Holi Ke Rang - A MaNan OS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello everyone..
M Naina.. And I am new..
So this is my first OS..

Hope you all appreciate it..
I tried to make it funny.. :P



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"Whooo arree yoouuu?" Nandini Murthy, the 'serious' girl, stood on top of a stall and cried out. Manik Malhotra, on the other hand, tried to make her stable..

"Nandu, I am Manik. Monster Manik.." Manik told Nandini.

"Nandu? Who's that? Nandu.. Na-andu... And you 'Monster'? Itne cutie cutie cheeks ko koi monster kaise bula skta hai.." Nandini said as she pulled Manik's cheeks.. Everyone laughed..

"Nandini, tumne bhang pi li hai.. please andar chalo.. accha kam se kam neeche toh utar jao.. gir jaogi nahi toh.. pls?" Manik pleaded like a lil child.. Nandini laughed.. She pulled his cheeks again..

"Ok baby.. Chalo.." She spread her arms indicating Manik to pick her up.. He being so tall, was about to pick her up and put her to the ground when Nandini shouted again.. "Nahi.. Neeche mat rakho.. pls Manik, mujhe neeche mat rkho.. mujhe tumse dur nahi hona.."





Manik to her to his room.. Laying her down on his bed he went to the washroom to wipe off the huge amount of gulal she had thrown on his face.. Thinking quite sure that Nandini was still in bed, he walked back into the room.. and saw the bed empty..

"Oh Manik.." Nandini called out from behind... Manik turned around..

"Nandini.." He sighed as he approached her.. Nandini was standing on the window sill.. The window thankfully closed.. Manika approached her and took her in his arms and made her sit on the bed.. Nandini protested a couple of times but then failed to protest anymore.. Manik covered her with a blanket and was about to get up when Nandini pulled his hand back..

"Don't go.. Pls Manik, don't go." Nandini said.. Manik turned around.. Nandini had made a sad face.. Putting her head over his hand, she made sure he had no way to leave.. Manik knew he was much stronger than her and could easily take his hand out of her little girlish like grip.. but he couldn't shrug her off like that, could he? He sat down beside her.. Nandini opened her eyes and smiled.. She opened her blanket and offered him to come inside it.. He shook his head in a no.. She made a cute pout and indicated him to come again.. Sighing, Manik moved inside the blanket.. Nandini kept her head on his chest and smiled..




Manik opened his eyes in about an hour and realized he had fallen asleep.. Before he could get the tension as to where Nandini was.. He felts someone struggle on his chest.. He looked to his left side to see Nandini sleeping peacefully snuggled into his chest.. He smiled.. He was about to get up when Nandini tightly pushed him down and climbed on top of him.. He shook his head lightly..








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How was it?

Pls leave ur comments and likes.
If you don't like it, pls tell me.

I better not write on MaNan then.
Thanks a lot.. 😃


Lots of love,
Naina

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nandu drunk on Bhag would hve been so much fun!! Lol

Very nicely written.. Do continue pls
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If nande had bhang.. It wud hv been so much fun man..
Bt alas..!
Ur is ws awesome..😆😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great OS!!
Liked it a lot!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aww
such a cute os
loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a cute OS...continue it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for this os..
Sadly we didn't got drunk manan. ..so thanks for this one.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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good one
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ohhh how i wish it could have really happened in the show i love the drunk nandini
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I liked it 👍🏼 short and sweet.Wish Nandu drank bhaang on epi ! wud have been so much fun.

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