so glad that i could inspire somebody 👏 .. Thanks dear :D take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 16

1 hour left

They all reach Audi ...
Panditji and Dhruv were already there..
Nandini : Sir...
Both of them turned around and saw her..
Panditji : ( staring at her and smiling ) bahot achi lg rhi ho Nandini
Manik was controlling himself.. As he had promised Nandini ...
Nandini : Thankyou :)
Dhruv : Haan Nandini you look beautiful :)
She gave a pale smile and said thanyou ...
Panditji : ok so.. Dhruv Nandini chalo mere sath concert is bout to start so i want to give you both something ..
Dhruv ( gets a call ) : Aap chalo mai ata hu do min ...
Fab 4 also leaves ...
Nandini and Panditji goes to the greenroom..
Panditji : tum betho... Lets wait for Dhruv..
Nandini : ji.. :)
After a while Dhruv comes..
Dhruv : Sorry Panditji...kuch urgent kaam agya tha..
Panditji : hmm koi baat ni we still have 30 mins..so ye lo tum dono k liye ( He gives them a murti of Maa Saraswati ) ye tumhe hmsha bless krngi .. humesha apne sath rkhna and Make me proud ...
DhruNi in unison : Thankyou :D ...
Panditji : So all the best both of you...Make me proud.. You guys relax... 15 mins before the concert they'll call you okay..
And he lefts..
Dhruv : Nandini ...
But she leaves in anger..
Dhruv : Sorry Nandini .. ( and he gets upset )
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Behind Music Wing
Nandini was just walking back and forth.. Thinking how her hope.. Is going to lose.. Although they were together yet It was important for her.. She was in a Dilemma.. She wanted to sing with Manik but more than that she wanted him to het his Buddy back and this was the only way to fet them back together so she was ready.. But she was still thinking.. She had her doubts on whether Dhruv was more important to him or she was..
Nandini : Ayiappa.. 😕 mai kya kru..Kya sach mei Manik k liye Dhruv itna important.. Kya vo mjhe frse to ni chrh dga .. 😭 .. What if...
And then suddenly two warm hands pulled her into hug..
Manik : Shhh... Aisa kuch ni hga.. i love you and this time we'll be together no matter what.. i can't and I won't let you go...I Promise
He kissed her forehead.. And Smiled..
She was calm now.. she knew she could believe every word said by him.. she trusts him.. she nodded and kissed him.. He hands went upto her dori.. Her body could feel the shivers...the kiss got passionate..
The moment was broken when her phone ranged..
Nandini : Sorry and kissed him on his cheeks.."Han sir agyi bas ,I have to go .. concert is about to start bye .."
But she was pulled back.. He hugged her and kissed her on her nose.. she blushed..
Manik : All the best.. Your Hope will win
And he let her go with his famous smirk..
She was confused.. What could he possibly mean by that.. they weren't performing together then how..
She reached the Greenroom..
Panditji : So guys all the best .. It's show time :)
And he left saying that ..
DhruNi looked at eachother and said ,"All the best "
They reached the Stage...
Anchor : So guys.. the much awaited S.P.A.C.E Academy : Fusion Concert is going to begin..
Hold your breaths.. coz its going to be mindblowing..
...

So guys.. Excited for next part ...? 🥱 i hope you guys are.. Comment and tell me how you liked it..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
y did u stop
please cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm update

loved it
very nicely written
y did u stop
please cont soon



Haha thda to suspense banta h 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ok

It was nice

But a CLIFF HANGER!

Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome..waiting for next part.. :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Super nice ...
Plzzz update soon can't handle suspense
N update a little longer
Plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
oho...cliff hanger...
update was awesome...pls continue soon dear...

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