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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Firstly thnx fr d pm... :)
N secondly.. dude i just love ur story gal... after all m getting jealous manik whom i just love like anything... i want more n more of jealous manik... n ya mananbir too pls...

So just continue wid it.. n update soon..

Awesome work... 😆

Love...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
Superb yar. ...loved the new story...ha ha nandu has the authority now...soha so helpless
U write brilliantly. ...Thanks
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Nice dear...update soon...it ll b gr8...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Wow...this was beautiful

yaha bhi jealous Manik...

yaar plz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35
awsome awsome awsome...please continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks a lot for reading guys. heres part 3. hope u like it.

Nandini was about to leave with Rohit and her brother is like Nandu u needs to finish Ur food and she's like I'll eat it later. Rohit is like no baby girl u needs to eat and she's like fine but u also need to eat Rohit. So Rohit joins everyone at the table. He asks abt fab5 and at the same time Nandini gets a call so she leaves. Nandini's brother explains to Rohit abt fab5 and he's like good luck guys. Coz its easier to impress bhai with the song. But it's really hard to impress baby girl. Then he said as long as Ur song is awesome u don't have to worry abt anything. I'm sure you'll get the deal. Nandini's brother is like u don't need to be scared as u guys have talents. Then Nandini came back and said bhai Mr. Sharma wants to finalize the deal with u. so her brother leaves. Nandini asks Rohit abt his trip and didn't give any attention to fab5. The Rohit gifts her a firefly charm, as he knows she loves fireflies.

Nandini gets happy and thanks him while Manik feel guilty as he broke all the promises he made to her. Then Rohit had to go somewhere urgently so he left. Then Nandini's brother comes and says that he needs to attend some party, as he needs to meet some clients so he leaves. And Mr. K also retires to his room. Everyone is just quite so Soha's is like Nandini how r u. its been long since we saw u. what happened to u. and u missed all the fun. U knows Manik and me are together now. Nandini got damn pissed so she ignores her and was abt to leave and the servant came and served her favorite desert. So Nandini sat down and started to eat her desert while Soha's like why isn't Nandini blasting out when I talk abt Manik.

As she's eating she gets a call. (in my story rishab is a medical center where they monitor his brain 24/7 so he has to stay there until he's better.)She answered the phone. And it was from the guy who looks after rishab. He said rishab is getting better which means he's going to be cured soon. Nandini screamed and started to jump up and down in happiness. She's like vinay (the name of the guy who looks after rishab) ur the best. I can't believe u finally did it. Do u have any idea how much u made me happy. And Manik is getting upset which was noticed by Cabir and Manik remembered the past.

Previous Part: Page 4

Next Part: Page 7


Edited by richarius - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Nice update dear,,,keep it up
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
omg this was soo amazing ... it never seems to be written by a first time writer ..u are amazing gal 👏👏👏
loved every bit of it ... soo well written ,...read in one go 😃

continue soon and possible PM me 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

thanks a lot 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nujhatt

Nice update dear,,,keep it up



thanks dear 😊

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