Short Manan & Fab 5 - FF Part 18 New ( Updated Page 42)

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Hi All ,
I am writing a new Fanfic for you all. Hope you all read it and Enjoy.

A brief summary is as follows :

All Fab5 characters in nature are same as shown in KYY. Expect the following facts :

1. Cabir is not a gay.
2. Dhruv and Alya are dating from High school
3. Manik is single and has not dated anyone till date
4. Mukti is dating Harshad who is Alya's Brother . Harshad is a positive guy who is not into music but sports.
5. Space academy is not only into music but it encourages - Art , Sports, Science and Music.
6. Nandini is Cabir's sister

Other Characters :

Navya : Nandini's friend and in love with Cabir but doesnot have the guts to admit her love to him.

Storyline : Manik and Nandini in school. Manik 14 years old Nandini 12 years and they are best singers in the school. They have been selected to represent their school in the biggest competition of the country. They are the favorites to win the competition. On the stage during the performance Nandini donot sing. Manan loose the competition. 7 years later - Manik has his group Fab5 , Nandini is studying science . SHe is very quite and dresses up in a very simple way. Manik and Nandini hardly talk except exchanging pleasantries coz she is cabir's sister.

So what happened 7 years ago? why did the best singer Nandini failed everyone on d day? What about her singling talent? How will Manan come \close? etc etc.

So stay tuned.😛


Credit : IMAGE - CUTE -ALY
(Special Thanks to her)


PART 1 - page 1
PART 2 - page 1
PART 3 -page 3
PART 4 -page 5
PART 5 -page 6
PART 6 -page 8
PART 7 -page 10
PART 8 -page 11
PART 9 -page 13
PART 10 -page 15
PART 11 -page 16
PART 12 -page 18
PART 13 -page 21
PART 14 -page 23
PART 15 -page 27
PART 16 -page 35
PART 17 -page 39



Part 1

As usual Nandini is having the same Nightmare of the Night 7 years back when she could not sing on stage. Everyone was laughing at her. Her school students and teachers stood disappointed. But what pained her the most was Manik her friend standing disappointed next to her. He was so excited about the competition. He just wanted to win and he knew that no one can beat Manik and Nandini when they came together. He never looked up to see Nandini and the pain in her eyes.

Alarm bell rang and Nandini got up looking shocked. She was already late . She got up in hurry and went to Cabirs room who was fast Asleep.

Nandini : Bhai utho .. we r getting late for college.

Cabir : Nandini yaar sone de naa. Kal raat I came really late from Manik's party . Donot disturb.

N : OK bhai! I am cooking breakfast for you and going. I have a test today. You come whenever you want. Byee

Navya is her room before leaving for college praying with a rose in her hand.

Navya : Hey bhagwan , Aaaj mujhe itni himmat de dena ki mein yeh Rose Cabir ko de doon. Please god please.

Manik enters the college looking dashing as usual and driving his car in high speed. Nandini gets out of the Auto and Manik car almost crashes in her.

Manik gets down and sees it Nandini:

Manik : You are ok?

Nandini : Haan ...wo mein ( She doesnot look him into his eyes. Infact she has not since years. It's because she still feels guilty that Manik lost coz of her)

Manik ( looking uninterested as usual ) - Acha wo Cabir Kahaan hai.

Nandini : He is sleeping. Would come late

Manik leaves saying - Yeh cabir bhi Naa ...

He goes to the Practice Room and practice for 1 hour. Now the Fab 5 are together. Mukti was the last one to come . She always come late coz of her intense makeout sessions with Harshad. They are madly in love . Harshad is a great guy who always protects Mukti and she loves everything about him.

Mukti : Oh sorry Im late. Who Hashad ka basketball match chal raha tha...

Cabir : Haa who to hum Sabko pata hi hai ki tum dono ka daily kaunsa match chalta hai

All laugh and Mukti makes faces...

Mukti : Cabir...Zyaada kush mat ho.. Madhubala Dhoond rahi hai tujhe...Aaaj haath mein Red rose hai.

Cabir : Oh god...yeh Nadu ki friend Nahin hoti to mein iss kab ka thikane laga deta...Shit

Alya and Dhruv had a fight yesterday coz of some guy who was staring at Alya so they are not >talking and staring coldly at each other.

Mukti has realized it :

Mukti : Alya aur Dhruv tum dono ka aaj phir Shuru. Kyun itna Ladte ho yaar.

We now see a Handsome guy . He comes out of the swimming pool and takes a towel. He then picks up a photo and Says ... tumhe meine Dhoond hi liya - Ms. Nandini Murthy... I m coming for you with a Shy yet sexy smile.

He is none other than Abhimanyu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome.. Interesting storyline.. WAITIN TO KNW WHY MANAN LOST THE COMP..update soon...😆
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awsm concept
sounds very interesting
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superb start..sounds very interesting ..
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awsome...interesting story line...part 1 was amazing loved it...pls continue soon...take care😊
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Awesome first chp.. Loved it.. I hope to see jealous manik..abhii... I luv him.. Update the nxt prt soon😃
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awsome...interesting story line...amazing loved it...
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Part 2

Navya meets Nandini in Corridor

Nandini : Navya tum phir se Bhai ke liye flower le aayi...

Navya : Haan Nandu tum bhi uda lo mera Mazak. Koi mujhe nahin samajta

Nandini: Aww.. sweets mein tu bas aise hi tease kar rahin hoon. You love bhai soo much. Who so ever gets you would be the lucky person on this earth and I really wish its Bhai. Abhi use samajh nahin aata par dheere dheere realize karega.

Navya smiles in a shy way : I love you my Nandu. But you know what the man who will get you would be the luckiest one on this earth. Your heart is very precious. Par pata nahin kaun hai woh... and they both laugh...

In the music room. Everyone is pulling Maniks leg

Mukti : Manik tujhe Nahin lagta ki tujhe ab ek Girlfriend bana leni chahiye.. Matlab itne saalo mein tuhje koi pasand nahin aayi...

Cabir : Haan Manik. Waise tujhe ladkiyaan pasand bhi hain naa

They all laugh...

Manik : Cabir ke bachhe ...tu bahoot bol raha hai . Teri madhubala ke saath aisi setting karaunga ki bolna bhool jayega... Waise bhi Mere liye jo Ladki bani hai she would be very special ...I am sure I will meet her soon...

Cabir : Haan Zaroor! I hope saath mein who meri waali bhi le aye

All laugh...

Cabir : Acha Yaar ab mei Jaata hoon. Nandu madam ke saath jaana hain. I promised her that I will take her to Movie and shopping today. We have to spend some time together. Meri Iklauti behen hai who.

Everyone smile. All know how much Cabir loves Nandini.

Manik : Acha to saath mein Madhubala bhi hogi. Tu date par jaa raha hai Na ... Ha ha ha... Behen to bahana hai...

Cabir : Beta Manik tere bhi din aayenge bataunga tujhe mein.

Cabir and Nandini goes to watch movie and Navya also joins them

Nandini and Cabir talk when Navya had gone to buy Ice-cream for them

N: Bhai why are you so cold towards Navya. She really likes you .

C: Nandini , She is a good girl I know but I donot feel for her. How can I force myself to have feelings for someone.

N: Bhai ... I havenot met a better girl than Navya till now.

C: Haan teri best friend hain naa is liye bol rahi hai.

Navya comes in the meantime and she has brought a special ice cream for Cabir. Nandini notices it and laugh.

Manik calls Cabir : Hey cabir ... teri movie and shopping khatam ho gayi ho to ghar aaja lets party.

C: Manik I cannot leave Nandini alone everyday. Waise bhi mein roz ghar late jaata hoon

Manik : Acha ek kaam kar naa phir use bhi ghar le aa. She can stay here and do whatever she wants.

Cabir tells Nandini to come with him to aniks house. Nandini is Hesitant but Navya tells her that she too wants to go to Maniks house to spend time with Cabir.

Nandini agrees and somehow convinces Cabir to take Navya along with them

Edited by backwithabang - 10 years ago
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wow...loved it...awsome part...pls continue soon...😊
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amazing..loved it both parts..
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