Manan Three-Shot: I hate you, Final Part,Pg5

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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

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maanluvsgeet

@maanluvsgeet

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome dear...

Cabir is the hero of ur OS...love him.😳

Manik's realisation was bound to happen . Bt now wht he gonna do ?

Superb...👏

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AAVANI

@vani86

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

so so emotional ending...but i loved it...
awsome update...u penned it so perfectly ...the last quote...perfect saying...
pls do write more stories like this...u r really a blessed writer...take care...😊

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prishika

@prishika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

YOU are an ahhmazing storyteller!!!!!⭐️👏

Loved everything about the story !! and I wish you'd continue...pretty pleaaase...;)

🤗👍🏼

The portrayal of written emotions is so them!!

Good work!!!!

and my personal favorite was the saying you ended your story with. WORD!!! hit the nail on the head..so to speak!

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kresham

@kresham

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Ohh God this was scary...n u ended it...

Cabir was too good...God CV's show something like this plz...

Try to continue n give an awesome mangalore track...pretty please

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TheWhiteHole

@TheWhiteHole

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

perfect ending!!
Just perfect..?
Loved it to the core.. :)
and those last lines..aah..bang on! This!this is what manik needs to understand that it is always not about receiving in a relationship..infact it is about giving.
Loved it! Just loved it!
Would love to read more from you..
But this ending is just perfect.. All stories doesn't have happy endings..