Their Happily Ever After - Page 17

Originally posted by: pankti1105

Hey chickee!! I just read the update all i have to do for you Is 👏 I am genrally a silent reader of this forum but today after reading ur update i just had to tell you that u r a awesome writer every time i finish reading ur update im craving to read more...please Update soon and incase you are going to send some secret Updates via pm then please pm me too too😉..pretty please😳

Thanks for the poster Chickee! Loved it😆

I loved the poster!!

Hi Chickee! 😊Before I start commenting on the story and the writing, I would like to share few thoughts of mine... So that my comments make lot more sense and you will understand it better from my PoV!!!😊When I read the first few sentences of part 1 and got to know this is about a separated Manik-Nandini, I wasn't keen on reading😳... I am not at all for separation and 8 years were too much for not moving on... I am for "living in the present" and not dwelling on the past or yearning for the future... Just being in the moment is what I believe in... 😛But I sure liked your expert style of writing and wanted to wait for the story to shape up before giving it a try😊... You should also know how I wished you had chosen some other way of presenting this duo without a separation like this... And the reason for the separation also wasn't to my likes...😊

Originally posted by: Senpoo

Hi Chickee! 😊Before I start commenting on the story and the writing, I would like to share few thoughts of mine... So that my comments make lot more sense and you will understand it better from my PoV!!!😊When I read the first few sentences of part 1 and got to know this is about a separated Manik-Nandini, I wasn't keen on reading😳... I am not at all for separation and 8 years were too much for not moving on... I am for "living in the present" and not dwelling on the past or yearning for the future... Just being in the moment is what I believe in... 😛But I sure liked your expert style of writing and wanted to wait for the story to shape up before giving it a try😊... You should also know how I wished you had chosen some other way of presenting this duo without a separation like this... And the reason for the separation also wasn't to my likes...😊

Wait, don't go yet!!! All that said... now I am here writing a page full of comments loving this SS/FF whatever it is!!!

Now after reading these 7 parts, I had forgotten the separation, the forced reason for their separation.. And what stands out in my mind is just their present moment ... Which is really going beautiful in your words and in my visual ... You made the flow very gripping and yes I am waiting to see this lovely couple's more beautiful moments of togetherness...

Keep them coming!!! 👏👏

This is very well written - Simple but flowing well. You know that if you do not give us some action 😉 😉 soon, we will flood this thread with virtual tears right? I, for one, want to see his reaction when he unveils the life size poster. Poor Nandini. 😆

i dont words to describe what i am feeling after reading all the parts of this OS.

Poor you Suup! Everyone keeps talking about the Poster. 🤣
It's like a person to me now🤣

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Poor you Suup! Everyone keeps talking about the Poster. 🤣
It's like a person to me now🤣