Manan OS - I Will Never Let You Go Manik

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Hello Hi everyone 🤗am back again.I know we are all kinda stressed about the current track and waiting for it to just get over 😉..And after yesterday's precap so many speculations and predictions are going on in our minds.So this OS is just a perception of how it could be 😳..Its based on precap of Nyonika handing over the expulsion letter to Nandu.


Manan OS - I Will Never Let You Go Manik


Nandini is distressed.She was searching the room for the past 15 mins in search of the earring but she couldn't find it.She folded her hands and looked up desperately 'Aiyappa pl let me find the earring.Its Manik's gift to me and i cant just lose it.Its too precious to me.Pl help me find it pls '

With a determination she began searching frantically again and suddenly as if her Aiyappa listened to her, she spotted something shiny beneath a cardboard of a big red shaped Heart.

She quickly went near to examine it and to her delight,it was her missing earring.Nandini looked up happily and uttered a quick 'Aiyappa thank u so much'.

She looked down at the earring fondly and lightly carrassed it.A single drop of tear fell down on her palm making her realize she was crying.Manik had bought this for her with so much love inspite of having to stay under ground for those 24 hrs.And look at what she did.She just tossed away the love and trust he had in her, with one stupid mistake of hers.

She felt foolish for falling for Nyonika's planned manipulation and guilty at herself for ever doubting him.Manik who loved and trusted her with all his heart hates her now.She knew its her fault and his is anger is justified.She was angry with herself for making her sweet Manik a Monster again.

She was so deep in her unhappy thoughts that she was startled when she felt a hand on her shoulder.Navya looked at her with concern in her eyes " Nandu kya hua? Kahan kho gaye ho? I have been calling your name for the past few mins.Is everything ok? tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho? "

Nandini looked up at her friend and gave her a half smile "Kuch nahi Navya i lost the earring earlier so i came to find it.Its Manik's gift " saying that she looked at the earring again with her eyes full of sorrow.

Navya hugged her "Hum samaj sakte hain.Dont worry everything will be ok.Tum dekhna Manik will come back to you soon "

Nandini wiped her tears and shook her head ruefully "Not this time.Woh mujhe kabhi maaf nahi karega.I failed him when he needed me the most and made him a monster again.Navya Its all my fault.I broke the trust he had in me"

Feeling her pain, Navya hugged her close again "Nandu tum hamesha kehti hai na to be strong and face the problems head on.Toh ab kya hua.You cant accept defeat like this.Tumhe apne pyaar ke liye lad na chahiye.And i will always be there for you "

Nandini smiled feeling better "You are right Navya i cant give up.Jo bhi hua mere waje se hi hua.I have to sort it out.I cant see Manik hurt and upset "

Navya smiled broadly " Yeh hui na baat.Ab chalo humare saath i feel hungry" Nandini chuckled at her friend's constant state of hunger and they both left for canteen.

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Nyonika sat on her desk and was in deep thoughts.Her mind replayed her earlier conversation with Manik on the corridor and the way he clutched the heart in his hands.Her eyes narrowed when she recollected the way he said with conviction that Nandini was saying the truth.

'I dont think you are over her yet Manik.That girl still has a strong hold of your heart.I cant let her come back to your life.I have to do something.As long as she is around you, there are all chances you will go back to her.And i wont let that happen.Ever ' she murmured to herself.Suddenly she found a solution.She dialed the intercom and said crisply"Ask Nandini to come and meet me in my office right now " She replaced the phone with a vindictive smile.'Now let me see how you will win Manik back Nandini '

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Nandini and Navya were just coming back from the canteen when an office boy came to them and told Nandini that Nyonika Mam wanted her to meet her in the office.

Nandini shared a puzzled look with Navya."Nyonika mam wanted to see me? " Office boy nodded and left.

She turned to Navya " Navya you carry on i will go meet her and come "

Navya shook her head " Nahi hum bhi tumhaare saath aa rahe hain.I will wait outside for you " Nandini nodded and together they went towards Nyonika's cabin.

When Nandini entered the cabin she had an eerie feeling that something bad is going to happen.She spotted Principal sir standing behind Nyonika Mam with a sad expression.

Feigning courage she wasnt really feeling she asked " Maam you wanted to see me? "

Nyonika shot her a smile full of venom "Yes i wanted to give this to you " she gave her an envelope.

Nandini opened the envelope with dread and her eyes widened in shock when she read the letter stating that she has been expelled.She looked at Nyonika in dismay " But Maam what have i done? "

Nyonika smiled again " Well you have done your part in fact more than what is required.I dont think we need you here anymore.So just pack your bags and leave Space academy right now "

"But Maam you cant expel me with no reason.I have a right to know on what basis am being expelled " She asked Nyonika while shooting a look at the principal hoping he will give some explanation.But he avoided looking at her.

Nyonika smiled " Really? No Nandini i dont have to give you any reason.Now stop wasting my time and leave.You are done " with a dismissive wave she turned and started scrolling through her mobile phone.

Nandini stood there for few minutes not knowing what to do.Then with a look of defeat she went out of the room.

Seeing Nandini's distressed expression, Navya quickly came to her " Nandini kya hua? Aur yeh kya hai " she took the paper from her hand and quickly read through it, her mouth dropping open in shock " Kya? You are expelled? But on what basis? How can they do this to you ? "

Nandini shook her head sadly, her eyes brimming with tears "Kuch explanation nahi diya.Nyonika maam just gave this letter to me and asked me to leave right away.Navya maine kuch bhi nahi kiya.Nyonika Maam did this deliberately "

Navya wiped her tears "Tum roh mat.Let us think what to do " Nandini shook her head " We cant do anything.She is not even ready to listen to me "

"Arey aise kaise? We cant let her do this to you.You brought me back to this college.Atleast they had a reason to expel me.Par tumne toh kuch bhi nahi kiya.This is unjust.Hum chup nahi rahenge" She began walking.

Nandini grabbed her hand " Navya where are you going? "

Navya looked at her as if she is crazy " Hum Manik ke paas jaa rahe hain.Maybe its his doing.Like last time, he is trying to expel you again.Because he is angry with you "

Nandini shook her head immediately " No Navya.Manik will never do that.This is all Nyonika Maam's decision.She wanted me out of Manik's life and now she is throwing me out of college"

Navya nodded soberly "You are right but phir bhi we have to speak to Manik.Maybe he can help you out of this.Woh baat kar sakta hai Maam se after all its his mother " just when they were talking Fab 5 was crossing the corridor.Without giving time for Nandini to react.Navya quickly called her friend Mukti's name and ran towards her.

Fab 5 stopped and while the rest of them looked at Navya confused, Manik's gaze automatically connected with Nandini.He quickly averted his gaze with an angry expression and started to walk away but stopped when he heard Navya speaking " Mukti i need your help.Nandini problem mei hai "

Manik found himself unable to move although he wanted to get far away from Nandini.The mere mention of her being in some problem pulled at his protective instincts and But he forced himself to walk forward although his steps were slow paced and his ears all tuned towards the conversation.

"Nandini? Kya hua ? " Cabir asked immediately while Nandini quickly ran upto them."Navya what are you doing? "she tried pulling Navya away but she shook her hands away.

"Nandini tum chup raho.Cabir Nyonika Maam has expelled Nandini "Navya said in a rush.Her eyes quickly darting towards Manik to see his reaction.She smiled to herself when he stopped mid stride.

"What?" Rest of the fab 5 chorused in shock."But why? " Dhruv asked looking at Nandini.

Nandini shook her head " I dont know she dint give me any reason "

Manik cant believe what he just heard.His ears roared and his fingers clenched in anger 'How dare you Nyonika ' he thought and quickly walked away.Nandini's face dropped in disappointment when Manik left without once glancing at her after hearing the news.Her heart ached in pain.

While Alya and Mukti remained quiet, Cabir and Dhruv began discussing ways to find a solution.All they can think about was Manik.But Nandini was adamant not to ask him.

"Cabir you cant ask Manik.He is angry with me and besides even if he wanted to help he would do so by compromising himself in someway to Nyonika Maam..I dont want him indebted to Nyonika Maam in any way.I can't do that to him.So let's just drop it.I will leave " Nandini said ruefully.

"But Nandini you cant just leave.Nandini wait -- " Cabir started but Nandini already walked away her heart heavy.

Manik on the other hand barged into Nyonika's room in anger "What the hell Nyonika ! How dare you expel Nandini from college? " he asked banging his hands on the table.

Nyonika calmly looked at him with her infamous smile " Really Manik? Wont you ever learn? I thought you are over that girl but i can see that's not the case.Anyways i dont have to explain my decision to you.This is my college i have every right to expel anyone i wish "

Manik gritted his teeth " Nyonika you are crossing your limits now.You already manipulated Nandini and created a rift between us.You won on that score because i let you win.I had my own reasons.But dont you for one minute think you can do anything to her and i will remain quiet.We might not be together but that does not mean i will let you hurt her "

Nyonika rolled her eyes " Manik listen to yourself.When have you started showing your emotions so strongly for someone? Well i dont care.Its done "

Manik looked her in the eye and said sharply but calmly " No its not.I want you to take her back to the college.I dont have to tell you what will happen if you dont do it.I can make all the power and status you so enjoy, disappear in just one call.Am sure you dont want me to do that.So just take her back "

Nyonika looked at him angrily and muttered " Fine.But let me see how long you will continue to have feelings for this poor nobody of a girl " she said sarcastically.

"Look who is talking.You were a nobody yourself until you met my dad.Let's not waste time by getting into the past.Just do it " With that he left the cabin leaving a stunned Nyonika behind who was gritting her teeth in anger.

*******

Manik was angrily coming outside the cabin when he collided with Nandini who was coming from the Principal office having signed the acceptance of expulsion letter.Instinctively he held Nandini to stop her from falling.They gazed at each other.While his eyes were angry, hers were looking at him with guilt and expectation.

Suddenly realizing he is holding her, he dropped his hands away.He turned to go but stopped.He spoke without turning around.His words were clipped "Nyonika is taking the expulsion back.You dont have to leave " with that he started moving but Nandini stopped him.

"Manik what did you do? I dont want you to owe anything to Nyonika Maam.It gives you pain and i can't see let it happen " She said trying to hold his hand.

Manik turned and smiled sarcastically " Really ? You are worried about Nyonika giving me pain.When you - " he stopped himself from saying the fact that she gave him more pain.He cant let her see how bad he is hurting inside because of her actions.He cant give that power to her.He then glared at her "Dont get the wrong idea just because i spoke to Nyonika to get you back.You and Me are over " with that departing sentence he walked away making Nandini's face and heart crumble in pain.

"I will never let you go Manik.I will somehow find a way to win back your trust.You and me are soul mates and i trust our love.You still care for me and i know that " with a determined look she wiped her tears.Whatever happens she firmly believe in her love for him.He will definitely come back to her.

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Ok so how is it guys? Not exactly a happy romantic OS i usually write but i wanted to write something about precap.Do share your views.😆 And yes Navya's character has lot of potential but not used properly.So ive showed her to be strong and supportive here for Nandu 😉




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..Chintu always I love your writing...and this time I love that u didn't change the story line and gave a happy ending...U just maintain the track between Manan,,,,seriously loved it...
hope seriously Manik will save Nandini from expulsion 😳😳
and Nandini will say to herself that she can't let him go and win his trust back...
coz
Manik
"If I was your girlfriend, I'd never let u go" 😆😆😆

love U chintu...a nice OS... 👏👏👏
Edited by Ireena7 - 10 years ago
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Yayyy..one more OS from My fav writer..and again u simply nailed it...Just love the OS like anything..you write it so beautifully...That Nyonika...chahe kuch bhi kar le Manik will not let Nandini go away from collage. He is hurt with his love but he can't stand anyone to hurt her...love the way you describe Manik state of mind...he will do anything for his Nandini yet he is not ready to accept her apology..Afterall she broke her trust..and now its Nandini's turn to win her love back..The talk between Manik and nyonika...very well describe..So true to the character..and I am sure show mein bhi aisa hi kuch hone wala hai..plz keep writing..Take care

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hayyee rabba u never leave a chance to impress me 😳🤗

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Choco, THIS, right here, THIS, happens on the show--today or tomorrow, whenever.

Even if it doesn't, come here for a hug🤗

You manufacture darn good OSs, choco Chintu! 👏

With this, WE (right gals?) prohibit you from being away from here for too long and order you to post an OS every once in a very short while😈

I be your fan.
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its beautiful aarti <3
keep writing

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its beautiful👏

n i can see something similar coming our way👍🏼
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Originally posted by: Rhea_13

its beautiful aarti <3

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Originally posted by: kresham

its beautiful👏

n i can see something similar coming our way👍🏼

Thank u dear 😳 i really hope to see something like this on show!
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Originally posted by: Ireena7

Wow..Chintu always I love your writing...and this time I love that u didn't change the story line and gave a happy ending...U just maintain the track between Manan,,,,seriously loved it...

hope seriously Manik will save Nandini from expulsion 😳😳
and Nandini will say to herself that she can't let him go and win his trust back...
coz
Manik
"If I was your girlfriend, I'd never let u go" 😆😆😆

love U chintu...a nice OS... 👏👏👏

thank u iru baby 😃
no doubt u wont let him go if you were his girl friend 😆 but no Kabab mei haddi 😡 he already has Nandini 😛

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