well i have smthing to say
usually i skip such stories where soha enters n don't read until shez gone
i just can't stand wid her
but ur story is diff
u introduced soha here very well
i extremely hate her alot a lot means a lottt
but here i don't hate her
cause shez nowhere at fault
manik sleeps wid her,makes her sit on his lap,placing hands on her thighs,talks to her,kisses her ,dances with her at his own accord
n being a chipku girl she enjoys it so if suddenly there comes any other girl thn its ovio to be bad n wick
so m not hating soha at all shez r8 in her place
n about manik well 1st 1st i thought hez good just had a shitty childhood but now i have nthng to say wht is he only knws he n u so basically nandu is the girl who have to step back
i think in ur story nandu is mature enough to handle these things i knw its difficult but she has to everything is happening infront of her eyes i think shez wise enough to sense this n maintained distance wid manik
i knw u have a beautiful storyline in ur mind n i trust u
so m sure nandu won't forget it n won't give him an apology
she has to be strong for her sake n for her life or else maybe she will be shattered n broken
completely my pov if i hurt u m so sorry
i liked the chapter very much n i just commented
if it hurts u m again sorry
thnx for the pm
update soon
stay blessed