Manan : MERA DIL DIL.... ( PART 16 PG 74 ) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kresham


You know the situation after the episode na...n tmrw will b maha breakup then u know volcano aayega Forum me


ya i know ... kal aandhi , tufan, earthquake volcano eruption sab hoga forum me... i will update sooner okay ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awsum concept!! i know it iz ab OS bt if u can plz continue!! Loved it n thanks 4 d PM!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will update it soon... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: areshauchiha

wow awsum concept!! i know it iz ab OS bt if u can plz continue!! Loved it n thanks 4 d PM!!


Thankyou dear... yes i m continuing it ... and will PM you too... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kab update karogi ...
I can't wait yaar...
Pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sauju

Kab update karogi ...
I can't wait yaar...
Pls update soon


Sorry for the delay .. I am updating it in next post... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello people I am back with the second part of the Os ... basically I m linking it with today's episode and precap...

PART 2

It start with due to panditji clause nandini was back in college . Manik was angry and try every way to hurt her .. also the new guy was not there for past days and didn't know anything about Manan ... Nandini was always found practicing for the upcoming event and found dull with sadness in her eyes...

It was a new day Nandini was enterning in college campus wearing a beautiful pink chudidar suit... ... She was looking so beautiful .. everyone was seeing her ... she was dressed simple but yet looking like an angel

... the new guy saw her ( now I m naming him suyyash rai KYY me nahi to yahi entry krwa deti hu 😆) he was determined that he gonna talk to her today at any cost .. and seeing her today .. he can't control himself and went to nandini and stand in front of her ...



Suyash : Happy happy day miss... he said similing at her and he offer her the chocolate nandini was confused ..😕

Nandini : I don't know you and why are you offering me the chocolate...

Suyash : So sorry I am Suyash Rai ... and about this chocolate and me wishing is just because .. you look different today .. wearing an Indian outfit.. to mujhe lga aaj koi occasion hoga isliye..😊

Nandini was again confused 😕as how would this new guy whom she is seeing him for the first time knows about her dressing...

Nandini : How did you know .. I dress different today... you are new here right ??😕

Suyash : Well actually no... I came here 2 - 3 times and saw you.. actually I am panditji's student I came to meet him ... wait for him when he was taking your workshops... and today he call me here and was talking about the fusion event helding at SPACE...

Nandini: Ohh okay ... Hii I am Nandini Moorty nice to meet you ... so you are also classical singer ??

Suyash: Not actually I am more into rock and play guitar but love classical too.. and love to make fusion music... that's why panditji call me here... SO now when you know about me .. can you now tell me .. what's the occasion today ... he said smiling..

Nandini: Well its my birthday today ... she said half smiling because it was not much happy day for her as her manic was not with her...

Suyash : Happy birthday Miss Moorty .. hope all your wishes come true .. and your smile remain with you always... Saying this he offer her the chocolate again and at the same time manik saw them from far and stop in his track ..😊

Nandini while accepting it say thanks and smile...😊

Suyash : Waise I was stalking you ...

Nandini was shock and see him and said : What ???😲

Suyash : Are I was just joking...😊

Nandini smile 😊and said : Than its okay ... after a long time I smile thankyou ... ( manik who was seeing them from far was boiling in anger 😡seeing her smiling and talking to another guy... as he was pissed of he walked away from there )

Suyash : So shall we move .. you going for the workshop only na ..

Nandini : Actually .. I have to go to the library .. its still time for workshop to start ... you carry on I will meet you there.. okay bye ( she went from there after she went ..)

Suyash : O god what a beautiful voice she had ... I can sit and listen her all the time😛😊 ( he was saying it while ruffling his hairs ... someone came beside him while singing .. he has saw all scene happened and also listen ... and he was our new RJ BIRA ... )

Cabir : Jahan teri ye nazar hai meri jaan mujhe khabar hai ...😈 ( he sing and kept his hand on suyash shoulder)

Suyash : excuse me .. do I know you...😕 ( he said turning towards cabir)

Cabir: No you don't but I know you ... Hii I am cabir Nandini's friend ... and I just you to be away from her .. its for your betterment only...

Suyash: And why would I listen to you .. he said crossing his hands against his chest..😲

Cabir : Because kisi ki private property par nazar daalna achi baat nahi ... and jiski woh property hai he won't let you live if he found you doing this... tumhari jaan khatre mai hai 😈

Suyash : But I have seen her alone always ..😕

Cabir : It's a long story ...

Suyash : I have enough time to listen .. bring it on... ( Cabir than narrate him the story of Manan)

Suyash: So its story of beauty and the beast ... interesting ... so what you want from me... I lost her before I get her ...

Cabir: Well I want your help to bring them together ...

Suyash agree with him as he want her to smile .. and her smile lie with manik only...
Sorry guys I have to stop here only ... also sorry for the late update.. I had some health issues that's why can't update it on time... may be its boring sorry for it in advance... please share your views ... criticsm hearty welcome ... Have a nice day... 😊
Edited by sana_07 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
I am first interesting twist!👏 as usual kabir is d cupid!! Loved it n do look after urself n get well soon!! Loved it n thanks for d pm🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Private property

Ohho...😆😆😆nice update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kresham

Private property

Ohho...😆😆😆nice update


Ofcourse she is his private property from the starting 😆😆😆... jb spot thi tb to thi hi 😆... uske baad bhi .. he has reserved all the rights to treat her in everyway he want... aur agar koi dusra bich me aane ki koshish bhi krega to .. monster manik chodega thodi ...

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