MANANFF: Hate to love you: Se2: Part 4(22/03)on hold - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago
okay...so manik never left her...
was just not coming infront of her...coz he was trying to save herself from him and nyonika...
right??
nice twist...
the cutest part...he was always with her...supporting her...loving her...awww...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

Oye...meri black widow...
Itna gussa...
CHILL kar
aur ye pi...


much needed...

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome loved it
Thnks fr pming.. Superb
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm updates statrts to till this chapter
amazing
pm me when u updated this ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
Love it... the glimpses into their past is very helpful. Love how he looked after her... can't wait to see what you have in mind next!
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love it... the glimpses into their past is very helpful. Love how he looked after her... can't wait to see what you have in mind next!



yaaa... me tooošŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

[sorry for the temporary inconvenience... I tried to make an edit from my mobile... and all went wrong... thanks for the feed backs to check... enjoy]

Again emotional and boringšŸ˜†.

Enjoy...



Part 4:...Priority...

Outside Manik's Secret House

Raju Chacha: Baba, lunch is getting cold

Manik and Trilok look at each other... they understand each other

Manik: Chacha, we don't feel like eating... why don't u take it all your home?

Raju Chacha: Baba I cooked for you after so long...

Manik: Panditji, let's have lunch, I have some more to discuss...

Trilok: okay

They enter house again... and sit for lunch

Manik: Why don't you check up on her again?

Trilok calls Nandini but finds switched off... He calls Tia and talks

Trilok: Hey, how's she? (listens...)Okay...(listens...) good...(listens...) o I missed it... looks like u guys had a lot of fun (listens...) yaa please send it... I will be there soon ... okay bye

Trilok: Nandini went to bed... she was feeling sleepy due to medicines

Manik: hmm...

Manik became unmindful... food was served but he was in his world... he was seeing no way...

Trilok: I am planning to discuss with her psychologist and tell her all the truth

Manik: Truth...(He comes to senses )... No its not time to tell her truth

Trilok: I was talking about telling her psychologist all the truth so that she can suggest what is good for her...

Manik: The psychologist... is she good?

Trilok: Yes ...she is one of the best... You should join me too

Manik: You know all the truth... I hate being around doctors...

Trilok: Manik ... you need to go for yourself...

Manik: I can take care of myself...

Trilok: At least you should talk to your friends ... I think they are matured enough to get you now...

Manik: My friends...(he again lost in thought)

Flashback (8 years back)

Manik returns from his visit to Mangalore... he goes to practice room and gets busy playing guitar... Dhruv sees him after 5 days of disappearance... he only kept giving msg... "I need some time alone" ... "I am fine"... Dhruv texts fab 3

Manik was playing guitar feeling nothing but her face of despair... he finally stopped... he opended his eyes to find Fab 4 waiting

Cabir: Manik, where have you been..

Manik: (smiles) have been occupied... I was looking for some inspiration...

Mukti: You okay na?

Manik: Not much... but I want to concentrate on music to forget her memories... hope you are with me...

Alya: that's a very good idea manik

Mukti: Yaa right

Cabir: I see it pointless... Manik should go to mangalore to say sorry to her...who are you trying to fool... us? Or urself? Don't say you are trying to fool Nandini... Nandini must be still waiting for you

Manik: I don't care... she will get used to it ... that's for the better

Alya: He is right Cabir... that's better for everyone

Cabir: Alya ... why don't you understand?

Dhruv: come on Cabir... don't you see Alya is so excited about Manik's break up... she can get him back

Alya: What? What did you just say...Mind your language Dhruv

Mukti: What's wrong with you Dhruv?

Alya: I am leaving...

Manik: No Alya...Dhruv, what happened buddy...

Dhruv: Manik ... come out your selfishness... You unstable games... ruining our lives...

Mukti : Dhruv shut up ...if Alya wants to get Manik back what's wrong

Cabir: How you guys can drag Manik and Alya now? He need Nandini... Nandini has done so much for him

Manik: Shut up you all... (Manik screams...) I don't want any of you to worry about me... I don't believe in relationships anymore... You are right Dhruv... I am selfish... I was always... wasn't I?

Dhruv gets his mistake...

Dhruv: Sorry buddy... I did not mean to say that...You did so much for me..for us... but I think its time for me to take control of my life...

Manik: (stays silent for a while)... thanks Dhruv... that you don't need my help anymore... as I am more selfish now... I only want to focus on music... I want to be winner always ... I want you guys to be more professional now... if you guys have any care for me... do that

Mukti: I am with you...

Alya: You are right... concentrating on music can keep us away from the tensions..

Cabir: You really think that...

Dhruv: I will do it for buddy...

Manik: Cabir?

Cabir: I guess my options are agree or leave...

BacK to present:

Manik: After Nandini was away... things were not like before anymore... I put my friends away... The proud Fab 5... who one day tried to break Nandini... was broken ... For the rest of the days in SPACE... we only were a music band... I let none of them to get the inside of me...We never had a group hug again... We used to throw grand parties.. no fab 5 only parties... and I used to join when others were drunk...Dhruv and Alya ... I understood there was a tension between them... And I ...not letting anyone know... helped them to forgive and accept each other... They became a couple... but used to break up every now and then... Mukti was in love with Abhi who was a cancer patient... we hold concerts and events for him... Sent him abroad... But he was not saved... We had to send Mukti to rehab...And that was end of Fab 5... She is well now... She now runs rehab... But I avoid her... she keeps giving long positive speeches... Alya and Dhruv married 3 years back... But got divorce in one year...

Manik pauses

Trilok: Hmm looks like Mukti can help you...(He smiles ironically) And Cabir? He turned out to be an youth icon

Manik: Yes... he is ... he has been most consistent... He never forgave me... he never took my favor... Unless he had something to give me in return... He took care of Navya and Roshni... They are now his life... He is doing the best among us... And he was consistent in pushing me about Nandini every time he got chance...like calling her bhabi (Manik Smiles)... He is not impatient of my denials...

Trilok: I think you should tell him... He has been the closest friend to Nandini ... He has the right to know... He is smart and calm.. He may help you more than me...

Manik: He will get hurt

Trilok: No he will be happy.. have him by your side

Manik: You are right... I need him now... All these years... Nandini's news of achievements kept me going... thanks to you... The video clips you kept sending me... the first one... Her first performance at Nakhshatra ..."Sun raha hai na tu"

Manik: And then so many ...(Maniks eyes are teary...) Her journey... her pains in her songs... also her all the joyful moments of glory...

TK puts his hand on his shoulder...

Trilok: She will be joyful again

Manik: It's so hard to live now... I know how it is to hate self more than anybody... How can I protect her from her blames ...how?(He screams)

Trilok: Manik... control yourself... get up as you are not going to eat

Manik: Can I see her sleeping? Or I can be around her for a while as long as possible.. let me follow you with my car...

Trilok: No, you are not fine... don't drive today... You don't have driver... let me drop you home...

Manik: Okay... I will spend night here... you are right... you leave... if she feels me... It can bring more problems

Trilok: Hmm... Do you have instruments here?

Manik: Hmm...

Trilok: Hope music helps you... And this MMS too...

Manik receives a MMS from TK ..he forwarded the MMS from Tia of Nandu performing "Dil Dewana"

Manik: Oh... thanks... this song... its her fav... (Manik says with teary eyes)... She performed it so many times... It tells her heart... It makes her smile...

Trilok: I leave now... I have to be at her place...

Manik: I can't thank you enough..

Trilok: I don't need thanks... just don't lose control... for her...

Manik: hmm...

Manik keeps playing the MMS...
Manik: Don't forgive me Nandini... don't stay away... please come and Punish me... Don't punish yourself...

He goes to the music room... He closes his eyes and remembers the 17 yr old innocent Nandu

" I will always shine for you, you will always be in my prayers and I'll always trust you" and then he remember the Nandini she met some days back

" I want to be free...I want the last return of our give and take relationship. But I FORGIVE YOU... because I want it... I forgive you even for making me the reason of my Ams heart attack"

Manik picks the guitar...He sings one of the songs that have been with him as hope

Nadaan Parinday (Naive Bird)

Play for Manik and feel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGsnlXivwT0

O Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja
O Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja
O Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja
Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja aa aa..

Kyun desh-bidesh phire maara
Kyun haal-behaal thaka haara
Kyun desh-bidesh phire maara
Tu raat-biraat ka banjara
O Nadan Parinde ghar aaja
Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja aa aa..
Naadan Parinde ghar aaja...
Sau dard badan pe phele hain
Har karam ke kapde mele hain

Kaate chahe jitna paro se hawao'n ko
Khud se naa bach paayega tu
Tod aasmaano ko
Phook de jahaano ko
Khud ko chhupa naa payega tu
Koi bhi le rasta, tu hai tu mein basta
Apne hi ghar aayega tu

O Nadaan ...
O Nadaan parindey ghar aaja
Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja aa aa..
Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja
Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja
Nadaan Parindey ghar aaja

Kaaga re kaaga re mori itni araj tose [kaaga=crow]
Chun chun khaaiyo maans
Kaaga re kaaga re mori itni araj tose
Chun chun khaaiyo maans

Arajiya re khaaiyo na tu naina more [Araj= Request]
Khaaiyon na tu naina mohe
Piya ke milan ki aas
Khaaiyon na tu naina more
Khaaiyon na tu naina mohe
Piya ke milan ki aas

O Nadaan ...
O Nadaan parindey ghar aaja
Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja... Ghar aaja aa aa..

Nadaan Parindey English Translation (As I found the song hard to get )

Oh Naive bird,return to your nest
Return back home
Return to your roots
Return to your self

Why do you miserably wander everywhere
Lost,tired in a tattered state
Why do you aimlessly roam all around
Like a nomad, lost in time.

O innocent bird, return to your nest
Return back home
Return to your roots
Return to your self...

My body is all wounds and sufferings
Every action of mine is maligned.

No matter how much you cut through and rise high in the air
You can't escape yourself...
Destroy the skies ,Set the whole universe on fire
Still you will not be able to hide yourself

No matter what path you choose
You reside in yourself
Ultimately you will return to yourself

O naive bird,return to your nest
Return back home
Return to your roots
Return to yourself...

Oh crow, I call upon you
Please listen to my small request
Peck and eat my body, my flesh as you desire...
But a small request...
Please let go off my two eyes
Please don't peck my eyes
I still hope to see my love...
I still hope to see myself
I still hope to see the lord

O nave bird, return to your nest...

He rememebers her "Manik if our paths crosses... everything between us should be normal... you are going to stop being impulsive"

Manik: I am coming to you Nandini... For fighting for my hope... for us ... I know now... Nothing in the world ... matters more than your happiness... I lived for your happiness... I can go to any extent for it... Even if I have to kill some... But I won't be impulsive as much as possible... I stopped believing in never So I won't say never...

But I hope... Hope to see you happy once again...

Precap...

Manik calls Cabir, Manik "Hello Cabir", Cabir gets another call waiting... Nandini calling too... he puts on conference... They say together... "Are you okay?"... Cabir say..."Yes my dear Mom and Dad"


...

No matter how much you cut through and rise high in the air
You can't escape yourself...
Destroy the skies ,Set the whole universe on fire
Still you will not be able to hide yourself

No matter what path you choose
You reside in yourself
Ultimately you will return to yourself

O naive bird,return to your nest
Return back home
Return to your roots
Return to yourself...

Ghaar aja...Ghaar aja...Ghaar aja...šŸ¤—



Edited by MaNanmatic_Sana - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mananmatic_Sana ... u made me cry 😭
Nandu's plight...Manik's despair... 😭 tooo emotional ...when will this hate track turn to love track ... hope...ummeed pe toh duniya kayam, hai... toh hum b !!!

pl do something...bring back the smiles to MANAN's lives 😳 so that we can also smile

waise abi cupid cabir agaya hai toh ...m sure u and he will keep us motivated to keep up the hopešŸ˜‰


Eagerly waiting for the next update 😳


-Mini
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm update
loved it
very nicely written
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oye tell me one thing how do u manage to write so well every time season 1 was fabulous n so much pain but dis season is making me to love u more as i m crying more really dear awesome dowsml updates take abow swety šŸ‘ love u so much dear n thnx for the pm

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