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kresham

@kresham

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Awesome yaaar...u wrote my heart out...excellent👏👏👏👏

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Ireena Zahan

@Ireena7

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: rits08

Thank you so much yaar... Im still trying to reach to level of you guys..bohot jaldi seekh jaungi n il improve😳

shut up damn it..you have written it so beautifully..and u wanna listen more praising words then I am ready to praise 😆😆😆

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Aliyagogoi

@Aliyagogoi

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

You have panned down the journey of Manik in his new path so correctly...it is as beautiful as our Manan..heart easing...please do write regularly,it is awesome...👏

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Priyanka Agrawal

@priyanka3677

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Well said, But Manik will always keep his friends up and Nandini will always ensure that he doesn't have to choose.

So yesterday she quit only because she didn't want Manik to choose when he was fumbling.

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Waaoo ritzz its amazing... the way u described manik changes was superb.. n that poem was outstanding...
awsum post

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

guess that is why friends often complain that ladki in dosti out 😉😆

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

awsome...so true...ur post was amazing...👏

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maanluvsgeet

@maanluvsgeet

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Nice written n throughly described...

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ek_nai_paheli

@ek_nai_paheli

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Very nice and so apt. How love changes a person for the better. She is truly his shining star and the one to make his heart beat a little too fast. So new to these emotions that he does not know how to deal with them. And she though feisty also manages to calm him down. And he is her knight in shining armour always there to protect her to keep her safe from the evils of this world.

But I just want Nandini to be a little less reserved. Yes he knows she cares for him but just that little affection just like he does would also make him understand that she also cares for him the way he does. That the feeling is mutual. just my thinking! If once in a while she would take the initiative and make him feel loved. Maybe just a spontaneous hug? Or even hold his hand? He would be so blown off and that would be truly be something. A moment in KY2. Because if I am not wrong, she hasn't done that has she?