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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik is confused what to do with nandini nor could live with pain nor could see in pain...it could not end easily i will not let that happen..
new day
nandini standing on road waved t navya who is standing across the road in front of space..
ring ring ...
nadu come fast getting late for class said navya from other side
5mins let me just cross the road
okay and call end
nandini was just few steps away suddenly a black car stopped and smeone pulled her inside and car back on track
navy could just blink at the scenerio than it strike her and she went inside

IN the CAR
what is these ma...word stopped after looking the person beside her..
you ...here ...she could just murmur with surprised look.

long time no see RJ.-stranger respond with smirk and glint of fun in eyes

COLLEGE CANTEEN
it must be manik ofcurse wahi hoga she spotted fab4 on a table and went to them

mukti- yeh manik kaha hai

cabir -lets call and check

navya rushed and said -karo call or pucho hamari frnd ko kaha le gaya hai woh

cabir nandini manik saath meih wow..
navya with a worried expressin hope nandini okay ho kuch hua na ho use

kise kya hua-came a voice and all looked there and found manik manhtra before them with a dashing look but expressinless face

nandini kaha hai manik cabir ask

i m her pa r what how would i know manik replied taking a seat beside mukti
par humne tho car meih jate dekha ...
come on navya how would manik know he hates her to do things alya said
navya explain in detail kya hua druv ask
manik wore a bore uneffectd look but was unable t control rush of feeling inside so decided to take a move all were now worried listening t happneing and cnsequences ahead.

cabir -relax a bit guys [said looking at manik ]lets 1st check upon nandini first.
kaise navya asked
magic call se phone dial karo madhubalaji
navya dial number and after 3-4 ring it answered

IN CAR
ring ring...ring
nandini pick the phone from and was attacked with navya questins.
she decided to ensureher frnd-navya i am ok...[phone got snached by stranger and]
she is okay miss dont worry replied with a harmnous tone.
who are u nandini ke phone par tum kaise
give my phone back now ask nandini trying to take it back but of no use

come on kitty let me talk yaar stop scraching yaar
said to her and back t phone he spoke-
so miss dont worry ur frnd is safe and sound im taking her for 1 hr then she will be back trut me i am of pure pavitr guy just pray for me that ur frnd doesnt kill me till than
asta lavista sweetheart
and call ended with a pause as a deadly silence around

preview
what are they both up to ayiappa pls nandini prayed looking at the two preparing
stp it rj stop behaving like a baby tld the girl in front
are u sure u would do that she asked them still nervous from their plan setup in space
sam turned to her and said-come on yaar ni stop doubting us for once we r here to help u or do u want to marry that eligibale groom grandpa choose for u
with a angry glare she said-like hell i will let her meet him marriage is out of earth question she said taking a full u turn did i tell u we are in a car and she is driving much ready to kill us or someone else
that fool of arrogance will now meet his dream date ready ot take him hell because
Niaisha surely payback well

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start 👏 . ..
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Oh nice update
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Interesting continue soon... Waiting for next part
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awsome...pls continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nandini ...she started with the voice
freak...she swear under breath it was seriously not a good idea to execute plan here with bunch of fools around here comes the first one
yes she said plasting a smile which was quite opposite of her want
manik was hell angry with her ignorance is seriously of hell of mood now so he just hold and dragged her to the music room nearby
what the hell seriusly how dare he do that she want to crush and crank but cant it will blow the cover
what are u doing leave me she tried free from the grip but cant ..
i wont till u explain me whats going on and u seems different what happening
wow quite brains but u better get away from me if u wana live with that she pushed him hard much better the kick he deserve
listen...he could just punch someone hard with the anger but rather than calming she is adding fuel what happen she is not his nandini ...but who is she before he could confrot the door open and a guy rush in following by his frnds and navya whom he messeged earlier that he found nandini
she was now lining with the wall the guys rushed and ...srry yaar yeh le your meds i was just struck so how was it huh...she open her eyes quite dark unlike herr shinee ones
she take the meds fast end gulp it could now cool her down people in the room are looking funnyly at her or r whatever .like she care...firstly
she turned to her frnd and spat her foot on his leg to mush hard he deserve it for the blunder ...ya stupid cant u do a work properly i told u to keep the meds na than i just wana kill u so much now and that loser i will just grill him up

people around were now gazing at her more weiredly but let it be wh cares

srry na yaar its my fault but it end well na he was not suspiciousna that u r not her wow her only
frnd still douthing at her
wow ...like hell he can and u people stop staring okay i will not diappear from ur looks people she glare them assuring much of their presence okay
who are u ask the guy from before asked hell its him again how dare he manhandell me
u think i will answer that than no that i dont want 2 people good bye --its better that leave before i do much drastic
no u cant before tell us where is nandini with his questin everyone look suprised means i played well the charcter to manipulate all
wow heads off to u but i dont want to tell and nor i want her here ...u just tell me he asked quite dangerusly which look quite impressive means he truely care for RJ.

guys stp it pls said sam he come in between and try to easy the situation .. i will call her here u just calm down he said to tall guy and nia go and change u look good which is quite undigestive for me
very funny i grabbed the bag from him and enter the adjacent room
sam took out his phone and dial number and phone ringed just than some one quitely open the door and sneak in the person back was facing us
i hope it went well come the voice like melody ot my ears...she turned and i know its my nandini
dressed in a grey hodie blue jeans and sneakers she was shocked to see us here much like us to see same image clade in black haltter dress and heels with pony tail and spects cme from other side of room like a mirror image
who is she?????????


Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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INTRODUSING U TO

BEAUTY-ELEGANCE-SPIRIT-T ARA =BES
NAISHA RATHOD - bold spiritful cold and sharp like hyde
RAJNANDINI MURTY [RATHOD} sweet innocent calm and intelegent like jekyll

SAMEER RATHOD- frnd are good but cousins are life for him .ever caring and cool

REYANSH MALLIK- dark and devil for deals $bussiness but caring for peple close respect mr rathod

DEvAnSh RAthoD -GRAnd dad of naisha and sameer and grand pa of nandini
FAB5 AnD Navy as ever
Edited by jivisha - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm start and cs
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Continue soon it is intresting... continue... '
WAITING😭

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sounds good but plzzz give a character sketch

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