OS: Chalk and Cheese(last part updated)

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Forever19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: manan_flab
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Tum ro kyu rahi ho😕??..What happened?!!

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SehrMemon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Wao tht was just awesome ... Every part manik and his failed kisses ... Nandini and his ayiapa complaints and most of all the way ayiapa talked pouted loved it well done good job u should right more 👏 😛

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ForeverForU

@ForeverForU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

This is pure awesomeness

How I wish to see these things in the show too..this manan are too cute to handle

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Foram

@foram.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

this was so so so.cute...
Ayappa part was 😆
and loved everything u wrote...
long calls.. bike ride... keeping their dislikes away just for the other... and finally that kissmiss... hehe poor manik :p

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Senpoo

@Senpoo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Lovely! Manik-Nandini have been cute and adorable onscreen.. And here they are cuteness redefined!!! I just love Nandini here who is more open and wanting too! 😉😳 I hope our dear Nandu does something onscreen too to exhibit her needs of passion for Manik too! 😳☺️

Aiyappa's counteraction and crosstalks are superb!!! 👏👏Just love him for what he is in your OS!!!🤣 You have just created a lovable character out of him which was already loved in the form of Nandini's words!! Now Manik has to make his deal with aiyappa or else aiyappa will... 😆😆🤣

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kavya

@kavya.b

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

This is good
I had so much fun reading it
Loved aiyappa's side commentary!!

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minizz

@minizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

This was so cute and funny.Though Manik and Nandini were adorable Aiyyappa's special appearance stole the show😛

Good job👏

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1012214

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

awww... that was so damn cute i really love it❤️

The best part:

Up from the heaven Lord Aiyappa laughed at sulking manik.."I will fail your every attempt till you confess your love..I can't handle your girl's complaints for a life time!!"..

🤣 Brilliant!👏

i don't usually read OS, but yours was definitely worth reading.👍🏼🤗