DhruNi SS: Steal ur GF!!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys, dnt get me wrong... i really love ManAn... but at heart i'm a DhruNi shipper...
For all my DhruNi fan frnds & others too...
I saw the whole series of Steal Ur GF on V n really luved the idea...

CS-
Nandini Moorthy: Sophia Coll's most favourite chick;
Dhruv: her silent lover since yrs;
Manik-Cabir-Dhruv-Abhimanyu : bros since birth
(Manik n Abhi r eldest, Dhruv the youngest & Cabir is the middle one);
Navya: Cabir's gf since 3 yrs;
DhruNi: know each other n r ok-ok friends;
Mukti-Nandini-Alya-Navya : best buds since kids;
MukBhi, MaLya, CavYa : Sophia Coll's most romantic couples...
Olive Green- Kashmera Shah *spl appearance*

Scroll down for Chap 1

hope u like it guys...
taniya

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chap 1-

All the people *barring Nandini* chilling in the canteen.
Dhruv: She knows I exist... she knows it not... she knows I exist... she knows it not... she knows I exist... *pause* SHE KNOWS IT NOT!!!!! NO YAAAR!!!!!!!
Manik: Arrey kya hua Dhruv? Subah-subah itna drama queen kyun ban raha hain???
Abhi: Exactly Dhruv! tujhe ho kya gaya hain?
Alya: Issey na... LOUVE ki bimaari lag gayi hain guys LOUVE ki!
Manik: Love ki bimaari? Aur woh bhi Dhruv ko???
Mukti *hitting Manik at the back*: Arrey nahi Manik! Love nahi louve. As in, L.O.U.V.E! LOUVE!!!
Manik: Ohhh... LOUVE!!!!!
Alya: haan... *quoting it wid fingers* LOUVE...
Cabir: mmm hmmm... aur phir? Whose the lucky chick???
Navya *sighs*: aur kaun ho sakti hain? Isski puraani item- Nandini.
Boys :*spitting out their coffee*: WHAT??? NANDINI???
Cabir: Tu abhi bhi Nandini se!!
Abhi: Chchee... mujhe toh tujhe apna bhai kehte huye sharma aa rahi hain dude!
Mukti: Awww!!! So sweet! This proves ki Dhruv, tera pyaar Nandini ke liye sacha hain!! Right Alya?
Alya: Bilkul. N waise, bhi *looking at the boys* tumhe KISI AIERE-GAIRE ko prove karne ki koi zarurat nahi hain ki tumhaare pyaar Nandini ke liye true hain ya nahi! N don't worry! Hum dono *pointing towds the girls* tumhe tumhaari "ultimate destination" tak zarur pahunchayenge!
Navya: Bang on!
Dhruv *giving the girls a grp hug* :mujhe maloom tha, ki KOI *boys* mera saath de ya naa de... meri bhabhi's toh mera saath zarur dengi!!! Thank u gurls..
Girls *looking at each other*: BHABHIS???
Dhruv: Aur nahi toh kya! Jab tum charo ki shaadi ho jaayegi ek doosre se... I mean, Manik bhai ki Alya se, Navya ki Cabir bhai se, aur Mukti ki Abhi bhai se... toh ho gayi na yeh meri bhabhis..."
Alya-Navya-Mukti & Manik-Cabir-Abhi blush at the mention of being life-partner of Manik/Cabir/Abhi n Alya/Navya/Mukti (respectively) n share an eye-lock (MA, CN & AM ka LLHH).
Dhruv ki nazar pehle to MA, CN n den AM ! Finally it struck him & he slapped his forehead in exasperation!
"Kaliyon ka chaman jab baanta hain..."
The song woke up all the four & then all of them started wondering ki yeh gaana kaha se baj raha hain! It was then they realized ki yeh gaana college canteen ke radio se baj raha tha. Dhruv ne dekha mauka aur maara chauka.
Dhruv: Abbey love-birds! Yaha meri love-life ki shuruwat hone se pehle hi the end hone jaa raha hain aur tum dono couples ek doosre ko goggle-waali look de rahe ho!!
The couples diverted their gaze towards Dhruv in shock n surprise.
Cabir: Arrey nahi nahi yaar! Hum sab ko teri parwah hain! haina guys?
All: haan yaar!! We care for u!!
Navya: Aur jaha tak Nandini ko teri gf banane ki aati hain toh...
Dhruv *goes into DhruNi-land*: Sir gf nahi... mein meri angel ko apni life-partner banana chahata hu... usske saath ek cute-si, pyaari-si, chchotti-si family start karna chahata hu... woh meri angel aur mein usska hero!
Manik: Aur tumhaari iss "cute, pyaari, chchotti" family main kitne log honge?
Dhruv *still in his land*: 4 log- mein, meri angel, meri cute-si princess jaisi beti & naughty-sa champ type beta!
Girls: Awww!!!! So cute!!!
Boys: I think I'm gonna be sick now!!
Dhruv *finally coming back to Earth after some tym*: Woh sab chchodo! Pehle mujhe yeh batao ki kya tum log meri help karoge ki nahi??
Mukti: Tere in bhaiyo ka toh pata nahi *pointing twds Manik-Abhi-Cabir* but hum girls apne iss Romeo ko uski Juliet dilwakar rahenge!
Manik: Haan toh phir, hum bhi kisi se kam nahi! Hum dono bhi tere saath hain!
Abhi: bas ek request...
Dhruv: kya?
Cabir: jab tum aur Nandini relationship main aa jaaoge na, PLS PLS PLS... HUMAARE *as in bros* SAAMNE USSEY PHONE PE BAT MAT KARNA!
Manik: I agree! Aur hum dono bhi inn se*as in girls* phone pe baat nahi karge!
Girls: WHAT????
Cabir: Arrey! What...what he means ki Dhruv ke saamne tum ladkiyo se baat nahi karenge! Par waise...
Couples: *blush* *blush* *luk-luk*
Dhruv *facepalming himself*: Innka kuch nahi ho sakta!!!
And then, he left the canteen n goes to the Music Room to reherse.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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ur story is really good bt sry to say I cant imagine manik and nandini with anyone else except them togethr...bt anyway nyc concept..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kya yaar guys...
284 views n 1 reply???
m i such a bad writer 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Why are u degrading ur self as the ss is really good but ya first in past I was a big fan of dhruni but now manan
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Posted: 10 years ago
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ur concept is nice dear...bt I wud jst suggest u to chng it to manan thn maybe ul get more viewerrs as nw evryone is manan obsessed..hope I didnt hurt u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@LoveAngelsimmy: thats my whole point! Forum main itne saare MN ffs, OSs etc dekhke bore ho chuki hu *not that I have any problems 😉*, n ky2 main bhi 1 sec ka dhruni scene 😭...
Dats y this... Taaki bhai, MN se thodi nazar shift karo aur mere n kaafiyo ke favs DN pe bhi thoda focus ho.
Edited by taniya_dostii - 10 years ago
Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsm start
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@Humzy I will... at least 3 pages tak toh jaane do

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